Causing Trouble While Surviving in the Wilderness

The male protagonist is really disgusting. This is the first time I have seen a male protagonist who can make people sick. The female protagonist is very real, but the male protagonist is really rubbish.

I don't know what's going on, but I feel very unhappy. Pretending to be a pig and eating a tiger should not be the rhythm of Internet writing. It's fun to keep pretending and slapping people in the face so that readers don't run away.

I originally wanted to spray it, but after reading the book friend, he said everything I wanted to say, and I felt comfortable.

The book review successfully persuaded me to quit, don't blame me, read it yourself

It took me 100 chapters to develop into La Shou? You are so vicious, do you want a man and a woman to live a sexless life in the wilderness? Have you ever experienced sex? Two people live together every night. Do you understand what sex is?

After reading it, I felt that the overall rhythm and style of the book was good, making people laugh, and relaxed and enjoyable. But compared to the advantages, the shortcomings are too prominent. Poison point 1: There is a big problem with the image of the protagonist in the early stage. The heroine is lazy and lazy, and this image lasts too long. Although explanations will be given later, it is very likely that some book lovers will be persuaded to leave. Poison point 2: The character image is not full enough. For example, Xinyou lacks an eye-catching or distinctive character trait. Poison point 3: The plot is slightly confusing. There is insufficient foreshadowing in the early stage, and the foreshadowing that appears in the middle of the article seems vague and confusing. In summary, I still hope that the author will make appropriate revisions to the first dozen chapters. I have little talent and little knowledge, so don't criticize me if you don't like it.

After reading the previous dozens of chapters, the male protagonist is shaped like an NT. I don't know what to think.

What is the relationship between the author and Qidian editor? I have seen this book many times on the Daily Guide. I have read more than ten or twenty chapters, and I feel that it is not only poisonous but also poisonous.

After reading the first few chapters, I could barely read it, but after more than 20 chapters, I really couldn't read it anymore. Relaxed but not relaxed, sweet but not sweet, funny but not funny, and even grabbed things under the camera to engage in bullying, so poisonous...

To be honest, it's really addictive. I don't know what happens next, but I couldn't stand it after reading Chapter 10. Don't tell me that I just traveled through time and my physical condition is not good enough so I can only sleep. Isn't it nice to not play with mobile phones and computers before recording the show? Why didn't I sleep at that time? I didn't think there was any machismo. The male protagonist should do everything, but he should do what he can, right? Are you so useless that you will die if you take even two steps? You are like a piece of trash, dominating others, why should you treat her as a training exercise? You are really awesome.