Analyze Everything from the Red Pupil

It's so fancy that I didn't understand it after reading 10 chapters.

Originally the plot was okay, but as soon as Night Raid came out, the protagonist turned into a licking dog. After being in the underground forces for such a long time, he didn't have the temperament of a boss. When faced with the Night Raid members who offended him, his first reaction was to give in and give in. And Ma Yin, who was causing trouble for him, not only did he not solve her, but he even went up to the pole to lick her... From this, you can see that the author is a real licking dog.

The author writes too hastily, and the plot has no foreshadowing at all. The male protagonist was at the auction one second, but the next second he was killing poisonous scorpions without knowing what the main plot was. The original plot is also not obvious enough.

Drive high and go low, the protagonist has a plug-in system and a Teigu, and then after a few years of experience and return to the imperial capital, any cat or dog can be evenly matched with the protagonist. This practice of pretending to be a pig and eating the tiger is really disgusting, and he still doesn't use the Teigu 😅

It took Goldfinger six years to become stronger, but he still can't become invincible? It stands to reason that the protagonist has been killing monsters and leveling up. If he stands and lets Esdeath chop him, he is probably at a level where he can't even chop him.

The protagonist's IQ is worrisome. If there is such an invincible plug-in, don't farm dangerous species for two years, and then push it flatly. But he went to the imperial capital to work as a lurker and a coward. It was so uncomfortable to watch. Do they all like self-abuse so much?

And after reading twenty or thirty chapters, I thought I was talking about dog licking or something, so just go to the dark room and don't mislead others there.

The plot makes no sense at all and can absorb the personality of a dangerous species. Strengthen yourself. So weak. Inexplicably, it disappeared in six years.

Although I didn't read it, I did read the introduction Chitong was not dead in the first place!

It was already invincible. But the author suppressed it. Forced writing is weak. . .

When I saw the silver-haired girl, I persuaded me to quit. Do you dare to write this routine a little older?

I was a bit confused watching it, not knowing what the protagonist was doing, and I also felt that the protagonist was a bit weak.

Although I am a cold warrior, when I met the silver-haired girl who was auctioned at the auction, I was still a gentle and kind big brother😳😳😳 Then the silver-haired girl also has the magical power to cause problems with my golden finger with just one hair😳😳😳 lol

The author writes very well, a very good fanfic of Zhan Chitong.

I'm here to read fan fiction, but what's the difference between this and original work?

Those who can write original plots will definitely be supported, but the first few dozen chapters have no characters or plots from the original work at all. Most of them are based on the name of your book. But your subject is Zhutian, and Zhanmei is just the first world. If it is excessive, it is best to finish it in 40 to 60 chapters. After all, it is the first world (normally within 40 chapters). If it is the main world, go to other worlds as soon as possible after analyzing the demon essence!

Halfway through the movie, I arrived at the Imperial City and had no idea what the protagonist was going to do. It's a pity.

Good fan fiction has been transformed by the author into the urban novels of a few years ago.

If you are really a licker, can you be forgiven as long as you are an original character? This is not licking a dog, it's licking someone's face. There are plug-ins and Teigu, so good? Mix🐷Intentionally or accidentally?

It's so painful to watch. . . . . . . . .

I followed this book when it first started with tens of thousands of words, but then I gave up because it was too slow. Now that I'm reading it, it's finished...

I read Chapter 90 and can't stand it anymore. There is no main plot. The protagonist's actions are not logical and he pretends to be profound. It's very messy and messy. The combat power system is also unclear and it feels like he is strong and weak. There are also a lot of unreasonable things. For example, why should Ila be saved just because of Bai Mao? The author didn't explain anything, but since it's like this now, he has no interest in following up.

It's a very good book. It may seem boring at first, but it becomes very interesting later on.

There is no foreshadowing, the plot feels very jumpy, uncomfortable to watch, and all kinds of abruptness.

Finally found a fan fiction about Crimson Eyes

Strange, why don't you go to Creation? The author is very suitable for creation literature. You can become a god in this book of Creation. At the starting point, it is nothing. I would like to give you some advice. You can go to Creation Development.

Author, where have you been? Author, it's very interesting 😭, I want to see the follow-up, I like this kind of anime fan fiction with third-party intervention instead of directly soul-piercing the protagonist, and the fan fiction is originally to make up for the regrets of the original work, how can someone say it's a licking dog, really just learn a word and start using it randomly

Exist? Why use my wife as the cover?

Do you write math problems at work? All answers? ? Did I miss the original equation? ? ?