Heaven Simulator

After looking at the first few pictures, I think the style should be plain and very comfortable. The initial APP settings are OK, and the protagonist's reaction after time travel is acceptable~ But I'm not saying that you still have some grammatical errors. See this chapter for details. One more thing, segmentation! Although one sentence is long enough, the number of sentences is only 1, which can easily cause discomfort. Remember to comment on each other 🙂

It's not enough,,, it's totally too little. Collect it first! !

What the hell are chapters 50 and 51? Isn't Pig's Foot the God of Creation?🤔🤔. Can't he even enter his own world? How did Zhang Jiao's Tai Ping Sutra be given to him? There is also the will of the world. Wasn't that created by the protagonist? Why do we need to refine it? Am I not reading seriously?(´◑д◐｀)

After reading a chapter, I hope that the main character will be indifferent and selfish. It is best not to write a female protagonist. If there is no female protagonist, it is better to have fewer female supporting characters. Try not to write about brotherly love. I understand everything. I will read it tomorrow and keep it for now. If a female protagonist appears, I will leave immediately. I rarely write comments. I hope the author can work hard and don't write about female protagonists. It is best for male protagonists to be selfish and cold. I suggest you read dark, cold-blooded and ruthless books so that you can write cold, selfish characters.

After reading fifteen chapters, I was confused. Nothing in the introduction was relevant at all, and the topic was irrelevant. It could be said to be off-topic. There was no description, just daily life. It was hard to persevere. When I came into contact with people, I started to engage in dark things. How could I get good grades?

Hitting the cover