Yanshan Inn

The opening introduction is very grand. I feel that the author must have checked a lot of information, but I feel that it is a bit too much introduced at once, such as the geographical location, city gate tower, and tea. I feel that I have not started to be curious, but the author has already solved my doubts. Maybe there is a little suspense~ Come on, author, vote!

3. Book title: Yanshan Inn Author: @ Type: Martial Arts Published: 90,000 words Status: Not on the shelves Test date: February 3, 2020 Trial reading chapters: the first 7 chapters. 1. The overall feeling is that this is a very satisfactory martial arts story, traditional in orientation. There is no big problem in reading it. It is well written, but there are not many highlights. You have to be patient and read on to discover more attractive places. If you look at physical books, it might be easier to find readers when martial arts novels were at their peak in the 1960s to 1990s. However, for online novels that pay attention to efficiency, if the plot is not gripping at the beginning, only those who like this genre will read it. Judging from the introduction, it tells the story of Ye Shan, a young man from a small town who opened a Yanshan Inn and accidentally got involved in the feud between Jianghu and Jianghu. But when I first read Chapter 7, I didn't see the appearance of Ye Shan and Yanshan Inn. After scrolling back, it turned out that Ye Shan only appeared in Chapter 8. I feel that this story really feels like a Jin Yong novel. For Jin Yong's novels, it is quite early for the protagonist to appear. I personally don't think this is a big problem, because I read physical books and read a lot of martial arts novels, but it's hard for ordinary online readers to tell. In fact, if I didn't read the introduction, I thought the three in the first chapter were the protagonists. 2. The beginning. Although this is a traditional story, I still want to mention that the plot of the showdown between the two masters on a rainy night at the beginning is a bit confusing. Later, it was discovered that it was a game within a game, and the introduction was a story told by a storyteller. The author deliberately used a special writing method to express it. The author was very careful. Personally, I would rather see a fresh start. 3. The rhythm is very stable, the author has a very clear arrangement of the plot direction, the fights and scenes are described delicately, and the writing is quite comfortable to read. The first chapter is about the story-telling scene of a Taoist. Although the content is treacherous, the description is really good. The group scenes are combined with details, taking into account the local and the whole. The dialogue between the characters highlights the personality and highlights the key points. 4. When I read about Su Jinxiu's appearance, I began to feel a sense of burden. Because I haven't read much, I can't comment on how well this burden is shaken off now, but at least the suspense is buried.

Finished reading it. The introduction of the environment and orientation in your article is really impeccable. However, there is a lot of foreshadowing in the first three chapters of the storyline. It is best to have a point of conflict and a clear main line. But your fourth chapter is starting to feel a bit better.

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Read it in one sitting. The added parts make the content more substantial and believable, and the writing is excellent, but there are a few areas that are worthy of discussion. Can the names of the three gentlemen who listened to the book at the beginning be more specific? It would be a bit hasty to just mention A, B and C. Could the age of the little girl who fell into the quicksand with Xiaoye Shan be any older? Three- and four-year-old children seemed too sensible and inappropriate for their age in front of the pursuers.

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