
Mechanical Humanoid Travels Through the World of Cultivating Immortals
机械人形穿越修仙世界
- Status
- Completed
- Length
- 185k Words
- Genre
- Western Fantasy
- Audience
- Male
- Subgenre
- Alternative Fantasy
- Updated
- 6y ago
- Source
- Qidian
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84Chapters
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The most important thing to think about the plot and characters of the next book is to write an outline. It's really miserable if I don't write an outline. I'm currently reading a novel about cultivating immortals, but the author didn't write an outline until the end. The beginning was very good, but the further he wrote, the more biased he became. My half-sister read it very well, but he used this book to practice his transformation because he had written four unlimited books before, and it took six years to write. The novel about cultivating immortals that I read was completed in January this year, and he said in the post that it had been six years since he finished it.
Also, if you want to write about cultivating immortality in your next book, I suggest you read the original novel Xiuxian and see how others write it. I think his writing is very good. He goes against the grain and speaks freshly, and it doesn't make people feel that it looks cliché. The shortcomings are that the chapter is broken, and the male protagonist is too buggy! It is simply a common problem nowadays that it is impossible to show how difficult it is for the male protagonist. There are too many cool articles at seven o'clock, and the further you go, the easier it gets. I really can't stand it anymore. It gets easier the further you go, what do you want us readers to think? Just like playing a game, it gets easier the further you go, do you want to continue playing the next levels? Just like "Fights Break the Sphere" and "Douluo Dalu", don't they all become more difficult the further you go, so you can't blame us readers, but you seem to enjoy watching others write exciting articles, but as you go further you find that you can't write at all. Because it seemed really cool at the beginning, I hope that in the future the male protagonist will become stronger and the enemies will become weaker and weaker. I asked, will this book be cool?
As the male protagonist continues to become stronger, it is impossible that he will not have some enemies. It is like you open a company and you become stronger and stronger. At the same time, you also infringe on the interests of others, so others will target you instead of you becoming stronger and stronger, and then others will say it! You see, *** is so strong, let's just vote. It's impossible. If you say this, the world will really be peaceful. It's impossible for a person to be willing to be a wage earner under another person's hands all his life, especially when he is a former boss, just like Jack Ma. Isn't that how people come to be. Aren't all the BOSSs that can appear in the later stage very powerful? The current Shuangwen is that the opponents are indeed capable and strong, but the male protagonist has already surpassed them. On the surface, it is difficult to fight, but in fact, the so-called BOSS should be simple when taking action, not too simple. This is a common problem in many novels nowadays. The male protagonist has an aura that lowers his IQ and EQ. Moreover, all characters without anti-investigation capabilities are usually in the wrong direction. At the same time, whether they are male protagonists, female protagonists or supporting characters, they are all extremely good or bad. Is there really an absolute between good and evil in this world? !
I have only read the beginning for now, I can write better. But it doesn't matter, take your time, move forward slowly, and don't look back.