Difference Engine Era

I hope the author can continue writing

"There's so much going on today, first of all, my poor three children, who have recently come down with bad colds, and I can't get around to looking after them. So poor Sierra has to take on the responsibility of looking after her younger siblings on top of the housework - she's going to be exhausted. " "While I was thinking about things at home, a poor old woman came into the shop. God bless her! She was so thin that I immediately gave her half of my afternoon tea snack, a piece of buckwheat bread, but she ate it too quickly. I poured her another cup of tea. " "After I sent the old woman away, I was thinking about my poor children, and a girl with dragging shoes rushed into my store. Before I could react, she said that she wanted to apply for a job as a clerk. Only then did I get over it. , And began to look at her: the pair of hard cloth shoes she was dragging obviously didn't fit her feet, and they probably belonged to someone else in her family; I looked at her clothes made of dusty rags, and looked at her face - she was obviously still a girl!" "So I frowned and said that we don't accept child labor here. She immediately stood up on tiptoes to look taller, and said that she was from the East End and had not had enough food to grow so short. 'But your face is still very tender!' I wanted to say this, but before I could say it, I was attracted by her proposal. She said that she only wanted a weekly salary of six shillings. So I suggested that it was not enough for her to live on, so she asked me how much the shop earns every week, and then Then I made a condition that she would get a penny bonus for every shilling she earned for the store. I thought it was no problem, so I agreed and signed the contract. After telling her where the remaining half of the afternoon tea snacks were and saying that I would bring her a set of clothes for my eldest daughter, I went home without stopping to take care of the children. Before leaving, she seemed to mutter something to thank me. "I have to admit, that girl is really capable. As soon as I checked the ledger and cash box, she brought five pounds of profit to the store in one day! I quickly gave her the bonus as agreed and sent her away. I must tell the children about it when I get home. This is so magical that people can't figure it out (the last sentence is strangely blacked out by pen, which often happens in this manuscript. Editor's note)"

After stepping in and reading all the chapters so far, I am convinced that this book will have a bright future. The author is very particular about the language context and description of the environment, and the plot arrangement and character design are also very interesting. However, I suggest that the introduction and title of the book should be changed. Without certain knowledge of foreign history and professional knowledge, I am afraid that I have no idea what this book is about.

Please vote, please reply below, whose extra chapter you want to see the most~

Alice Shelley in Others' Accounts Mr. Constance Percy Foreword The following is from a portion of the manuscript found in a manor in Wessex. The manuscript belonged to Constance Percy, one of the previous owners of the manor where it was located, who had inherited it from a wealthy but heirless cousin of his. In these messy manuscripts, we not only understand the image of some of the middle class at that time, but also learn many historical details at that time, such as records about Alice Shelley's early experiences. Although these records are messy and limited in number, they still give us an interesting perspective to understand the historical figure of Alice Shelley.

There is something I would like to explain to you. Regarding the issue of signing the contract, I actually received a station error on the day I issued the contract. However, Yunda was the company I used to issue the contract at the time. You may have heard about the courier company recently. My express delivery was left untouched at the express station for 25 days. I only discovered something was wrong after starting work on the 10th, so I sent it to SF Express yesterday. Friends who have already invested, please don't worry, the contract status should be improved this week.

Constantinople, go to Constantinople! Hagia Sophia, Porta San Manuel, Colosseum, Grand Palace. By the way, I have sent a few formal drawings. In my imagination, Egypt (Coptic) in this timeline nominally belongs to the Eastern Roman Empire. I hope the author can adopt this setting. If used, then the Egyptian characters who appear next should use Greek cultural names, but the locals (Copts) do not believe in the Orthodox Church, but the Coptic Orthodox Church. You can also change Egypt to Coptic.

The pace has slowed down a lot recently. It is recommended that according to the pace of online articles, small problems should be included in big problems, and try your best to raise and solve this small problem within two chapters. You can also consider inserting more period details into the article.

I would like to say that it is best not to directly describe the plot of the subsequent audience with the queen, because it is naturally very difficult to write about it. It is recommended to temporarily skip the specific content and gradually reveal the content of the conversation in subsequent plots, which also leaves more room.

The author's book is really great

12 Votes are given, I hope the author will work hard

I remembered that I recently read a light novel called "The Gambler Can't Pray", which depicts England in the late 18th century very well.

On the one hand, I feel that I am very lucky to have discovered this good story, but on the other hand, I feel that I came too early and the story is not enough! Thank you so much for the author(ง •̀_•́)ง

Chapter 125: Aluminum Alloy is unrealistic. The author probably didn't know that when aluminum first appeared, its value was comparable to gold. Europe was proud to wear aluminum jewelry at that time, but the heroine just let the servants take it so casually?

Why do I feel like I'm watching a detective mystery?

The front part is very good, but the middle part has a bit of a detective and supernatural feel, which makes me feel a little aesthetically tired and tired. Supernatural is not my thing. It depends on personal preference.

Then again, I forgot if I mentioned that. Someone once said that Napoleon was a descendant of Comnenus. So I think it is better to set the royal family of the Middle Eastern Empire in this setting, the Komnenos dynasty, and it should be Latinized. As for the excuse for the war between Ugor and the Eastern Empire, it can be changed to a royal succession dispute.

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Where has the author gone? Still don't write anymore

Hello everyone, I am the author Xiao Zi, one of the readers of Biscuit Sister~ Let me tell you a true story [Push Glasses Once upon a time, a person wrote a book~ Many people came to watch~ Because the author is too educated, some people can't understand what he writes, so! ! Here comes the point! Original text·Fe+CuSO4=Cu+FeSO4 "Tsk, tsk, tsk, what is this? What? What's your reaction? Advocate for foreigners and foreigners!" [Actually, I don't know what I have read, huh! Yes, it's so new~] China has reformed and opened up, please follow suit and improve your thinking~ 😰😰😰😰 Hey, I'm just giving you an example. Seeing the big from the small is the key! Everyone has fun reading it~😎 I wish all book friends a happy reading, and I also wish my good friend Sister Biscuit that this book will be a hit~🔥🔥🔥

This hasn't been updated in ten days. Is this book still to be written?

Has the author been changed and it doesn't feel like it anymore?

Otherwise, take a day off tomorrow...

The pace is too fast, you get rich too quickly, and you lack details.

Is Da Da Da coming to an end? Well done. Finish writing early and find a way to leave early.

Damn, please finish writing earlier and leave earlier...

Why do female protagonists appear in male videos?