Dungeon at Home

I have read it a lot, and here is my personal opinion First, there is basically no tension in the whole book. It feels like playing games to me, so download the book! But this book is not set up to play games! This book is obviously similar to spiritual energy recovery! The whole article talks about the high mortality rate of adventurers many times! But it didn't show up at all in the character's image! To put it bluntly, this profession means making a living with your head hanging from your waistband! I would like to ask all the readers and writers here, which of your parents approves of you becoming mercenaries to fight in the Middle East? Also, suppose you were fighting as a mercenary in the Middle East. What was your daily life like? What was on your mind then? After thinking about it I believe you can understand why I bring this up! Second, there are always some inexplicable plots in the article! For example, the female anchor with chuunibyou appeared during the first demon wave. The protagonist spent 2,000 yuan to get a WeChat account, but then there was no special plot after that? Wouldn't it be great if you had two thousand yuan to buy potions and equipment? (This is written by the author himself!) Later, the protagonist takes ordinary people to the book and hunts down internationally wanted criminals. What kind of operation is this? Chasing a wanted criminal with unknown strength among the monsters, I think the protagonist is too tired by himself! Why should he bring an oil bottle? Someone in the comment area asked the author why the protagonist does not develop in the dungeon at home, but wanders around. The author's explanation is that he is not strong enough! So you can just take a newbie who just created an account and play the 1000-point peak game? Also in Chapter 42, the protagonist gets rid of the wanted criminal and is caught by the police. The conversation with the police in the police station is also very strange. Doesn't it mean that there are already various complete rules and regulations? The equipment on the protagonist's body is invisible, and the protagonist's adventurer ID card is useless! Why are there so many dialogues where you don't trust the protagonist! In this case, shouldn't we just take the protagonist back to the police station and prove his identity? Will he be taken back to the police station for questioning after he comes out of the book in the name of carrying controlled knives? Third, some settings are amazing! For example, the wormhole dungeon in the city where the protagonist is located is really a public toilet with security guards! Can ordinary people sneak around? For example, those who want to have some excitement, such as those wanted criminals! Is something like a dungeon that can change the world so casual? If you don't understand, let's take a look at the Nine-Star Poisonous Milk and see how people deal with this setting in the book! The last one is just a guess on my part. The protagonist seems to be forming a team, right? From the protagonist's several inexplicable virginal behaviors, I saw them as the protagonist's behavior of finding teammates for himself, so I did not complain about those several virginal behaviors. But if it is really to match the protagonist with teammates, I am not optimistic about this setting. First of all, the protagonist has his own exclusive dungeon. If others know about this in the future and cannot handle it well, it will be a huge poisonous point. Secondly, the system on the protagonist's mobile phone basically determines that the protagonist can become an all-round player and is not suitable for teaming up. If you form a team, it will be completely unnecessary. Inexplicably, other ordinary players cannot keep up with the protagonist! If you keep up, then many readers will definitely not buy one. After all, the protagonist is so awesome because of the protagonist, why should others! The above is my own feeling after watching it. It is purely based on my own feelings, which is my personal feeling after watching it! The main purpose is to let you, the author, know what readers find uncomfortable after reading your book! The good thing is, I really like this setting, except for the things I mentioned, at least it's fine for now! I will continue to pursue it. How far I can pursue it all depends on what I write later! Finally, I feel like you are in the wrong area!

I couldn't bear it any longer and read Chapter 40 I have no abilities. If I don't fight monsters to make money and upgrade, I'm just meddling in other people's business. It doesn't matter which one is in the training class. A person who wants to kill himself with a gun, and may kill himself, is almost free to help. For two people whom I have only known for a short time, I have to shoulder a potentially fatal task once a month and waste my upgrade time. For a person who I have no ability and could have become stronger, for two people who I have only just met and don't know what their psyche is like, I can help for free and risk my own life. I think this is not something a normal person can do.

Ah, I lost a few collections today, which makes me feel a little sad, but it doesn't matter. I still need to update!

I sincerely hope that book friends can vote for recommendation! Please! The humble author is asking for votes online!

The protagonist is too much a virgin. The plot is also very confusing. Mr. Hong used threats and inducements, but it turned out that for the sake of his granddaughter, the protagonist put aside the past and went to help. The man named Sun was an acquaintance and went out of his way to help. Those women are even more outrageous. They are just simple friendships, and the protagonist has all kinds of worries and negative opinions.

The protagonist is a bit of a virgin, with an unpleasant personality. He is treated like this by a gangster boss, and yet he is promised such a precious professional certificate. He also treats a female student the same way, even though they were not on good terms with each other, he was still promised to be given a professional certificate. When I saw this, I suddenly couldn't stand it anymore. It was a bit poisonous.

I feel that the writing style is petty and petty, including training for the protagonist, Chen Jie failed to get people to frame him, and the guy surnamed Zhang in Li Yun's team made enemies everywhere. I was confused about the protagonist's assessment later, and I really didn't know what assessment to write! Ordinary people have no contact with dungeons, they just go to institutions to take classes, and then go to dungeons to take exams with real swords and guns? Firstly, it is not smooth to watch, and secondly, it is not smooth to watch!

After reading Chapter 27, many plots, many dialogues, and many character descriptions are not logical. There is no need to give examples. The basic supporting characters all behave like nt. If not, whoever meets others will be yin and yang weird at the first meeting. If not, who will use threats when inviting others. It is not unreasonable to see people angry. This is completely because the author has nothing to do with the character. Think about it, how can you write a good protagonist if you can't write supporting characters well? The plot of the protagonist wanting to help the little girl is because the author wants to show that the protagonist is a good person. The key is that this is too illogical. Everyone has a temper, let alone an adventurer with a sharp knife. Although it is impossible for any normal person to directly carry away everyone present, they will basically turn around and leave. Who cares what your difficulties are. I hope that the author can think carefully about it when writing a book in the future. You can't blame readers for not subscribing. If you don't write well, who will subscribe to you? If it is not well written, no one will read the pirated version.

As one of the top ten in the world, it took less than 100 people to pass the exam in the Magic City in three years. This is still a national exam, so how many can the country pass in three years? And the underground city has only been around for ten years, and the magic city has only been around three hundred times in three years. Are there a thousand people in the country who have actually passed the assessment? There are thousands of regular adventurers in the country. . . How come the protagonist is surrounded by adventurers when he gets off the station? There is also a city where only adventurers can buy and sell. Not to mention how many regular adventurer shops there are, there is also a black market! This store has dozens of times more customers! How do they keep these stores open? Assuming that a store is visited ten times a day, each adventurer has to visit hundreds or thousands of stores every day to ensure that every store has customers every day! And you will definitely not make any money even if you only come ten times. And we don't know how many of these thousands of people have died.

The first and second chapters were okay, but the third chapter was inexplicable. As long as you can gain power and eat shit, people will grab it. I can't understand the author's point that no one wants to be an adventurer.