The Arrival of the God from the Heroic Company

Well written, I hope it is a super fan with patriotic feelings instead of a brainless stallion

This, you see, it is still an extremely old-fashioned pretentious article... Be careful before entering.

Author, let me share some personal opinions, that is, you want to write the protagonist to be very strong and patriotic. There is basically only one formula for this kind of invincible novel. It is to show off and slap in the face, which is difficult to retain people. Then, you have a bad start and are very dissatisfied. You know the second grade, you are already a god, why are you still such a second grade? You can't update it yourself with 80,000 words and 300 collections, right? You have to go with the writing process. If it's too invincible, you won't write it at all, and you can't continue writing it. For example, if the protagonist can destroy the entire universe at the beginning, then he is very patriotic. With a big move, the enemies are gone and the earth is protected, so there is no need to write it. But if the protagonist doesn't do that, and you write that many ordinary people died because of the interstellar invasion war, and because these protagonists are angry, then basically just persuade them to quit. You know, some fan fiction is not suitable for writing invincible stories. You might as well just write your own book, write about the protagonist being reborn, and then slowly becoming stronger. You can write a lot, your writing skills are not bad, and you can achieve results if you write seriously. I see the shadow of my past in you, and I want to give you some suggestions. I don't know if you will read it. I only read a few chapters and couldn't stand it anymore. There are many ways to persuade people to quit, which is to forcibly highlight the power of the protagonist, threaten the system, and the system is afraid of the protagonist. These can basically persuade people to quit. Being able to see the last one, I think very few. Just my personal opinion, don't comment if you don't like it.

Come in confused, go out confused

The first four pictures were written fine, but then they fell apart.

It's pretty good. I hope it doesn't collapse in the future. I've watched the anime Hero Soldier Company and I'm looking forward to its future development.

It's very exciting, I hope it won't be discontinued.

Don't come here if you are an old bookworm, it is suitable for adolescents.