Be Neighbors with Mizukage

After finally listening to the third chapter, I still fell to the thirteenth chapter. Such a poisonous amount! Author, I would like to call you the most poisonous!

This is too disgusting! Author, have you ever watched Naruto seriously? Persuade to quit, persuade to quit, persuade to quit

Cast two recommendation votes and collect 500 votes, please improve.

This Naruto, bah bah bah, is the Mizukage! This is the most touching fanfic I have ever read. Qixiu has great strength and never hides it. It is very satisfying. And I was laughing the whole time watching Qixiu, the lighthearted humor is so delicious~ I hope the author will continue writing! Stop being a eunuch By the way, is there anyone who bullies his wife like this? ? ?

As shown in the picture, the one behind Itachi is Loquat Juzo. He was one of the first seven Ninja Swordsmen. He is also Itachi's first partner after joining Akatsuki. When the two were performing Akatsuki's mission, Loquat Juzo died trying to save Itachi, and his decapitating sword was taken away by Momochi Zabuza. Pay attention to the distinction. Loquat Juzo and Momochi Zabuza look very similar, and both of them use beheading swords, so many people get them confused. Are you confused?

I really like Uchiha Shisui because he is a very gentle person who can put himself in other people's shoes and consider other people's feelings. Not just his strongest teleportation and strongest illusion. That's why he will be regarded as the third main protagonist of this book, along with Nanixiu and Terumi Mei. And I will definitely kill the gangster hiding in the group! ! !

Let's complain about some of the poisonous points (first 30 chapters) Watching Terumi Mei's father die, the protagonist's goal is to make Terumi Mei his wife. But he is a teacher, and Terumi Mei is an ordinary student. It is difficult to increase her favorability. Saving her father can greatly improve her favorability. The fact of sacrifice, and then comforted her) What is the approximate strength of the jounin? 1. The number of jounin in Kirikage Village led by the protagonist is about 10,000 2. Shisui can use the Sharingan to hypnotize the jounin couple to obtain a reasonable identity (using ordinary The common genjutsu allowed a pair of jounin to discover Shisui's problem for several years) 3. Terumi Mei's father killed more than a dozen jounin instantly with one move of the monster-melting technique 4. 80 Jonin divided into 40 two-person teams, chasing the seriously injured Terumi Mei for several days. No results at night 5. Terumi Mei's strength was close to that of a chuunin during the ninja school, and she could suppress 80 jounin with water release Dozens of people surrounded Terumi Mei, and saw her take out a kunai and rush forward, suddenly disappear, and when she appeared, she directly hacked one to death and kicked another by the way. Then they kept appearing and disappearing, killing 6 or 7 of them Then a wave of meat tanks knocked away a few jounin who were good at strength, and then rolled for 5 or 6 kilometers ​The protagonist gave Taijutsu to Terumi Mei One of them was Hinata Ichi The clan's Eight Trigrams Air Palm, Rock Lee's Konoha Whirlwind, and one of the Konoha Sannin Tsunade's Sky-reaching Kicks (Most of the basic taijutsu techniques given by teachers in Kirigakure Village are related to Konoha, so you should be suspicious) ​

After reading three chapters, I gave up decisively, which was a bit poisonous. I feel like the pig's feet are better dead.

EMMM persisted until Chapter 31. She kept saying that she hated the age of ninjas and lamented what happened to other people. Damn it, the murderous blood inheritance in the Mist Ninja Village didn't care about the boundaries. There was something wrong with her thinking. I couldn't express what I wanted to express clearly. What the hell?

I just read it, and I actually like this genre quite a lot, but your writing is extremely poisonous, and the success of Chapter 3 in the beginning made me abandon the book. The task given by the system, the protagonist is desperately trying to defeat the two Kages of Konoha and other countries. The task is obviously about to be completed, but the system forces a pause and controls the body so that it cannot move... Is this system playing tricks on people? It's like fighting a world boss in a game. After defeating it, you will explode the artifact and the boss will be down to its last drop of health. Then the game customer service will pop up a window for you to prevent you from defeating the boss. If you die, your account will be blocked. Do you not want to give a reward or something? Are you really just treating the protagonist as a puppet?

It's rare to see such an honest author, why didn't I listen

Shennong has tested the poison, and what the introduction column says is right

It fell to Chapter 19. To be honest, I am not a poisoner, but I didn't expect that this book contains 101 kinds of poisons.

Come on (ง •̀_•́)ง

I wrote Terumi Mei's mood after learning that Shisui was a spy. I wrote it a little confusingly, but this is probably the mood: If you are Terumi Mei, you know that Shisui is a spy, he is your friend, and he is also a spy who harms the village. On the one hand, you don't want to kill him, but on the other hand, if Shisui harms the village, you will come out to stop him.

Drama... Drama... Toxic! ! ! Fellow Taoist... Save... Me...

Vicious, one protagonist has no opinion! You are resurrected, either build your own ninja village, or just ignore it! Now, resurrected, the blood mist will continue as it should! In other words, the Mist Ninja Village is still in dire straits, and the protagonist is watching from the side, and then he picks up the girl, and then he can obviously ask the girl's parents, but he says he wants to train Mei Terumi, and as a result, he becomes an orphan. This theory is awesome

I personally tested the poison and died within ten chapters.

The recommendation says that at least 10,000 readers have read this book, so why are there only 5,000 favorites? . . I should be outside the five thousand

It's Li! ! ! Sansho fish Hanzo, good guy, an old poison 😓

It's really vicious, the author doesn't bully me.

I really admire the author. This book you wrote is completely self-indulgent and does not consider the readers' feelings at all. After reading four chapters, I was already poisoned and died. . Anyone who can catch the author's radio waves should read it. I retreated. .

If the protagonist joins, the ninja world will soon develop to what it was like in Boruto's era. Maybe it could be more prosperous. Come on!

Famous scene, Shisui: Sorry, Kurenai, I actually like Asuma

Why does killing Hashirama and the others mean the end of the ninja era? How on earth did you come to the conclusion?

I feel that the strength of Antu's organization will be very strong. First, there is the legendary ninja Qixiu, then Hanzo, Shisui (top-level instant body + Mangekyō Sharingan + Hashirama Cells + Eight Door Dungeon + Indra Chakra). If Shisui turns on the Eternal Kaleidoscope again, then he can open the Rinnegan, and then use Xu Sanohu is simply invincible when he opens the Eight Gate Dungeon, and the author is too fond of Shisui.) Ari Terumi Mei (personally guessing that Terumi Mei will also join Antu in the later period, and according to the author's description in the previous chapters, she will get Nagato's Samsara Eye.) I don't know who will join Antu in the future, but they will definitely be top fighters.

The author is not strict about the division of strength. The Anbu are at least Jonin, and it is almost impossible to have a hundred at one time. For those who are more serious about the original work, it is easy to persuade them to quit. I hope it can be improved a little, and I hope not to write Naruto as a fantasy novel. The part where Terumi Mei is being chased is very unreasonable. Even if the protagonist helps him, it is almost impossible to escape.

When I saw the sea release, I remembered that the Hokage was not finished in the past. When the second generation Hokage was summoned by Orochimaru for the first time to fight against the third generation, he used a water release. Because water appeared out of thin air, a group of people in the post forum started to make the usual nonsense about how the second generation Hokage is the male silver who signed a contract with the sea, the only one who can use the sea release, can use the water release in places where there is no water, and so on. There are a lot of analysis and arguments that have nothing to say. Unexpectedly, after more than ten years of completion, the author really came up with a sea escape today, saying, is it inspired by Tieba?

Seeing now, I fucking realized you were having fun with yourself

I also found that the author let himself go