A Legend That Begins in the Sandbox

The creativity is good, but the connection between the plots is too blunt. For example, the destruction of Feilong Civilization. I talked about a lot of civilization development and some emotions before, but suddenly I came to the conclusion that the civilization self-destructed because the world was too small, and a lot of things were skipped in the middle. It feels baffling. There is also some kind of systematic conspiracy. Previously, we only mentioned that the protagonist was reincarnated for the second time. There is no mention of the system and spiritual energy recovery at all. Elements and spiritual energy revival suddenly appeared at the back, but there was no mention that the protagonist knew about their existence. Don't say anything for us to understand on our own, just because the writing is so blunt that people can't think of it. Also, the forced placement of a villain makes people feel disgusting. There is no need for this, and the probability of two coincidences happening together is unlikely. Obviously as long as you write well, you can write well, but it is really uncomfortable to have to arrange a mastermind behind the revival of spiritual energy. I also saw a novel like this before, which was about the protagonist. Controlling dreams, Shijie swallows other people's dreams to strengthen himself. At first I thought the writing was good, but having to insert a mastermind behind the revival of spiritual energy made it unbearable.

Yes, this book is very creative. I voted for it as a favorite. But it would be better if there were less plagiarism and more use of your imagination.

Why do the protagonists of such novels all get cancer😓

It's only five chapters, so keep reading.

What is this operation? Comments on the launch plus comments on the version? ? ? ?

The writing is very messy, a stream of consciousness, a bit self-indulgent, and has no beginning or end. I always feel like I have missed a few chapters, and I can't figure out the complete plot by myself. I suggest you write an outline.

It's so desolate and there's no one around?

World of Dragons and Plants vs. Zombies are too long, water, and plots that have little to do with the protagonist. Why write them?

Comments on bug solicitation post The author is a pure newbie, and welcomes comments, loopholes, bugs, and trolls from all book friends 😁 [1. Various loopholes will be slowly filled. [2. The flying dragon civilization and the plant world don't seem to make much sense at the moment. I have found that, thanks to the opinions of book friends, this part of the plot will be slowly completed later, so that this world and civilization will not be meaningless. [3. Resurrection of spiritual energy... It is needed to promote the plot, not for fighting] [4. It is unnecessary if there is no plot, even if it is not necessary, it will be necessary later...]

Dear writer, your new book is very good. I have joined the new book investment group. Please update~

This book just keeps copying settings! I got cancer out of nowhere! Didn't order anything of my own! Xibei book!

Will the editor-in-chief lose his mind after being put on the shelf?

There aren't many professional comments here, so I'll add one.

In fact, you can grab the godhead and use the world to strengthen your own strength.