Zuckerman

Well, I finished reading your book. I feel like the content is actually very well thought out. But your writing is very messy. Paragraphs that are too long can be divided into appropriate paragraphs. The word count is too short and there are too many characters. I think the story could be made much longer. Your character's name almost came out, and Balabala said a bunch of things. Then there was nothing. There is no character introduction or character development. Especially, and very importantly, after the name came out and a lot of words were said, I still didn't know what kind of animal it was talking to. Finally, shamelessly, I want to ask you what you think of my book. Why are you following me.