Douluo Dalu: Summoning the Gods

It feels so stupid and embarrassing. You can ask your adoptive mother to help you get the soul ring, but you have to make up the plot.

Why is no one talking? Very well written

. . . What's so good about Shrek? The fact that he only recruits geniuses shows that he looks down on ordinary soul masters and is too utilitarian. The teaching quality is still poor. The simulated training environment is all borrowed

The protagonist of the Douluo fanfic is either bigger than the protagonist. . Or it's a loser. . Disgusting

The plot is a bit too imitated by the book Final Yan Douluo. The two protagonists have almost the same experiences. I really can't spend money on this book because I basically know the plot and it's boring.

10 Points for creativity, 3 points for writing, just one word, watery, makes me want to drop my phone📱

Not to mention how good your writing is, don't be a eunuch. You, the author, should go back and learn. Sword and Shield: The art of wielding a sword from the palace,? Ah?

You have no other meaning in commenting, I just want you to go back and read Douluo carefully. The first question is the age issue. Even if you are a child like Shui Bing'er and the others, are you still as old as Xiaosan? And who told you that Dai Mubai joined Shrek when Xiao San was seven years old? He is only three years older than Xiao San. Let's not talk about the characteristics of the martial soul. If you want the protagonist to be powerful, it doesn't matter if the original martial soul is so awesome. There is nothing to say, but do you know what an external soul bone is? ? ? You said it's an attached soul bone, but it can also turn into a right arm bone? ? ? I'm afraid Douluo didn't watch it at all. He just watched a few episodes of the anime and then came to write a novel.

How can I say it, I don't really like this kind of fake loser flow. If you really are a genius, you can show it directly. 😁😁

Has the author watched Douluo Dalu? The protagonist and Shui Bing'er awakened their martial spirits together when they were 6 years old. In the original novel, Shui Bing'er was a few years older than Tang San. Now the protagonists are all the same age as Tang San. It also took three months for Tang San to awaken his martial spirit before going to school in Notting City for the first time. He had never left the Holy Soul Village, yet you write that the protagonist can buy something in Notting City. Ding City met Tang San and Tang Hao casually, and Tianshui Academy ran next door to Notting City. The author wrote it blindly. In the original novel, the protagonist never heard of Tianshui Academy when he arrived in Tiandou Empire, and now they have gone next door. Tang San stayed in Notting City for 6 years and never heard of Tianshui Academy. Who are you dealing with in this novel? Don't you know to check it after you finish writing it? If you can't write one well but you still open two, do you have the ability? I don't dislike you here, don't you have a point in your heart? Here is some advice for you. Before writing fan fiction, read the original work several times. As it is now, no one will read it. After reading a few chapters, you will abandon the book and write in vain.