Fantasy Magic Costume

Dragon set recruitment building Interested friends can come and sign up Format Nine major costumes (magic costumes) Name: Albert (Salamanda) Magic costume category: Biological magic costume (elemental magic costume/power magic costume/agility magic costume) Magic costume combat skill: Sword of the Abyss Magic costume user: Liante (Mis) Previous magic costume user: Yashiro

I have read more than ten chapters, and it seems to be a good idea and has a certain writing style. But there are also many problems. The main problem is that at the beginning of a book, you have laid too many foreshadowings for the protagonist, including family, magic equipment, abyss, senior class, and unknown ones. It gives people the feeling that there are too many focuses. In fact, there is no focus. It is too confusing. It is better to trigger events one by one and slowly trigger them. The minor problems are mainly that the description of some details is not very good, the handling is too hasty, and the ridicule of the protagonist is a bit too much. After all, the protagonist is also qualified and uses his own resources. He has nothing to do with others. The school is not a good school. He has such strong self-confidence from other students.