Fan Drama Production

After catching up on the latest update, I have something to say to the author. First of all, there are really not many books about animation nowadays, so I read and cherish these kinds of books, and this book is no different. Just looking at it now, there are some problems that the author can notice. As the saying goes, men can't be too fast, no matter what they do. The problem with this novel now is that it is too fast. The protagonist proposes a plan and then it is done in an instant. Please tell me about the next one. This kind of writing is too dry and does not attract readers to continue reading. Writing like this may allow the novel to feature more animated works that everyone likes, but the rapid progress means that nothing has been written, and the outstanding plots, music, etc. In the animations have not been shown at all. How do other novels of the same genre show this aspect? Rely on the praise of the audience in the novel to describe and show the plot of the animation and the places where it is awesome. Writing this way can slow down the speed and make it more fun. What's the cool thing about this kind of Wenzhaogong novel? It's the audience's reaction when we readers read the novel. The audience didn't react at all. How do you explain that this animation is so popular that it suddenly and inexplicably appeared to win an award? I don't know what the author is thinking. This novel is intended to realize all the works in the introduction and then complete it. If so, just pretend that I didn't say it. Another problem is that regarding the daily life of the protagonist, this part of the plot is certainly needed, otherwise the image of the protagonist will be too dry. But the greater role of the daily plot is to adjust the audience's admiration for the animation in the novel and to explain the plot. You don't have this part of content now, and you don't highlight the awesome plot points during the animation production stage, and then write about daily life like crazy. Are these plots related to animation? Related. Is it highly relevant? No. So the content displayed is both dry and watery. I think since the author has come out to write his own animation article, he must have read other people's books. All authors have chapters with a certain degree of watery plots, but they have some exciting and explosive points, so this part of the water is acceptable. Of course, if the definition of this book is daily life and writing animation is just a show, then just pretend I didn't say it. In short, there must be a plot introduction about the animation in the novel, through praise from the staff or the audience, no matter what. Although I have watched both the current movies and the animation, and I believe that most book friends have also watched it, this part is indispensable. You can't ask us readers to know how awesome CL is without writing about how awesome CL is, or just like your way of writing, you can cover it in a few hundred words. This really looks unpleasant and bland. I have written so much, whether it is a suggestion or nonsense, in short, I have made it clear what I want to see. It is your business whether you write it or not, and it is my business whether I say it or not. I hope there will be changes in the future

As long as you support CL, we are brothers

I think it's okay. As long as you blow CL, we will be friends (funny). As long as there are no big loopholes in the future, I will pursue it. The writing style is at least fine so far. The only problems later are the characters' emotions, the handling of the timeline and the depiction of daily life.

If you continue to brag about clannad, we will be good brothers.

Nagisa Furukawa Nagisa Furukawa Nagisa Furukawa

When I saw cl, I rolled in like crazy.

I found a problem, CL seems to be writing a bit fast, what to write next... Although I can continue to copy, but there will be an end to it one day. Although it is okay to keep copying, it will probably consume the enthusiasm of anime fans...

The protagonist doesn't understand music but uses songs to match it. Don't those people have any doubts about the protagonist?

It's a pity. It's hard to find a book about cl.

If you write about animation, give me a recommendation vote first, and then invest in it when the number of words increases. I hope you don't become a eunuch.

If you play softly, you are my half-brother! K-on