The Junior Brother of the Prehistoric Era Is as Steady as a Dog

I thought it was a bit interesting at first, but then Sanxiao, Yang Jian, etc.'S characters changed and it became boring. You see, it's like the collision of one person's infidelity and the original work.

To be more serious, if you stay in the world of cultivating immortals, you are destined to die. After all, in layman's terms, cultivating an immortal means cultivating one's mind, which is also going against the will of heaven. It is completely inconsistent with the state of cultivating an immortal. Sooner or later, you will die, so the dog-type novel is interesting, but if you follow the trend, I can't stand it.

First of all, let me explain that this is not a bargaining point. I read about 20 chapters and found a problem. I haven't seen a clear explanation of the realm of cultivation so far. I won't speculate below the Immortal Realm. The Immortal realm should be divided into: True Immortal - Earth Immortal - Heavenly Immortal - Golden Immortal - Da Luo Jin Immortal. That's all I guessed. The protagonist's cultivation level is not clearly introduced in Chapter 20, but he certainly has not become an immortal. Then here comes the problem. A person who has not become an immortal, no matter what way you practice, the essence of your life and your cultivation level are placed there. I am really puzzled that the master of spells cast by you, the apprentice, cannot detect it. I don't know how the author defines Daluo Jinxian, but in essence, he is far different from the protagonist. Both his cultivation level and the depth of his spell practice are many times stronger than the protagonist. A person who has practiced Huiyuan for several times sometimes cannot even find the protagonist or see through the protagonist's clone. I would like to ask, is this master the body of a practicing dog? The protagonist hasn't become an immortal yet. If he becomes an immortal, wouldn't even the Tao Ancestor be able to see through it? Are you forcibly lowering your IQ? I really don't understand the author's setting. You set Gou Dao to be able to reduce the sense of existence, but that's only if he is successful in cultivation. The protagonist is quite an ant to his master now, or else you are a fake Daluo Jinxian, the kind of saint who can be blown up by a nuclear bomb.

Everything was fine in the past, but when it came to Yang Chan, she kept threatening her, acting like a licking dog, just doing nothing.

Come on! Must persist

It was a little better up front, but when we got to Pangu, our mentality changed. Don't you want a dog? Aren't you afraid that Pangu will seize the body or something? As for you, just because she is a person who has traveled through time like you, can she be your companion? The back has been completely swollen

Is the author a bit too smart? Can you write a good article until it sucks?

There is indeed a distance between me and my senior brother who is too steady. It seems that Yang Chan can't get through this corner. I'm a bit tired of looking at it all the time.

When it comes to Yang Chan, I feel a little uncomfortable. When it comes to comparing poems, I really can't stand it anymore! Forced embarrassing plot→_→

The previous one was good, but I had to write a dog-licking article.

To be honest, it feels a bit serious. I invested in it, but after the main character competed, I didn't know what was going on.

Come on, keep at it🙂🙂🙂

I really don't like the Three Holy Mothers you wrote