Sword Douluo

The author's writing is very good. It is different from the invincible and cheating plots of most Douluo fandoms in the starting point. The protagonist grows up slowly, and there is no such thing as a one-step plot. I like this kind of gradual plot. I don't want to be invincible, just reasonable. I really hope that this book can write the plot of the Soul Fighting Competition. This is the Douluo fandom in my mind. Come on, I hope this book will not collapse in the later period, come on! !

The book is very interesting and basically not toxic. But author, can you remove the voiceover from the novel? It was really too much of a drama. I can still accept one bracketed voice-over in ten chapters, but sometimes you can't stand two or three in one chapter. Reading novels is supposed to be immersive. It's too hard for you to make such a show.

Why do I feel that all the protagonists in the Douluo fanfic now have such a high initial hatred value for Wuhun Palace? It seems that they all regard themselves as Tang San. I feel that Wuhundian is an organization that can do well. Especially in terms of people's livelihood. ① First, go to each village, and the children in each village will have their martial arts appraised for free. If a genius appears, they will not be forced to recruit them. ②Establish a junior martial arts school in each town. There are also places for work-study students. (The high level seems to have been established by the empire itself. If nothing else, neither of the two empires has taken the initiative to appraise martial spirits for the children of their own country. Let alone established junior martial arts academies to train students. The city lords of these small cities are unlikely to contribute money, so the money should come from the martial arts hall.) ③ Money is given to low-level soul masters every month, and they are not forced to recruit these soul masters. (Tang San went for appraisal, but Wuhun Palace did not take the initiative to recruit him. Later, the recruitment failed in the Soul Fighting Competition. Tang Hao appeared and turned against Wuhun Palace. Wuhun Palace did not embarrass Tang San's teammates, ordinary guys like Oscar.) ④ Establish a low-level soul beast forest to give low-level civilian soul masters a chance to obtain soul rings. (If there were not these low-level soul beast forests established by the Spirit Hall, civilian soul masters would really have no place to obtain soul rings, and they would die if they went to a place like the Star Dou Forest.) ⑤Join the two empires to hold a high-level academy soul master competition to give talents more opportunities to show off. From the perspective of people's livelihood, I think Wuhundian, an organization that looks like a religion but is actually an alliance, is much stronger than the feudal empires like the two empires. (The two empires have a powerful foreign enemy in Dou Er: the Sun and Moon Empire, and the Heaven Dou Empire is still hostile even though the Heaven Dou Empire is still peaceful.) In summary, I don't understand why so many protagonists who had no grievances against the Wuhun Palace at the beginning turned against the Wuhun Palace. Especially when the protagonist is particularly weak, he mocks him crazily. I really thought Wuhundian couldn't hear me. After all, it was a violent organization. I really wasn't afraid of letting Wuhundian fall to the sharks. I was really stupid. People who talk casually are stupid, because: when the words are not spoken, you are its master, and after they are spoken, they are your master.

Oh my god, I'm weird. Almost all Douluo fans dare not compete with Tang San for Xiao Wu. I'm also drunk. I've been looking for a book for a long time and can't find one 😭😭😭

Dragon-slaying sword? Your surname is Liu? Isn't it related to Liu Bowen?

One thing I don't understand is that the protagonist is a commoner who has no hatred against Wuhun Palace. How come he has such a high hatred value for Wuhun Palace in heaven? It was as if Wuhundian was his father-killing enemy. Brainless.

Why do so many novels now have straight men? Think you're interesting? ? It's actually embarrassing

Alas, another dead eunuch, the key is that the book is also written very well ٩(๑`н´๑)۶

Idle people, do you still write? If you choose not to write, at least give us a shout 😰

I want to know how many people the original heroine persuaded to quit

Strongly recommend the author to open a harem with multiple female protagonists

If time travel is not against the protagonist, then what's the point of time travel? Dou 1 saw that Bibi Dong was a pitiable person at the end. Dou 2 Tang San's various behaviors at least gave me a bad feeling. The decline of Tang Sect was at least Tang San's indulgence. Otherwise, it wouldn't have happened to any one of the Azure Bull Python and Titan Giant Ape.

Everything else is fine, except that the protagonist's golden finger seems to be offline? ! ? Taiqingdao? Tang San's combat power based on secular martial arts is almost the same as that of the protagonist who cultivates immortality. I feel that this immortal cultivator is too weak. There is a big difference between those who cultivate immortality and those in martial arts in Zhuxian. If you are worried about losing your combat power, don't use the immortal cultivation technique from the beginning 😅😅😅

Does anyone recommend a book where the heroine is Zhu Zhuqing? Wait online.

Tai Chi Xuan Qing Dao didn't find any advantages. The most important thing was to find Tang San's teaching, and then it was revealed that he was a time traveler and extremely poisonous. The reason is that if you don't know Taoist terminology, you might as well write down the exercises with annotations, which is ten thousand times better than going to Tang San's teachings. Moreover, as a true protagonist, there are not as many tricks as the supporting characters (Tang San). Tang San has skills, techniques, footwork, eyesight, hidden weapon techniques and production. The protagonist only knows one skill and doesn't know how to practice it. . It's better to use martial arts skills like Tang San, such as Jiuyin Manual or Xiantian Kung Fu. If the martial spirit is a sword, then use Dugu Nine Swords.

Douluo fan, Qian Renxue, isn't she good? It's just that many authors can't write well.

Douluo's fandom has two elements that appear at the same time and I don't want to read it. 1. Born in Tang San's village, 2. Entered Shrek with Tang San. There are too many authors who write like this. It seems that they don't know how to write without working with Tang San.

I feel that it is really childish to make Xiao Wu the boss in the Seven Houses, and the protagonist's IQ has dropped as much as his age. He is so talented You are so old, and you are still playing so energetically with a bunch of brats. Did you suffer an intellectual shock when you traveled through time br>I join Nordin every day, is there only Nordin for a while in nmd school? It is understandable to join Shrek later And the master's theory is so nb, it seems to be of no use in the future And I feel that the writing is awkward

Well, if the protagonist's golden fingers are the Dragon-Slaying Sword and the Tai Chi Xuan Qing Dao, there doesn't seem to be much description at the moment. The Dragon Slaying Sword has not been completely unsealed, so let's not talk about it. Tai Chi Xuan Qing Dao, as an immortal cultivation method, is only described as fast in cultivation speed, and it feels very awkward. Tang San relied on a mortal martial arts and the protagonist's immortal cultivation method in the early stage. . . Even if Xuan Qing Dao is not known for its speed of cultivation, it must at least have some other advantages. . 🐶

The author has entered the palace, don't wait any longer. He went to practice the Sunflower Manual