Dungeon at Home

I've seen quite a few, this is just my personal opinion. First, the entire book lacks tension. It felt like playing a video game, just another quick read! But this book isn't set in a video game! It's clearly more like a story about the revival of spiritual energy!

I couldn't take it anymore and read up to chapter 40. He has no skills whatsoever, instead of focusing on leveling up and earning money, he meddles in other people's business. He's even helping someone with a gun, someone who might kill him, almost for free. For two people he's only recently met, he's taking on potentially fatal monthly missions, wasting his own leveling time.

Ah, I lost a few favorites today; it hurts a little, but it's okay, I'll still update!

I sincerely hope my fellow readers can vote for this book! Please! This humble author is begging for votes!

The protagonist is overly saintly. The plot is also terrible. Master Hong uses coercion and bribery, and then, for the sake of his granddaughter, the protagonist forgives his past and helps. This guy surnamed Sun, a mere acquaintance, goes to great lengths to help. The women are even more outrageous; they're just casual friends, yet the protagonist goes to great lengths to help them.

The protagonist is a bit of a saint; his personality isn't likable. He was treated so badly by the old gangster, yet he still promised to give her such a valuable professional certificate. And the same goes for his treatment of the female trainee—even though their relationship wasn't great, he still agreed to give her the certificate. Seeing this, I suddenly couldn't bear to watch anymore; it's a bit toxic.

The writing style felt petty and small-minded. It included the protagonist's training, Chen Jie's failed attempt to recruit people and his subsequent framing, and the Zhang guy in Li Yun's team making enemies everywhere. I was completely confused about the protagonist's assessment later on; I really didn't know what kind of assessment it was!

Having read up to chapter 27, many plot points, dialogues, and character descriptions are illogical. I don't even need examples; the supporting characters' behavior is basically incompetent. If they weren't incompetent, why would they be so sarcastic and unfriendly upon first meeting someone? Why would someone invite someone with threats? It's infuriating, and there's a reason for it.

As one of the top ten in the world, Shanghai only had less than 100 people pass the exam in three years. And this is a national exam. How many people can pass it nationwide in three years? Dungeon Fighter Online has only been around for ten years. Shanghai only had 300 people pass it in three years. Are there really 1,000 people nationwide who have actually passed the exam?

The first two chapters were alright, but the third chapter just went inexplicably. It's like people would fight over anything, even shit, just for the chance to gain power. I can't understand the author's idea that nobody wants to be an adventurer.