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The character setting has collapsed since the second chapter. The combat power system has also collapsed since Chapter 10. Only creativity is left, and only creativity is left. Although, creativity is also borrowed.

My impressions of this book are confusing. Please give a brief introduction about traveling through 99 worlds at the same time. I originally thought it was the same type, but I found out that it is a charlatan type. The protagonist is too funny. Innovation is a good thing, but please finish the plots in the anime first. The Uchiha alone does not meet the mainstream of fans who have watched Naruto. Otherwise, don't travel through the Uchiha. Please put the characters into it, so that it feels like a person who clearly should be angry but is not. Similarly, many people nowadays don't pay much attention to details when reading books, so what you want to highlight is the big picture. If you want to innovate, please introduce the Hokage who started from drawing his sword. If you want to follow Konoha, don't choose Uchiha. Other anime are also inconsistent with the mainstream judgment. If you want to innovate, please guide the readers from the beginning, so that readers can understand your thoughts, rather than directly understanding them like fragments. There is always a process for whitewashing. You have written more than two hundred pieces. I don't know you. What's the outline of the book, but what I read was a mess. The good thing about this book is that it's okay in terms of comedy. There are a lot of laughs. If you specifically write a relaxing and entertaining book, it might become popular. When I first wrote about Gray Wolf, I thought it was OK. The only thing that displeased me was that Gray Wolf's start wasn't actually bad, but you let me see that Gray Wolf was a bit disappointing. You have to know that Gray Wolf actually has many fans. Some of Gray Wolf's qualities, talents, and whims Wonderful thoughts, you haven't shown it yet. Although your setting is different from Time Travel 99, it is a read-block setting. Although this kind of setting can connect you with the character, you do not highlight the characteristics of the character itself. Is this any different from watching a person travel through every world? Your theme is clones. Each clone has a different personality and different characteristics. This is the biggest plus point! The evaluation is low, and the details of the plot are not paid attention to. It is recommended as entertainment.

What's the point in seeing that Big Big Wolf didn't choose scientific research talent and gave it up?

I'm convinced, just write it well, but you can't use your name when you get to Hokage? He's the second pillar again, and he's the prince again. He's poisonous, right?

Traveling through time too fast. If there are too many worlds, it will become a water world and water. The potential of other worlds has not been fully explored. I was originally looking forward to working on several worlds together.

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I still like the style of this book. Books of this style are usually easy to write in the early stage and are very refreshing. But they are easy to collapse in the later stage because they are not very round. This is a test of one's writing skills. For books with this theme, the writing style is very good. The one of Feng Qiuhuang ended too early. Don't blame me for forgetting the name. There is also another book that I have been reading recently I can recommend the author of these two books. Read both of them. It is good to learn the plot of the previous one. The setting of the latter book is very good. I think it is better to have a more rigorous timeline. Readers are no longer blindly pursuing the fun. The degree of fun should be uncomfortable and not too cool. Otherwise, it will easily lead to aesthetic fatigue. Appropriately adding some puzzle elements will retain more readers 😁😁

Archived to Uchiha, the whole family was wiped out, parents, relatives, friends, and people they liked were all killed. Using this hatred, they all evolved into the Mangekyō Sharingan. The younger brother, who was still calm and raised his enemy, helped with the task of ordering the destruction of the Uchiha clan's village. Shouldn't it be that Sasuke was killed first, then Shimura Danzo and his clan were killed, and then Uchiha Itachi was tortured and killed by leaving the village? Sasuke will take revenge on Konoha when he knows the truth. Is the protagonist's love for Konoha greater than anything else? None of them want revenge.

Big Gray Wolf's abilities clearly include scientific research capabilities, right?

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The empress wants to kill the protagonist, but the protagonist not only shows mercy but also accepts the empress as his disciple? What three views? Author: I stabbed you several times. If you don't hate me, do you still want to recognize me as your father?

When you read the chapters about Uchiha, can you ask the author why he wanted to whitewash Konoha? It's obvious that you have been ostracizing Uchiha since the Second Hokage. Finally destroyed the Uchiha Manchus. The author also said that it was his own fault. Still calm Konoha worked. According to the setting, it is myself in the parallel space. Author, are you saying that you are creating a white-eyed wolf? But even a white-eyed wolf knows right from wrong.

Why don't you dare to write about Gray Wolf? Just write about immortality. Other great authors also wrote about the ability of Gray Wolf at the beginning of Zhutian, and you can knock out battleships with a hammer. Damn it was still very popular, and no one said anything. I am so worried about such a small start, especially when Pirate World uses a trick to get the blueprint of Pluto. Big Big Wolf: If he expresses dissatisfaction, he can knock out the spaceship with a hammer. Such rubbish design drawings are not as powerful as the black technology created by Big Big Wolf with his bare hands. These poisonous batch of apparently good starts have been written so badly by you.

You have no idea why there were a lot of people at first and why there were so few people later. People who read this kind of cool article want to see the popular world. What about you, what are you writing about, Eva? This kind of two-dimensional dimension is too niche.

It's better not to have the Gray Wolf at the beginning. Alas, at least the novel will be smoother. Immortality is not difficult to obtain in so many worlds. Why do we have to choose the Gray Wolf? As a result, I chose Big Big Wolf, which only uses one egg for immortality and recovery power. Is the extra intelligence point taken away? Are inventions eaten? Has your study and research been eaten? If it was said at the beginning that these cannot be used in other worlds, or can only be used in the world where Big Big Wolf is, then forget it, but the result is that they are very disgusted with it even though they know that this is Big Big Wolf, huh? ! It shocked me 🐴 for a whole year, and then except for using Gray Wolf to learn how to swim when committing suicide, I never used Gray Wolf again. The protagonist went directly in the direction of improving physical combat power. As a result, no matter in the world of Dragon Ball, Pirates, or Apostles, which can be broken down a little and have a lot of black technology, they are all pure and fragile fools. It is better to write Patrick Star as the clone at the beginning. The villain is also immortal The one I watched next door is "My Wife is the Leader of the Group" (probably), and I feel that that is the real Big Wolf, who goes to another world to save people, is fully armed, and can also locate himself from his own world to the current world within two hours, and return to his own world directly without going through the chat group Oh

The setting is somewhat similar to 99 Worlds, but the plot is a bit too world-bound and the writing is not very good.

I want to say that Gray Wolf's greatest strength has never been his resilience. His greatest strength is his creativity. He can build spaceships with just a wrench. He can even build a time machine, nuclear bombs, armor, and a bunch of black technology. If you just build some spaceships in the pirate world, you will be invincible.

I saw Gray Wolf coming in, and I didn't expect that the author didn't mention Gray Wolf's scientific research talent at all! And it doesn't even have the most classic lines, which is really disappointing.

Why don't you destroy the character? You borrowed the ideas of your book from others, and the text is not good at all. Only the character is a little likable, but you ended up writing it yourself. No wonder this book has such poor results.

I came in with my brains in mind, and I went out with my brains gone.

The Earth Dragon can make a wish for the top Saiyan bloodline, the author wants to eat it

This is the first time I have seen an author write such a weak Super Saiyan.

I felt uncomfortable when I saw the Dragon Ball chapter. The protagonist made a wish to get the top bloodline of the Saiyans and directly transformed into a Super One. Originally, the power was increased by 50 times. A Super Saiyan punch is equivalent to a peak punch in the normal state, and the total amount of Qi will not change. When I saw Karin Sage, the transformation of the protagonist was just a fight. To be honest, your transformation is just a change.

If the Earth Shenron could change human bloodline to Saiyan, it wouldn't have been so troublesome when he became a Super Saiyan God. Use some brains, just enjoy yourself. I won't talk about the fucked-up Konoha in front of me. He said over and over again that he had truly lived in Konoha for 14 years, and he gave up Itachi's hatred between the lines. It was so funny.

It's too embarrassing to show off, it's too forceful to accept women, its combat power is too poor, and the supporting characters' personalities, such as Wukong's transformation into a fish, are generally not as good as 99

It was like a lunatic with no plot at all, and it made my head spin.

I should have the ability not to write. It's so disgusting to just write and not do anything.

Big Big Wolf is the strongest. In addition to his immortality, he also has the ability to invent.

Navy training camp? I think it's a pirate training camp. It would kill someone in a fight, good guy.