I Created Naruto

In the first chapter, I directly persuaded them to quit. Since I suspected that the puppet master was not dead, why not just destroy the puppet and let the protagonist die directly? After all, it might be a disguise, and the puppet was trained with human life to become such an evil thing. I read some comments and heard that the protagonist survived and was recycled and reused as a wage earner. This organization is really very righteous.

It should be said that this is a relatively real thing. If you don't lick it, you can't help it. You have traveled to the evil person and been caught. The impulse is to die. Even if you escape, you will be wanted by the whole country. Basically, you will not stop until you die. A normal, ordinary modern person would not be able to change his mentality so quickly. After all, he saved the heroine, and those people could not just kill the hero casually. The author just needs to control the intensity. Personal opinion_(:τ∠)_

The author writes very well, I'm looking forward to it, keep going.

Let me summarize the shortcomings and advantages of the author 1. The idea is good, but the text is really poor. The author has definitely read too many fantasy books written by the author. Damn, the protagonist can die without touching his nose, right? 2. Many people talk about the problem of dog licking, but few people can understand the current situation of the protagonist. After all, reading books is just for fun, so the author needs to describe more about the current situation and the sins committed by his predecessor 3. The writing skills are much worse and cannot describe the personality conflicts between the two souls of Chen Fei and Yuan Wutian Author, please read the book review. If you are just a self-pleaser, then we readers will not say it.

The performance of the protagonist in the early stage was a bit unsatisfactory, but his performance in the latest chapter was okay. I will wait and see and hope that I will not be disappointed.

People want to kill you, so why are you kneeling down and licking you? Where can't you go with golden glitter?

There is no point in reading dog-licking novels

The subject matter is quite interesting, but the setting of the protagonist is too persuasive. He has the ability to escape from prison, but he insists on staying here to find punishment. I am speechless.

There are only two kinds of comments. One kind likes this style, and the other kind doesn't like it. Most of the people who surf the Internet want to read interesting articles. The protagonist is indeed a little timid. Normal people would be angry when other people put knives on their necks. After all, if reading a novel is not satisfying, it is better to read Andersen's fairy tales.

This book is actually pretty good, but the protagonist has such a weird personality, not to mention the female character. That guy Fu Bai had nothing to do but kill you, but you are so kind and sociable. Are you sure you are an ordinary person? You actually don't hate Na Fu Bai at all. He cuts you and keeps asking the protagonist to kill him, but the protagonist seems to have forgotten about him. It feels like the protagonist has changed! No male roots? Born a eunuch? ? ?

No more updates? It's a pity... I think it was well written.

If it were a dark novel, this book would have the potential to be popular, but I don't know why the author would write such a dog-licking novel.

This pig's trotter's understanding of society is really extremely poor. Anyone who has been out of society for a few years will not be so naive. At least I have more ideas than when I was studying. This kind of thinking feels a bit like pig's feet are just adolescent cubs. Not like a social animal who has left society.

When I read Chapter 38, I couldn't understand the author's train of thought at all. The reason why Namikaze Minato didn't run after he had the ability at the beginning was that he was "worried about being hunted by the power of the state and wanted to cling to the official lap to clear his name", so even if those people were unfriendly, I accepted it. Okay, I accepted this reason... And then in Chapter 38, you faked my death to escape? Exm? ? ? Are you kidding me? Then why did you do so many things before? Selling someone a favor? It's just crazy

It's time for the protagonist to mature. Without Yuan Wutian, I don't know how many times he would have died.

These pictures are the same again, others kill you and you save others. If you do this, you will really be regarded as a dog licker, although there is a reason. I said before that if you let him go, the Qinghe faction will punish you at most but not kill you. Now this woman will use all her strength to kill you as soon as she comes. You still saved him. Wouldn't you write that he just wants revenge? Not really killing you. You see, none of your recommended votes are on the list. I feel like I'm the only one watching now. It seems like I'm going to be a eunuch. He can't shake off his reputation as a dog licker.

The author only has creativity. What the hell is writing? How is the protagonist shaped? It's like this. Awesome. To be honest, I can continue watching it simply because I have nothing to do right now. In normal times. I didn't even look at it. What did you write? Is the protagonist too soft?

This is a discussion post. Express my opinion. First of all, there is the issue of licking that many people talk about. 1. I have seen ordinary people quarrel with the police and traffic police, but I have never seen anyone quarrel with the National Security Bureau. 2. The protagonist is an ordinary person, and his fear of the authorities cannot be eliminated in a day or two. 3. No one likes to take the blame for others. Why should I help others bear the consequences if I didn't do it? 4. Is it uncomfortable to just lie in bed and watch dramas, eat potato chips and drink Coke? Do you have to hide in a dark basement and fight for your life with your arrogant laughter? So I think what the protagonist is doing at this stage is a normal and reasonable behavior for a small citizen who wants to get out of trouble without getting into trouble. But, but, I think the author also has some things that he didn't handle well. 1. It's still a matter of mentality. To be fair, if I won a lottery worth 100 million (meaning that the protagonist obtains first-class strength or above), even at the beginning, my own mentality would change, and I would become more arrogant and bold. Hey, I would feel overwhelmed if I bought thousands of non-necessities, but I usually would not buy such things. 2. Plot. Let's analyze it. Kui collected blood beads to open a certain ruins or perform a certain ritual. It is very reasonable that the protagonist will be targeted by Kui if he gets the blood beads in the game. It makes sense that the protagonist got the blood bead in order to make another god to completely eliminate the remaining spirit of Old Yuan Tou, and then he was watched by the boss and taken to the auction. It was reasonable for Kui to suspect him because he showed a different behavior and demeanor from Old Yuan Tou at the auction. Then it was discovered by Kui that it made sense to be a god of another kind. But, but, what's going on with this cat? It's true to say that cats are curious. Cats can use Chixiao to show that the cat is not from the chaotic evil camp, but the protagonist cannot use it to show that the protagonist is from the chaotic evil camp. With the vigilance of a cat, a cat will rashly approach a powerful person who is labeled as evil? Even if the cat thinks this person is not bad, it should at least observe it secretly for a while, right? I understand that in the author's script, Old Yuan Tou will not die so easily, but this will give me the idea that the author is simply telling the readers that I am just trying to whet your appetite. This makes me feel bad. I hope the author can design it better when promoting the plot. The final plot direction. My analysis is that there are no more than two directions: the remnants of Lao Yuantou were "successfully" eliminated. The remnants of Lao Yuantou have not been eliminated. 1. There is nothing to say if it is eliminated, it is difficult to do so. If I think about it more uncomfortable, I think the author may have dragged it out for a hundred and eighty chapters, with two personalities fighting for control of each other, causing a lot of troubles and entanglements on the way to escape. 2. There is no possibility of being eliminated. It may be attached to the puppet and run away. Or become one with the protagonist. The ruins are going to be opened anyway. I just don't know whether the blood beads are opened as tokens or sacrifices, that is, can they be kept after being opened or can they be used after being kept? At least I tend to be gone, useless. I think in the author's mind, personality confrontation and fighting for body control is the main thread in the early stage. Lao Yuantou will not lead the dog easily. To get through the early stage, you need to give the protagonist a belief. When you are in a different world, what are your thoughts and ideals? Become a guardian of national security, or a strong man who is free and comfortable and no one can force him? Lao Yuantou is the grandfather who inspires the protagonist's belief. But I think it will take a long time to wait. Anyway, I guess Chi Xiao will lead to another plot. All book friends are welcome to discuss. Trolls are also welcome to spray it and increase its popularity. Of course, I won't offend you if you just complain. By the way, I personally hope there will be a female protagonist. Don't want a vase. Come on, author!

The writing is very good. I have read many novels like this, but later they all collapsed inexplicably. As long as the author doesn't collapse, I can keep following it.

In the seventy-first year of the founding of the People's Republic of China, I read this book at night. When I first read it, I was very happy! To meet the book of unity, yes! In the back part of this book, the vernacular stereotypes are too much to be read. What I am thinking is that if I go back to the beginning, I should not read the book! I regret it so much! I have a lot of resentment in my heart and nowhere to vent it. I am posting this comment to express my thoughts!