Embers of Confusion

[Book Review] The plot is compact, the writing is solid, and the characters are full-bodied [Advantages] The writing is excellent, the atmosphere is created well, the characters are accurately portrayed, and the plot has a three-dimensional unfolding feeling [Disadvantages] The paragraphs should be concise, readers are impatient, and avoid concentrating on large paragraphs. There is still room for improvement in the atmosphere and writing style. It is recommended to learn from "Mysterious Resurrection" [Evaluation] B [Remarks] I hope it is helpful to the author. If you don't like it, please don't criticize it. If you like it, please improve it.

Well written. I like the smart, cute and calm Wei Mian, the sadness he hides, the equally smart, cute Xiao Bai, and Xiao Bai's understanding of the male protagonist. Come on, I hope you become a god with one book.

This is Qingxian (words), I am very happy that all book friends can read my works. You can tell me any good or bad suggestions and comments. I like the good ones, and I selectively filter out the bad ones (of course I will still read them). If you have friends who want to be a part-timer, you are welcome to follow us downstairs. There is currently no book club. I hope there will be more friends who can read books. Finally, I wish I could become a god with my book hhh!

I'm bored today, so I don't have many updates from short authors, so I'm going to write a book review. The male protagonist Weimian has a sinister personality. He pretends to be a cute child in front of others. He is extremely confident, extremely smart, extremely calm (cold), and hides his true feelings. Even if it is the first time to face a murderous ghost, he can still escape death through his own IQ. When facing the ghost in red, he can still talk calmly and calmly. The overall IQ of the character is online. Neither the male protagonist's father nor other supporting characters are portrayed in a facial expression. It can be said that it is great to introduce deep things in the early stage to arouse readers' interest in reading. If there is no female protagonist, there is a high probability that the male protagonist will act like an egoist. However, the subsequent appearance of the female protagonist is like the sunshine in spring, which dissolves the emotions that the male protagonist had hidden until his mother died, making the male protagonist more humane when he is not in front of others. As for the female protagonist, she has a cute personality in the front (of course she is also cute in the back, but mainly in front of the male protagonist) and simple. In the back, she becomes very powerful after the first layer of memory is restored. Not to mention smart, at least she can share the pressure of the male protagonist when facing danger, and can help the male protagonist to a great extent. She can be said to be a good wife. So far, I haven't found many flaws in the plot, but because there is no villain with an IQ that matches the male protagonist, I feel that it is still unfulfilled. So update quickly, asshole. !

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