Legend of Iron Sky

Hmm... The first part is not very attractive, and it is a bit difficult to follow it. Usually the first few chapters start to throw out some attractive things, such as golden fingers/extraordinary talents, but here it enters a flashback. It might be more interesting if the adventure is continued without memories and the upgrade system is launched. And the introduction is a bit vague. Machines can also have many development paths, whether they are alchemists/mechas/others. The writing is good, but mainly the plot development and rhythm need to be improved.

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There is nothing attractive about this introduction. . .

The post didn't say that I specialize in martial arts. After reading a few chapters, it should be a slow-burning type, but the skill can be seen in the ordinary, and the writing is very good. There is no need to create conflicts, but there should be a small climax appropriately to cater to the public. The writing style is more westernized, and the overall feeling is that of a mechanical society. The writing is good, but it is not a good idea for people who like brainless fun 😁

The overall feeling is quite good, but the front is too bland. People who are impatient will basically leave after just one look. Come on

I would like to give you some suggestions. If the author can compress the introduction into 6 sentences, it can enhance the sense.

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