Ice Edge: King of the North

I've read so much, and I don't have any opinions, but I want to watch Aisha. Why are you always doing other things? Even if the plot requires it, don't do so many chapters. I feel mentally exhausted.

Congratulations on finding a treasure

This book belongs primarily to Aisha, and the battle is secondary. But later on, the priorities were reversed, and I fell into the inferior position. I started following Chapter 20. I just wanted to watch Aisha, but the plot was really sparse, and there was almost no plot at the end...

Disney warning, copyright nerds warning.

After all the hardships, Roland finally reached Atahoran. Roland: Attaholan, get out of here! Atta Horan: Ahhhh~ Roland: MD, give it to me, little fire spirit, burn this lump of ice for me! Then... Attahoran: Ahhhhh~~~~ (Screaming)

If you want to complain about it, there's actually not much to say about it as a whole... But as for the details, I really can't praise it. (Let me start by saying okay, I quite like this book. I am just pointing out some things I don't like. If you agree with it, I will be very happy. If you don't agree with it, I have nothing to say.) The first is the "Principality". I don't know if the author thinks that the name of the principality is more handsome, fresh, refined and classy. The descriptions of those principalities are all very gray and very powerful countries. However, the so-called principality refers to the territory owned by the nobles who are entrusted by the king and serve the king. This kind of territory is collectively called a principality. The supreme head of the principality is called a duke, who is the highest nobleman except the royal family. The descendants can be divided into princes and sons. The territory owned by each title can be called duke/hou/bo/zi/male kingdom. Of course, in the male kingdom, they can basically only be regarded as big landowners. For details, please refer to the classification method of the Western Zhou Dynasty in ancient my country. To sum up, Empire > Kingdom > Principality, for what the author said: "The Principality of Bergen is a powerful country..." I feel a little uncomfortable, but it's not incomprehensible, right? The king of the country showed weakness and the duke became the actual person in power. The country was divided into several parts and there was constant internal fighting. I could accept it by writing a Disney version of Tywin Lannister. But then came "The King of the Principality of Bergen..." "The Kingdom of Arendelle has the potential to become a principality..."... Meow Meow Meow? When did the principality have a king? Is Aigner so unwilling to leave the king alone and prepare to be someone else's younger brother? Although it is harmless, the description of the principality that appeared many times in the article really made my urethra hurt. Secondly, the protagonist... Isn't he the greatest assassin in the Invincible universe? I can understand not being interested in rights, I can also understand not caring so much about money, being obsessed with Elsa all day long →_→ not being interested in women, I really agree with it... But why is it so zz when it is written? I don't need to tell you about breaking into the palace. Anyone who understands will know that there is something wrong with the writing of this paragraph. You are an assassin. At least you have the appearance of an assassin who is easy to kill. Don't tell me that as a super strong assassin, you don't know the consequences of being carried away by emotions. If you don't tell me, the angrier you get. Reason is like a poisonous snake hiding in the grass waiting for revenge. Its eyes are getting colder and colder. It uses hatred to connect anger and killing. At least it should not attract so much attention. I like Elsa, and for Elsa to maintain her relationship with Anna, what does it mean to beat up my old father-in-law? My sister-in-law wants her father-in-law to die? Or is her father not worth mentioning to Elsa? Also, I was so provoked by a few words from my future mother-in-law that I almost killed someone... What are you making a fuss about? Another problem is the communication between the protagonist and Elsa. The adjustment of the mask structure can achieve the effect of changing the timbre. Although it is still very similar, it is almost the same. Use writing to communicate? (Maybe I didn't read the book carefully?) Have you been single for hundreds of years? When you comforted Elsa, you made a long speech. Elsa was crying like that. I was afraid that Elsa would faint before you finished writing. What next? I would be sorry for the gender of the protagonist if I don't do it twice. Alas (tactical sigh) Also, writing style, writing style, how crazy are you going? What's up with always giving off a chuuni vibe?__? You can still do something like that without saying "Oh my God, I'm going to kick your ass so hard", right? To take a step back, it always feels like a drama and you don't know what you are doing. Let's take a closer look and say that the author is really very attentive and reveals his true feelings so much that it is full of Japanese manga style... Of course, there is one thing to say. This cannot be said to be bad. The author's attentiveness has brought about the improvement of the quality of the work. It can be seen that the author really loves Elsa (I Kill Jack x Elsa). Overall, it is indeed Yes, it's a rare product, you can eat it with confidence, but it's a bit bitter in some parts, and there are a lot of commendable things, so I won't go into details one by one. I also have to say that the author is already great. He needs to adjust the details in the text, the description of the scenes, and the portrayal of the character's psychology further. The language and dialogue should not be so sincere, and learn to think about how the character will speak from the perspective of the character. Reduce unnecessary descriptions. The article looks a bit bloated. Almost all the authors who should write and should not write (referring to redundant descriptions) have written part of it... If you agree with my point of view and decide to change it, I will be very happy. If you disagree, I will not say anything, which is just a little unhappy. But you did not write the book for me. Only by sticking to your own ideas can you go further in writing. However, it is recommended to continue to refine the outline. Come on＾0＾~

Comrades, Park Hui has personally decided that if he can get 3,000 recommendation votes before the end of March, he will update 5 chapters in a row. Don't miss this opportunity, don't come back, hurry up and contribute your small votes! Try not to vote for other books in these three days, please 🥺🥺🥺

The settings added by the author are a bit weird. There is indeed Bergen but it is not that strong. Arendelle does exist. In Norway, the real map can also match the route map in 2. The ending of 2 also mentions Denmark and a camera. According to the history of the camera, it should be after 1822 (unexpectedly, it is not the Middle Ages). Even if Around 1822, when the fog lifted, the black officer said he had been trapped for 34 years. Then the time when the old king launched the war against the Uzo people in the north and built the dam was probably around 1790. The war against Sweden ended, and it happened to start fighting Denmark again, which was when Norway was fighting for independence. So the old king may be afraid that the Uzo people from the north are Danish magicians? And Arendelle is not that small port. The large area on the opposite side marked in the wreckage of the shipwreck is Arendelle's territory. Combined with the fact that Norway itself means the road to the north, I just speculate that 1550 to 1890 happened to be the Little Ice Age of the earth. Attahallan is a frozen place. Maybe Attahallan is the iceberg on the Skagerral Strait? But it is a bit inconsistent with the route in the movie. The left and right are reversed, and the north is land again. (It may be the screenwriter's intention to reverse the north and south, but as long as the south and north are reversed, everything will make sense.) Starting from the fjords of Arendelle, first go south, go around the land and then go north. Maybe Attahallan is really a land with glaciers in the polar circle? Maybe near Iceland? It has an internal flavor, the origin of Nordic mythology, the aurora and so on, maybe there is really magic. Elsa is 24 in the second part, and Anna is 21. In 20 to 30 years, Norway will have a food crisis and economic difficulties again. A large number of Norwegians will flee. I wonder what the two sisters will do? Maybe with magic and nature spirits? If the protagonist can still accept the Norwegian aunt at the age of 40, then the protagonist should first consider how to increase food production and reform the economy, instead of hanging around all day long and falling in love?

This international relationship is similar to that of the early Spring and Autumn Period and the European Middle Ages. Although you cannot attack other countries at will, you can always obtain legal claims or provide "help" to other countries through various channels as in history, or attack other countries in the name of violating your beliefs or doing extraordinary things.

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The environment is quite good and the readers are quite polite. At least I didn't see anyone spitting out fragrant fragrance🤭🤭

I feel like I've discovered a treasure!

This is what I said, as soon as it is put on the shelves, I will invest all the coins I have saved for many years, not much BB, For Elsa!!! (๑>؂<๑) (Implying to add precision🐶🐶🐶)

May the new book be a hit! Step on each other! 😂

The author hurry up and put it on the shelves so that I can reward him🙂🙂

Come on! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! !

Not everyone has perseverance. I have had countless good ideas, but in the end they all failed because of persistence.

The author, I want to ask about Elsa and Anna. (Maybe this question is a bit silly) Do I want them all, Roland?

I helped you promote it in Kugou's song about Frozen. I don't know whether it will succeed or not. I tried my best 😄🙂🙂

There are people who are actually twirling their Disney beards! Awesome!

What do author book club groups talk about?

I'll come back and offer you incense, Lao Pu

I visited the grave again and was surprised to find that Park Hui had changed his name significantly.

It seems that the author just wrote it for fun, and his love for ice and snow is also just for fun. To be honest, it is a bit disappointing!

I heard that the author fell out of trouble, which is a pity, but I wish you good luck. I will always love Elsa. Some things never change! ! !

So can anyone tell the author if there is anyone who can take over this pitfall.

The author stopped writing