The World of Machine War

Let me say a few words. First of all, my attitude is generally praising. Compared with the previous book, this book has made great progress in overall rhythm control and writing style. Personally, I have several problems with the last book: 1. Most of the time, readers rely on their own love for mecha anime to continue reading. Many times, they have no enthusiasm for reading the volume because they don't like a certain work. For example, I don't like Revolutionary Machine, so I skipped the entire volume, which will lead to incoherence in the plot and characters (I have no idea what the supporting role of One Man Brigade is for) 2. The jump in combat power. This is an inevitable problem when traveling through multiple worlds. A thousand readers have a thousand rankings of combat power in their hearts. Some people think OG is awesome, some think UC is awesome, and some think Dongfang Invincible is awesome, so sometimes it is difficult for people to accept it. So back to the new book, looking at this book now, my personal prediction should be a civil war in one solar system first, and then a duel between five solar systems. In this case, there will not be a big jump. Compared with the forced grafting of different technology trees, the accelerated growth of technology trees is relatively better to control, and the two problems mentioned above can be better avoided. Next, it depends on the author's settings of the strength of the various forces and various machines. In this regard, I am more optimistic about the author's strength, so the new book is still worth looking forward to. As for the portrayal of characters, the expectations of original characters are still higher than those of known characters. This depends on the author's performance In short, the new book seems to be quite good so far, keep up the good work and keep looking forward to it (PS: I still like 0 the best Team 8, I just like Jim and Gundam who can be killed by tanks and landmines, shell casings pop out when machine guns are fired, walking in the sand can cause footwork due to accumulated sand, and when parachuting at high altitude, all the bombs are fired and the human body is missed, akimbo <(￣￣)>✌️)

As a sequel to the previous book, objectively speaking, this book is indeed unsatisfactory in some places, but it cannot be said that it is not friendly to passers-by. After all, it is a native sequel, and the Gundam content involved is not high. There are more elements of mechanized combat. Readers who like mechanized combat novels can still read it. If you are not interested in mechanized combat, it is normal not to read it. There is no such thing as trying the poison without trying the poison, and the jokes are not so blunt and difficult to understand. Although it may be a little difficult to understand if you have not read the previous book, it does highlight the three-dimensional image of the characters. Some of the jokes are actually new from this book. I believe you will get used to it after reading it. As for the unknown heroine, let's not talk about the harem or not. It's only been over two hundred chapters. What's wrong with having a female supporting character in the character label? As for the ambiguity, there is one thing that cannot be denied, but after all, it only stays at that little bit, and at best it can be considered closer. But the problem is, he is already a subordinate, so being close to him will not have any impact. As for the characterization, there are so many supporting characters in this book, and if everyone has to be well-characterized, then maybe some people will be disappointed, right? But the images of the main supporting characters are still relatively distinct. As for the dialogue between the protagonist and the flying eagle, the high school students before time travel and the high school students after time travel should not be so demanding. In addition, the original setting of Flying Eagle is to be funny, so what's the impact of making the dialogue more funny? Taken together, this book is worth reading for those who have a good impression of the mechanized combat system. If you don't like it, don't read it. The previous book does not have such a profound impact on this book, but you can read the previous one first and then look back at this one, which will be much better for your senses.

This book is considered a fan novel. This book is a combat novel, so I suggest that newbies not to pay too much attention to details such as battles. Of course, you can also leave a message to the author with some suggestions, but please don't get too excited. Comments should be realistic and just leave them as they are. The big guys can also give the newbies some more knowledge. I haven't watched many mecha series, but the ones that left a deep impression are Seed and 00, as well as Revolutionary Machine, Lelouch, Guilty Crown, Full Metal Panic, Macross, ALDNOAH ZERO, BUDDY COMPLEX, etc. I just browsed the comment area and saw that most of the people said they didn't understand some of the mecha plots, female protagonists, female characters, and machine settings. In fact, I also don't understand some mecha plots, but it doesn't affect reading. For some newbies who haven't watched the mecha series, it may be a bit difficult to understand, but if you don't understand, you can ask Du Niang to make up for it. I think this is a normal operation. It's like giving you a computer. If you have never touched a computer, don't you have to learn how to operate it? Don't you want to learn some basic knowledge about computers? Nowadays, there are many time-travel fandoms that contain multiple anime works. Some of them have not been watched and don't want to catch up on them. Wouldn't it be good to read them as a new story? As for the female protagonist and female supporting role, I actually don't pay too much attention to this. After all, you are reading a combat novel, not a romance novel, so there is no need to pursue it like this. Of course, I have nothing to say about obsessive-compulsive disorder patients. As for the machine settings, it may be that the author is not rigorous enough. Some of you more powerful people can leave some machine designs for the author's reference. I usually don't write many comments. I just have nothing to do this time, so I would like to give some personal suggestions to the newbies. If there is anything wrong, please bear with me. 🙏🙏

? ? ? All of this is fine, the legendary exchange of one's beams with the other's, the civet cat for the prince.

The author is short and weak, but the beauty is pretty good

Let's talk about the feelings of passers-by. There are a lot of jokes, and most of them are incomprehensible. The character creation needs to be strengthened. The various female characters are vase-shaped and have heavily disguised facial expressions. Teachers, doctors, and students are all surrounded by beauties, and their relationships are ambiguous. The interactive plot with Goldfinger Flying Eagle AI makes people see the naivety of the protagonist, and is it also mixed with the content of the previous books? Overall, this is a book for fans and not very friendly to ordinary readers.

Since the author Yizui has actually given up his identity as an "author," I, a reader who has spent hundreds of dollars to read the original version of "Infinity War", dare to share my experience. What I say may be a bit harsh and even a bit unpleasant, but subjectively I have absolutely no intention of offending, so even if I am talking nonsense, if anyone sees it, please treat it as a joke and laugh it off. But just like my title, I personally think that the so-called "novel" is a medium for readers to supplement things that are not desired in the real world and to seek empathy. For the author, it is a projection of the author's own life experience and thoughts. Through this projection, the author can be inferred. What kind of person is he in the real world? Judging from the two novels, the author is also intoxicated in the real world. He is a person who has big problems in dealing with others and being sober. To be more specific, he has never been severely beaten by society. Even if he is beaten, the scars are healed and the pain is forgotten. He is self-centered in his heart and has no empathy for others. In my mind, I take many things for granted. I think someone or something is like that, so I subjectively believe that person or thing is like that, and don't think about anything else. This is reflected in the novel: 1. The characters other than the protagonist are all NPCs in the true sense of the word, without their own subjective consciousness and full IQ. Not online, not even IQ, absolutely matching the protagonist's words and deeds, highlighting the protagonist's wisdom and greatness, even if this wisdom and greatness is expressed in the form of novels, it seems very awkward to others, and even does not conform to the basic interpersonal logic; 2. In the novel, there are many points that can actually be explored in depth. It is brought through in the form of accounts and self-talk, and this situation often happens in succession, and sometimes it is really unbearable; 3. Having said so much, it can be understood why some people have paid to read the original version of the author's previous infinite flow novel "Machine War Infinite" (for example, myself), and this author's original world Jieguan's novel "The World of Machine War" has a dismal performance, because the Mugenliu novels have the original work as a framework (cage), so that all Muyouliu novels have traces to follow, so as not to jump too far, and there are also emotional bonuses (I have a complex with the Gundam series), but "The World of Machine War" does not have this framework (cage), and Yizui obviously does not have it The ability to support a story with an independent world view is what is said above: readers cannot seek empathy from you, and they will naturally be abandoned by readers; , when watching "Unlimited Robot War", I was amazed by Yi Zui's extremely rich and in-depth understanding of the content related to the "Mech War" ACG. Finally, I would like to say something more. I suggest that Yizui read the novel "Reincarnation Paradise" to learn about the description of other characters besides the protagonist and how to construct a world view of an independent story. I believe that the novel can teach you a lot. Of course, this is the premise that Yizui is still preparing to be a novel writer.

It's coming, it's coming 🤫 It looks like it's the same world, two time travellers?

To be honest, I often hear people say that mecha is a man's romance. But I have no interest in mechas. I feel that driving a mecha is the same as driving a tractor or excavator.

The quality is obviously not as good as the previous one, and it can even be said to be slowly slipping into the abyss of garbage.

It's so boring at the end I really recommend not to use your own mecha, there's no sense of immersion, and you can't imagine what it looks like. I didn't read half of the previous book because of all the modified Gundams, everything was added to it The plot of this book is also too bland, there is no emotional breaking point, there is no daily life, and the battles don't feel like it to be honest Looking at it, it tastes like chewing wax.

The author's last book was okay, but this one is a stretch. The biggest problem with this book is the original characters in the original world. Without the setting support of the original work, the author's own setting level is the level of urban harem novels 15 years ago, and it suddenly collapsed. Why doujinshi and Mugenliu are so easy to get started with is because the original settings are detailed and the original characters stand up.

New equipment No. 2? ? ?

It's the author's style! In the last book, the entire harem did not have as much appearance as the supporting actor. As expected, the heroine could just be a tool (laughs).

What is the most regrettable thing about the emotional drama in this novel? Yizui, do you know? That is, Misti is someone else's girlfriend, and the best and most successful woman she has created is not the protagonist. Under normal circumstances, this should be the case. After failing to compete with the protagonist for the commander position, Misti became his deputy captain. During the process of studying with the protagonist, she was completely conquered by the protagonist's strength and became the protagonist's girlfriend. Now that it's done, don't think about anything. NTR is absolutely not allowed to be touched and will cause sudden death at the first touch.

How to say? The more you write, the worse it gets.

After reading the comment section for a while, why can't I understand the meme of the classic scene now as if it's something to be proud of? I am poor and I have a reasonable spiritual heir? If you don't understand, don't make up for it, don't ask questions, what's the point of jumping out to show your face? Have you only watched the cute cartoons and can't accept other styles of painting?

The author can be said to be the backbone of the starting point machine battle flow.

Now that it is on the shelves, I will make a suggestion. Since the title is called machine warfare, write more about machine warfare. What readers want to see is: "Are all the MSs in the Federation monsters?" "If you don't come out, you won't die. Why don't you understand?" "Isn't it just a stone? Watch me push it back with a Gundam!" Campus life, flying battleships, ****, etc. Should not become the theme.

Did the author go to Xiao Ran to fool him? If it doesn't work, cut this book and re-open it as a new version of Mobile Warfare Infinite.

This book may have died again. Better books always die.

To be honest, I couldn't understand it. The main character gave me a somewhat childish feeling. In terms of relationships too, I didn't expect the protagonist to settle on a girlfriend so quickly, and then have an affair with other female characters. The most important thing is that the best descriptions in the whole text are actually other female characters. On the contrary, the heroine is extremely ordinary and simple, and the best one (in my opinion) is someone else's girlfriend. Also, if nothing happens to the protagonist, he should reach the top. So what should I do with this ordinary girlfriend from the medical department (is it from this department? It's more or less specific)? Will the protagonist have a harem? . There is also an operation point where the protagonist is a technician and a commander at the same time, fighting outside in a mecha and commanding the fleet at the same time. It gave me a sense of forced pretense. Others are very good

As a passerby, although I have a history with Gundam, and although I may be attacked by a group, I still want to say something. This book is indeed not friendly to non-fans and readers. There are a lot of abbreviations for mecha anime or game themes, which may cause readers to be in the position of "oh, what is this, what the hell is this," and see if there is an explanation from the boss in the chapter. However, after reading it, I became even more confused. Of course, let's not talk about whether the plot is good or bad. After all, personal tastes are different. Although these words often do not affect daily plot reading, they do have an impact. So I suggest that the author or the true fans don't rush to criticize me. Please post the entire science popularization. After all, noun-oriented science popularization does not involve spoilers. Okay, enough nonsense, let's move on.

How much gravity is required in a system with five suns for a planet to resist the gravitational pull of five suns? How much power does it take to operate a mecha on a planet like this? Serious setting problem?

The single-world mecha is too fresh and new, and it can't go very far with new tricks.

How should I put it? I haven't read much, there are only 62 chapters, but I feel like I haven't entered the plot yet. It seems like I am writing about some campus life that has everything but nothing. It's boring.

For mecha novels, I recommend Mecha Galaxy, it's not bad.

I feel like the author could just make a new movie called Robot Wars, but this one really doesn't hold up well and I can't watch it.

A new book by a veteran author of "Machine War". If you are interested, please come and vote for recommendation. There are already two complete novels (Super Dimensional Machine War, Robot Lion Roars, and the ending of the super system is really exciting), and the quality of the completed books is guaranteed.

If there are too many eunuchs, they will really become eunuchs.