Invincibility Starts from the Martial Arts World of Another World

The writing is a must, it's so boring, it's on the same level as me

I think it's better to practice your writing skills before writing.

Doesn't it look good? It feels bland. The subject matter is obviously very good, but I can't stand it.

The subject matter is very good, and the story is also very good, but it feels so empty and boring that I couldn't help but read every line.

There's nothing poisonous about it, just bland and tasteless. It looks quite boring.

When I see you, I'm going to cry, eh eh eh

The plot is so boring. I mentioned before that strength is the most important thing, and the main character is so arrogant that it makes me uncomfortable to watch it.

There are currently no poisonous points, but it is too bland and the writing style needs to be strengthened. Moreover, it gives me the feeling that this is not about ancient times, but modern times.

The story is okay, but the main character is why others are trying to beat you to death. The main character doesn't dare to use force for fear of beating others to death. It's like this every time he fights, knocking people unconscious and beating them until they can't resist. Others are trying to kill you. The main character is so nice. I really like it.

I check for updates every day. I have constant support and recommendation tickets. Come on. Click on the header to see the death and death, and the surprise of death

Goldfinger is interesting, but there are many problems with the portrayal of the protagonist. Let's not talk about how few scenes the protagonist has at the beginning. Let's just talk about the 9-year gap. I don't feel that the protagonist is doing anything at all. It's like sleeping except for practicing. The mental aspect is also similar to the temperament of the physical body itself, just like a child.

I guess the author himself is only twelve years old😳

No wonder I'm on the street, there are too many common mistakes in common sense

The protagonist's mentality changes little and seems rigid. Indeed, the originally good subject matter seems pale. Moreover, the protagonist lacks a motivation. Like many novels, it is very clear that he must either survive, beg for a girl, or beg for sex. . .