Evidenced by Deed

Youshui praised Youshui too much, and Youshui blushed, so I stopped praising her and directly praised the book. This book was carefully compiled by Youshui with countless hairs and countless hours. I went hiking in the wild and returned to my ancestral home, and went down to the city police station to visit the garage. Although there were very few descriptions of the exterior scenes, every scene I wrote had a picture, every detail had a reference, and every idea was repeatedly tested to see if it was reasonable. Although there were more unreasonable ones, I passed the test. After all, it is suspense, and it must be nailed, logic, etc. Just let it be air, it hurts to slap yourself in the face... Haha... So please continue to support "Deed as Evidence"! Come on! ! ! ! Rush the duck! Ten million words is not a dream!

I've watched two-thirds of it, how can I put it, it's a pity to abandon it, but I still feel something weird when I continue to watch it. First of all, I like this world view. It integrates demons, gods and ghosts in the modern world. With the addition of soldiers and spirits, the setting of this world view is very good. However, the author's settings are relatively vague during the writing process, and the demons can be said to be settings that have not been mentioned in the previous few units. They suddenly appear later, which makes me confused. Secondly, some of the units written by the author are very close to life, and there are real incidents that have been reported, which can be brought in. For example, the previous dark network incident was the Nth room in South Korea or earlier, and there was human trafficking. There are also many elements interspersed in it: such as falling in love with an eunuch, palace battles and promotions, cults, tomb robberies, etc. These elements alone are like a new book, and you can see that they have been carefully prepared. I think there is nothing wrong with the plot in general, but it does not follow the "routine" and there are some inexplicable turning points. Not only is it difficult to watch, but it also feels like the protagonist is always doing some useless work, which will aggravate the feeling of useless characters, both male and female protagonists and supporting actors. In terms of characters, this is one of the few characters I've seen that I don't like even now. I barely like Yu Jianxin and Miao Qingyun, but the others are not very good. The written characters all feel so thin. The thinnest feeling is the heroine, whose character is on the verge of collapse. I remember a plot with Shan Yan. The description sometimes calls the heroine smart and sometimes calls the heroine stupid. Is it okay to jump around repeatedly? In fact, the whole book is like this, but this place is too concentrated. I don't think writing like this can highlight the heroine's growth🙃. Finally, as the heroine Xiao Chengzi, I just thought, does she have any shining points? My mind would go blank. Finally, I hope the author can revise it again, although I think there is little hope. To sum up, I think there are too many things added, and the priority is not obvious. I prefer to read books that look like I am watching a drama, and the rhythm is very important. I couldn't stand it when I watched a male video author write it. Everything had to be described in detail, and the words were one after another, ancient and modern, and it was very uncomfortable to watch🙃. Also, I understand dystopia, but it is set in modern times or a peaceful era, and promotes intelligence, morality, sports, beauty, and labor. As a supporting role for some ordinary people, it should not be so sinister. It looks annoying and is very intellectually depressing. Take a look at the one next door, called Fat Girl of the Apocalypse. There are many intellectually subdued characters in it that highlight the dystopia. It seems that this force is foreshadowing the plot behind it.

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It's really not easy to keep updating every day.

Readers, please don't break the bank! This is the hard work of seeing a book rise! "With the Deed as Evidence" The book will be officially opened at 02:20 on February 20, 2020! Officially launched at 10:20 on March 20, 2020! Target 2.2 Million words! If there is no shortage of stories, more people will read it, and a lot of income, you are ready to write it to 22 million! To find out exactly when it will be completed, look at the almanac to calculate a serious date. Maybe: February 28, 2028, maybe 29 plus a follow-up or something. Some people may dislike the slow progress, but that's normal. My goal is one volume! Any volume in the book! Just take it out and you can make a big online movie! If I had the capital, I would sell books volume by volume, haha. Of course Qidian will definitely not give me this opportunity. If someone really takes a fancy to me, they will probably pack up a book and take them all away. Although the supernatural power is cold, and the female supernatural power channel is even more so, I have confidence! But do good deeds and don't worry about your future! Come on! Use words to create a world that belongs to me. Hehe... I also ask readers to help us create it together. I will provide the text and time, and you will provide the time and subscription. Finally: record yourself today! 2020/02/28/Word count: 179,000, recommendation votes: 5598, collections: 722, monthly votes: 20, number of fans: 3090. Unless there is a natural or man-made disaster and the book is finished, as long as I can write 4,000+ words a day, I will make a contract to prove it! If there is a breach of contract... Well... I gained 200 pounds! (Currently 185, trying to reduce it.) Hmm! Come on! I will definitely succeed! Um! Come on! Ps: Set up another flag. In ten months, I will update 10,000 words every month. I will get the medal for updating ten times in January 2021! If I don't get it, I won't eat meat for the next year! Um! Keep your word!

The writing is so well written and reflects the creative level of Da Bang Bang. It's so awesome that I have nothing to say! Come on and watch! Really awesome! If you don't believe me, there is no book to read 🤭

I strongly recommend everyone to pick up the cp. Although the author didn't say it clearly, everyone felt that the cp was so exciting. Although the heroine's question about orange has always been redundant, it didn't affect me at all to clap Yu Jianxin! One Yukenshin has three... No, four experiences. When she is a girl, she can be a group favorite. When she is a swordsman, she can cheat with Wencheng. The cold Yukenshin appears less often and has no feeling. But the blood-stained Yukenshin is definitely worth having. The interaction with Wenqian and the other male supporting characters is domineering but not arrogant. I love it. Raise the Cp flag and knock everyone down! Come and shout with me! Come on! "Take the Deed as Evidence" is sure to be a hit! Don't even stop me! I want to buy autographs in advance! When someone gets into trouble again, one person will be given one as a souvenir!

The writing is great, not what is said but true. The author is also great. Not only does she look great, but her character is also great. Not only her character is great, but her ability to turn her character into talent is also great. So we continue to read the book and feel great! Yeah!

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I finally finished reading it all, it took a bit long to read, hehe. First sense: A text of more than 200,000 words, can you believe that the main text is only more than 50,000 words, and the first 100,000 words are prequels. However, although the pace is so slow that it makes people question life, the story is still very exciting. The language is humorous, and many plots are full of weird atmosphere. Reality and fantasy, living people and souls are intertwined with each other, making the plot exciting. Highlights: 1. Grandpa's persistence in love and his spirit of not giving up and fearing hardship for love are admirable. Moreover, the strength and willfulness shown by Wen Cheng and Wen Qian later in the face of various difficulties are also inherited from their grandfather's spirit. 2. The love between brother and sister is enviable to others. No matter what time, the brother will protect his sister. Although he may hurt his sister with words, he will always come first in his heart. 3. Various thrilling episodes are very interesting. For example, on the way to the Mo family's ancestral home, the brother and sister encountered a skeleton man, two venomous snakes, one green and one white, besieged by scorpions, a mouse with red eyes, and Fish that eat carrion... The author has a great imagination, and the bizarre plot makes the brothers and sisters full of ups and downs along the way. It also opens the eyes of the brothers and sisters living in modern life, and deepens the brother-sister relationship between them. 4. All kinds of unintentional humor and the mutual hostility between the brother and sister make the plot full of life and give the text vitality. Disadvantages 1. The pace is slow. The plot of grandparents from acquaintance to marriage to separation can be considered a new level. The brother and sister went to their ancestral home. Along the way, the author wished they had to encounter all the things they could think of. It made them anxious. Is it appropriate to torment his protagonist like this? 2. The suspense-categorized article has more than enough fantasy but not enough suspense. Many plots unfold slowly from the perspective of the protagonist. The only suspense left so far is that the words on the last wall in Mochou's tomb are missing. The descendants of the Zhao family must be involved for another reason. There is also the ghost car that appears in the text. The contract between Wencheng and the driver has become a new suspense. In fact, these are not enough. Setting up more suspense is conducive to the development of the plot, and multiple perspectives present different effects. 3. There are a few typos, and the image of Wencheng is a bit lacking. Generally speaking, Wencheng is smart, lively and cheerful, and sometimes feels a bit awkward. As the heroine, I almost feel like she would be more likable if she could be more cute. Personally, it can be ignored. Overall review: Overall, this book can be rated 80%. The characters are all well portrayed. Whether they are grandparents or parents, everyone is highly identifiable. The Mo brothers and sisters are even more impressive. The policeman brother is basically a sister control. Be careful, even though Edgeworth is not a physical person, he has left a strong mark on readers. The author is very diligent in updating, his writing style is sophisticated, the details are delicate and vivid, and the atmosphere is very realistic. Read the author's introduction at the end of the text, and frequently consult information to accumulate materials for the storyline. Positive and motivated people will always be one step ahead of others, and many contents can also reflect that the author does know a lot of knowledge. For example, the things my brother carries in his mountaineering bag are simply a small treasure box, with rubbings of ancient texts, and some uncommon knowledge points will be explained at the end of the text. Reading also expands your knowledge. The expert said a lot of cute and new thoughts after reading it. Please laugh it off if it is inappropriate.

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The novels you write are awesome. The plot is coherent and compact, the characters are very distinct, and the theme is also very prominent. The writing is smooth, the text is delicate, the main line is clear, and the feelings are sincere. The writing style is my favorite type.

The story is compact and gripping. The author unfolds it from the first person point of view, pushing the plot forward as a participant and narrator. At first glance, it is unremarkable, but upon closer inspection, it is full of tension. The further you go, the greater the surprise becomes. When you look at the back, you have to admire the author's imagination. With my IQ of over 200, I could not guess his routine! ! ! ! !

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New book, new atmosphere, come on with me! ! ! Work hard to keep updating! Impact 2.2 Million words! ! ! Come on!

The author is great! I have always been a big fan. From "Story of Strange Buildings" to "Old Man Ding's Retirement Notes", I have always marveled at the author's imagination and novel writing style, which makes people unable to stop reading. Since the book "With Deed as Evidence" has been published, it has become even more difficult to put down the phone. I look forward to the author's more exciting content every day. Come on, author!

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Sister Shangshan, please do your best! Little fox, I will bring a group of friends to support you! ! Believe in a person, believe in a book, and come on for life and dreams! I will give you a poem: The sky is full of colorful flowers, and the flowers are swimming in the water. It is difficult to fill thousands of fallen leaves with Sucao, A lifetime of dreaming and waking up is the world. In the cool breeze and autumn rain, in a drunken dream, Don't weep at the stars at night, don't weep at leisure. Sitting on the clouds and watching the sea of ​​clouds, When will I return if I don't return here? I hope my sister will become a god! !

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Sister Shui, I heard downstairs that everything is fine.