Strange Dominator

The introduction is very attractive to me, but what the hell is the update 25 days ago? Has the eunuch been abolished? Does it look good?

I just looked at the first few pictures and saw that the protagonist cannot control the person who gets the page. . . I think it's better to add some effective control methods. . . Otherwise, just relying on scaring would feel a bit frivolous.

Generally speaking, it emphasizes too much that you are a god. No pretense. Looks boring. I can't stand it when you write it like this

The narrative is a bit too scattered... A few strokes here and there...

It's too immature, both in thinking and writing. The only advice I can give is to keep writing, no matter what, and then summarize the results. Come on, if you can persist, I will look forward to your second book

The protagonist is said to be a god, but he doesn't look like a god at all. He doesn't even have the consciousness of being a god. As a god, you should leave your subordinates alone and let them develop, instead of over-interfering. Over-intervention will show that you are not a god standing high, but a person who wants to ask for others.

The protagonist is such a loser. How much mental power can he detect within a range of 20 kilometers? Can't you develop other abilities yourself? ? ? Do you want to develop offline and interact with people? ? ? You just need to publish the task in the minds of everyone in the car! Whoever completes the task will become a believer in God and grant him strength!

How should I put it, it feels like I've read more than thirty chapters. The front is quite interesting, the various layouts and controls are quite good. But after the appearance of the ghost market, the plot felt very boring. People say things are extraordinary, but they don't feel extraordinary at all. How should I put it? It's too ordinary. Both in terms of wisdom and force, they are more like ordinary people. Also, the protagonist has been promoted to the person behind the scenes, and he can't really show up without appearing. The main joy of the behind-the-scenes flow is the moment the protagonist appears. Everything the characters do is to cooperate with the protagonist's appearance. But in the book, except for a few lines about the protagonist, the main character can't even be seen, so it doesn't look good. Brother, what we are playing is a behind-the-scenes stream, not a never-appearing stream.

Come on, author! Give you a recommendation vote. Just stick to it. Support you. 👍👍👍

People who have always emphasized that they are gods but also set up this world know that gods are extraordinary creatures or extraordinary people pretending to be? Is there something wrong with this logic? If you were to write a funny story about a naive protagonist being crazily stabbed in the back by a clever contractor, I think it would be quite comical. But pretending to be the mastermind behind the scenes, and then being seen through by the contractor at the beginning, I really don't understand why it's written like this?

This book is good. 10-Year bookworm guarantee

I am a god in one mouthful, but in fact I am a cripple who cannot control objects with my thoughts. I am really suffering from the second disease.

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The description of the protagonist and supporting characters seems too embarrassing, which is a shame for such a good subject matter.

I thought my writing was okay, but suddenly I stopped writing? ?

Fashion value and contempt chain are the driving force for human progress. Author, do you dare to write a character with lower fashion value? Compared with the protagonist, the others have become ordinary people, normal people. And because the other people are normal people, the protagonist seems to be getting lower and lower. When readers read the novel, they get involved with the protagonist, and then discover that the author has written the protagonist as a killer who rolls underground every day. With only half a kilogram of cement, he can play for a whole afternoon. He is the brightest boy in the square. Who do you think will be happy?

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