Online Game Mist Lord

Tsk tsk, the elves are the most arrogant people. It doesn't matter if they serve wine and food, but they are drunk even if they are bullied by a few dwarves! Tsk tsk, look at the elves in other people's books, which one doesn't look at people with their nostrils pointing up to the sky, let alone a few dwarves, tsk tsk! !

I feel that this fight for the position of lord will require more than a hundred chapters. It is very likely that the plot of the fight for the lord will collapse directly.

This is the type of lord in my mind. He is full of domineering power. Come on, the author. I recommend it with 2 votes a day.

This operation is a bit cheesy, do you want to change the protagonist midway? ! !

I read 26, then pulled the table of contents, and it seems that the village was not built until chapter 95. . . This is a serious off-topic

It's very well written, why is no one here? Although there is a slight flaw in the part about renting and buying a house, I can skip it and it will not affect my reading.

I just read Chapter 39 and I was like, what the hell, the previous writing was good, why are there so few recommendation votes? It turns out there is a time traveler (his past life is mentioned in the book), but he is not the protagonist 😅😅. Anyone who has read it can tell me, is there really another time traveler?

I saw that so many people thought it was good and came to watch it, but the plot line turned out to be so confusing? How do you keep looking? It's moving here and there. Goodbye everyone.

After reading more than seventy chapters, the writing is okay, but it feels quite confusing. Does the author have no outline? It is recommended that the author use more methods to assist writing. Make an outline and make a character card for the main character (attributes, equipment, personality, appearance, personality, relationship with the protagonist, background description, appearance time, etc.), Drop cards for major boos, attribute cards, major city cards (specialties, military strength, city defense, shops, main managers). Draw a rough map. The map should be divided into main parts (the core location where the story takes place, such as the protagonist's territory, etc.). It must be detailed. Don't appear to have dozens of square kilometers of buildings on a few square kilometers of territory) Secondary (occasionally described. To draw iconic terrain, don't do it one at a time) Background (basic shape of the continent, how many continents, etc.) Various cards must be updated in real time to prevent forgetting

Fairies and elves and dwarves are not the same system, right

The first few chapters of Zhi Nao and the protagonist are really long-winded. The author's dialogue skills need to be improved, so I'll leave it at that.

I have only read 15 chapters and will tell you my opinion. I feel that this is a game article. There are many supporting characters and things outside the game that can be dealt with in one sentence. There is no need to write so much. Also, can you not make the protagonist so childish? At least he is someone who has played several games. He got a weapon and still has to post to show off?

Rent a house and sleep with sales. . . The emotional line is a bit casual

When I saw Chapter 15, I felt that it was just selling people on top of each other, targeting the elves. In fact, they didn't have the elegance of the elves at all. They literally looked like rude humans, whether it was NPCs or players.

Lord-type novel, the pace is slow and the writing is a failure

The book is quite interesting, but now I see that after buying a house and then renting a house, it's a bit baffling

Friendly reminder: When reading this book, it is recommended to start from Chapter 5 ~ you know the reason 🪖

Many authors have used magic tricks. In fact, I personally think that if you want to agree, you can agree, and if you want to refuse, just refuse. There is no need to take advantage of such unexpected situations to get or not get something.

There are too many supporting characters, and there is no sense of substitution!