Go to the Fairyland

Let's make a long review. Come to advertise my book singles. Have you given me any flowers? I've finished reading the book, let's talk about it. First of all, the time-based Golden Finger is very cliché, it was written ten years ago, but you can still read it as long as it is well written. Qi training, foundation building, liquid condensation, golden elixir, Yuanying, and god transformation, it seems to be this upgrade system. There's nothing to complain about, it's pretty much the same. Being beaten at the beginning, foundation building can't beat Qi training, and if you don't handle it well, it will be a poisonous point. What you write in your article is that the main upgrade ignores the cultivation of attack methods, but your explanation is too light. Shouldn't you just complain about the scum of your predecessor after time travel to avoid readers' attention? What you said in your article can only be considered as barely passing. Then the spiritual stone exchange for time is not rigorous, man, are you replacing it with all low-grade products? The gold finger requires two settings. You can only change it once a year at first, but you can't change it at any time, you can change it every day. You can start by setting it once a year, and then set it to find some genius treasures, upgrade the map, and then control it to half a year, and then three months. As long as you have spiritual stones, you can change the gold finger at any time. This not only expands the content and plot, but also prevents the golden finger from being too open and crashing. The current plot is a big competition within the sect, fight back and get slapped in the face, then make friends with rich people, continue to practice, and then discover hidden dangers within the sect. We need to think carefully about the slap-in-the-face plot now. The supporting characters are too brainless and it is a drawback. You won by using shameless and no-limits techniques and becoming proficient in fighting. The method is OK, but the supporting characters you wrote in the article are still not broad-minded. The little fat tycoon is okay, funny and simple. The junior sister who gave the mission was okay, kind and arrogant. Then the third elder is okay. The funny writing style cannot always be funny, and the basic logic and environment cannot give way to the funny. Talking about the technique, I see that you are using it to suppress the protagonist's upgrade, but it's not stable, man. Your golden finger can be used to create an almighty and invincible protagonist. Then let's talk about the protagonist's character, which also requires a second setting. You are currently living in a wretched manner, and then you put your interests first, and yet you dare to fight back. This is not enough. The funny writing style requires a main character and multiple disguise characters. You see, first of all, the protagonist is definitely shady and lovable. Then the secondary character design, targeting the villain, is your shamelessness and vulgarity. The secondary character design is for the senior brothers and sisters who are close to the supporting characters. You can set the senior brothers and so on. In this way, what the villain sees is your shamelessness, but what he hears is your nobility. Isn't this a contrast, and it can be done in a funny style, Finally, for seniors, for people with higher cultivation than the protagonist, sincerity and innocence are enough. Finally, let's talk about the plot advancement. At the beginning, you may feel that there is no real plot, or it may be because the number of words is not large, which is the point where the protagonist's strength is accumulated. I don't know if you have an outline. This is hard to say. Well... That's all for now.

Protagonist: After ascending to the immortal world, I am also an immortal, right? ? ? ? Immortal World: Are you the Immortal Gou? ? ? Protagonist: You are the dog fairy... Your whole family is the dog fairy... Haha? ? ? ? Xianjie: You are just a dog fairy just trying to become an immortal... I just said you can beat me... Hahaha? ? ? ? ? ? ? Protagonist: Wuwuwu... Should we continue to try to transcend the fairy world? ? ?

The key to Gou is to be "harmony with light and dust", which means that you can be number one among 10 people, but you should hide your strength and bide your time as number 4 or 5, not number one from the bottom. It's disgusting to pretend to be a pig and eat the tiger.

Does the protagonist have enough spirit stones to have a lot of time? ? ? Why don't you develop a violent soldier style? ? ? ? Don't you think the protagonist wants to go to the fairy world? ? Is this what it means to be able to get behind the true violent soldier flow? ? ? ? Like…………? Create a smart formation... A smart brain formation? ? ? ? This way... You don't have to worry about the soul being too weak... It can't control too many puppet machines? ? ? ? The protagonist can also hide behind the puppet... Waiting for the villain? ? ? ? Is this the real practice of cultivating immortality? ? ? The protagonist can't fight alone? ? Can you create a magical assembly line... An intelligent puppet production line? ? ? ? ? ? But this violent soldier flow... Even though it can be the protagonist's spiritual stone, it is really not enough? ? ? It feels like the protagonist's golden finger only needs mid-grade spiritual stones now... And he doesn't need low-grade spiritual stones, right? ? ? ? Such a low-grade spirit stone... Can't it be used as a power source for smart puppets? ? ? ? Add………? The protagonist can deeply crack the "Incarnation Talisman" and use the Avatar Talisman to infinitely control the characteristics of the avatar... Combined with the smart puppet, the puppet can be controlled at unlimited distances? For the Intelligent Brain Formation... The intelligent puppet is his own clone? ? The protagonist controls the brain formation... The brain differentiates and controls the puppet? Types of machine puppets... Combat puppets... Planting puppets... Mining puppets... Life puppets... Vehicle puppets... War armor puppets... Battleship puppets... Spaceship puppets... Catering puppets... Mechanic city puppets... Culinary puppets... Warehouse puppets... Monitoring puppets... Industrial puppets... Production puppets... Human shield puppets... Arrow puppets... Spell puppets... Firearm puppets... Cannonball puppets...? ? ? ? Puppet disguise form... Animal shape... Fish shape... Bird shape... Human shape... Flying insect shape... Reptile shape... Plant shape... Grass shape... Tree shape... Flower shape... Vine shape... Water grass shape... Seaweed shape...? ? ? The violent army flow will collapse... Is this a problem? ? ? It feels like you can use the protagonist's violent puppet... As a combat weapon to lead the charge during adventures? When the protagonist is practicing in the sect... Can he let the puppet enter the storage space? ? As long as the mainland is not directly invaded by violent troops, it should not be easy to collapse, right? ? It feels like most of the violent troops have collapsed... It should be because the violent troops pushed Invincible... That's why I can't write anymore? ? ? ? The protagonist can redeem spiritual stones in different places at different times... And only after the low-grade spiritual stones cannot be exchanged again... Will he become the energy source of the puppet... Otherwise, he is putting the cart before the horse? ? ? It is actually the energy source of low-grade spiritual stones... Does this mean that its power is destined to be limited? Is this the only way to win with numbers... And the truly strong cannot win with numbers...? ? The protagonist still needs spiritual stones to purchase the materials for making a puppet... Does the power source of the puppet also require spiritual stones? ? ? In this way, even if the protagonist has a spiritual stone, it will still be fast enough, right? ? This would not exist... The protagonist is invincible? ? Is it the protagonist who still needs to survive and practice to upgrade? ? ?

The author has written so many books, why is he still at the top level?

Hehehe~, don't be afraid that I'm not a good person~, hehehe~

The author's writing is actually pretty good, but the plot description feels a bit lacking. I feel like the character of the protagonist is a bit strange, I don't know how to describe it! But come on＾0＾~But why are there so few recommendation votes?

You can find a few experienced readers to help you add books to your list and recommend them. I came here after seeing someone recommending this book in the comment area of ​​Cute Foodie. You should thank him for working so hard to help you 🤭

The investment has already been pursued, the author, hold on, don't stop updating!

Um, it's unscientific to not write a testimonial after it's put on the shelves! Don't notify me, negative review😄😄😄😤😤

Be the first to give a reward, so be considerate! Ahem, although not much, hee hee😁

There is nothing special about it, the author should think of something interesting.

If the painting style suddenly changed drastically, the book would be GG.

Is this really a brainless and cool article? ? ? ?

I feel that there is no cost for releasing the talisman. If you give enough talismans at the first level of Qi training, you can dominate the world of immortality.

{"NickName":"Donkey Dali","UserId":302277894}Support, I hope I can finish the book first (not unfinished)

Come and see if there are any updates. The book is beautiful.

I would like to ask, why doesn't the protagonist, who can draw talismans, sell talismans to earn spiritual stones? . . . . . .

So awesome! There are so many collections! Worship!

You've already finished the Strengthening Furnace with more than 200 pictures. I don't even dare to start this one.

Author Does this novel have a female protagonist?