Makinoichi

{"NickName":"Book Friends 20191214145857186","UserId":340714623}Hello

Make a suggestion How about you write in more paragraphs? I don't know the result but I have to try everything. I'll watch it again when the time comes, but don't expect my words to change much because I'm a newbie too.

Why is this book finished? It's just one chapter 😢

Um. . . The writing is very good and has a very visual feel. But if each paragraph is too long, the reader will lose interest. It does not need to be as long as writing an essay. But overall it's still good, keep up the good work.

Agreed, downstairs, I'm still thinking of investing in a petty bourgeoisie 😃

Here I come! 😁😁

The author is extremely talented😏😏

Isn't it tiring to write like this? It's a bit messy. The writing is good.

Thank you for supporting me

I hope everyone will support me and use the building to promote it. Don't be surprised! ! !

It's so powerful that even if you write two thousand words, it will be a fairy tale. It's a pity that there is only one chapter that is similar to a preface.