National Beast Control: Sign in the Ancient Prison Dragon at the Beginning

The protagonist is too mentally retarded and the supporting characters are even more retarded.

The setting is not very good. What blocks the meridians is chaotic impurities. There are two ways to open up the meridians. There is a "crushing" method, which uses one's own demon energy to crush chaotic impurities, and an "elimination" method, which uses the power of creation to cancel out the impurities. Analysis on this setting. 1. Cancel each other, then what? One plus one equals zero? There must be new substances produced. 2. Where do chaotic impurities come from? If the meridians really exist, the chaotic impurities blocking the meridians cannot be virtual matter. The settings of other people's books, such as opening up meridians, are all opened from scratch, and there is nothing to explain. You are born with chaotic impurities, why don't you explain it? You even know how to cancel each other out, so you need to explain a little bit about how it came about. 3. Use demonic energy to crush the chaotic impurities. Where will the "broken" chaotic impurities go and how will they go? You have to talk about it, you can't just give a rough setting and be done with it. 4. Since spiritual energy can crush this chaotic impurity, why can't others help crush it. I say this because the meridians are already there, and the chaotic impurities are also real, and there is no reason why others cannot break them. The settings in other books are to open up the meridians from scratch. Others cannot see the "none" state of your meridians, so they cannot help. But your meridians are ready, but they are blocked. The blocked material is known to be broken by demonic energy. There is no reason why others can't help. 5. The meridians have always existed, but have been blocked. Does this mean that everyone is a peerless master, but has been sealed? This... 6, I am not a fan, I just think it should make the setting more perfect. Instead of giving a random setting, it can easily give people the feeling that the setting is too empty and fail to retain readers. If the author could explain the above points, would the setting be more substantial? In addition, the number of words could be increased 👏

Seeing that there is no change at fifty strength, don't write about your level. Just find a job in a factory.

The subject matter is good, but the author's writing skills are not good enough and he can't write it well. Of course I will talk about the old keyboard warrior 🤓.

I haven't seen such a novice article in a long time. I dreamed of going back to junior high school.

It feels a bit mindless and the rhythm is a bit fast and slow. I think I can guess them all. I will draw all the thirteen ancient gates and finish them. Thank you.

The protagonist doesn't know how to behave, which means the author doesn't know how to behave either.

There is also a global beast master that was probably created by the studio.

After seeing so many people criticizing it, I thought it was pretty bad, but after watching some of it, it was actually pretty good.

I want to read a novel about conquering the world with only one Erha

At a macro level, the world system has not been clearly shaped, and the boundaries, boundaries, and domains have not been explained in detail. Also, the starting point is too high, and there are always super treasures, the kind that are tens of thousands of years old, but the pace is too slow and the descriptions are easy, which does not give people a sense of satisfaction. Then there is the bloodline system of monster beasts. In a small city, or a small city far away from the imperial capital, there are too many people with high bloodline. Then the bloodline system in this book is not clearly stated. From our point of view, the bloodline of the six-eared macaque is not low. I don't know what else you can write about later. (After reading part of it, the most intuitive feeling is just to express my opinion. It has no intention to target the author. I hope the author will work hard. I also prefer monster novels)