The Elf Master Starts with the Big Eater

Well, I would like to remind the author that many books are about to produce results. If you grind hard, you will grind yourself to death. Pay attention to yourself. It is a good book with good ideas, but it may be inexperienced. Look at the rhythm of those big guys. Maybe you have better ideas than them, but there are still various skills in writing books. Come on 🤫

🤓 Emma, ​​Jiangjiang worships Qianzhang online

Not talking about this book, but most books with other backgrounds in China. I don't understand why everyone thinks that fat people must be weak. Although she is round and looks kind-hearted, her size advantage since she was a child is not something she has always been accustomed to. It's okay to say that in places where fitness is popular, the size advantage may not mean the strength advantage. But generally speaking in the country, fat people are stronger than ordinary people. So I've never seen that kind of weak fat guy. It is true that fat people are easier to talk to, even most of them. After all, fat people have a soft heart and a fat body. But when he stares at it, most people will be frightened.

The writing quality is quite good in my opinion. But there is a serious problem. Is steel type poisonous? This is very serious. You said that the steel type cannot completely resist poison type damage. I can understand that the lightning bird used thunder to hit a baby gopher without harming it. That is definitely unrealistic. But the steel type is poisoned and the fire type is burned. . . This even subverted the basic rules of elf battle. Anyone can be poisoned. In the future, when we meet in battle, we will release highly poisonous poison to ensure that the poison has no solution. The author explains in Chapter 39 that the steel body is composed of steel and flesh. That's not right. They are made of pure steel. Big Rock Snake Little Fist Stone will use rocks to repair the body. The illustrated guide for the clay doll giant states that it is a man-made clay doll that seals the soul. The three-dimensional dragon is generated by computer programming. It doesn't mean that elves have to be fleshy. The bronze elephant will not be poisoned. Once you are poisoned, your entire combat system will collapse. You can write fan fiction in two settings. But if the original rules have been greatly changed. This doesn't have that taste anymore.

Well, I came from ** Reading to invest in you, the author will be very proud! This book feels better than the last book now. After all, the last book has more than a thousand chapters, so it will be somewhat improved.                                                                                                    The first one is the introduction. I think this introduction is dispensable. After all, most fans know the elf or have read a lot of the fandom. There is no need to write an introduction for each elf. It feels like the word count is too low. Second, this is not a problem, it is just a bit embarrassing. Why is it a foreigner from the beginning (not discriminating against foreigners), but it feels a bit uncomfortable to have John. Why must it be John? You can be Zhang San, Li Si, Wang Er, hehe, this is a bit confusing, personal thoughts, just complaining.                                                                                                                                                                                                                                                                                                        The last one is the initial elf. I can't say it's not good. I quite like the Kirby monster in the beginning. However, there is a problem that needs to be considered. Kirby monsters are so edible that ordinary families cannot afford to raise them. Ordinary poor families cannot afford to raise them. The average ones may only be raised. If you want to train them well, you can't just skip them all at once. If you encounter serious readers, you may make mistakes. Friendly reminder, the above personal suggestions are for reference only. 😁😁😁😁 There are other good-looking elf fics, Xian Miao, that I hope you can leave a comment on. Well, there are no fics to read. I hope readers can support me

What follows is really hard to describe. The protagonist, who has a mental age of 30, behaves in various childish ways and is incompetent and furious. The characters are all broken. The plot is also awkward in various ways.

I saw from the comments that someone said that the steel type was poisoned in Chapter 22, and the author replied that there would be an explanation Then I turned from Chapter 22 to Chapter 30, what is your explanation? What about the so-called realistic explanation? Maybe I missed it. After all, I flipped through the page very quickly. Maybe I just mentioned a few sentences and didn't see it. Because I thought that this serious issue would be explained in a long paragraph, but I didn't expect to see it. Maybe the explanation will be in chapters after 30. Then I have to say, this is really vicious. If you don't explain it earlier, you will be criticized or criticized by readers? Finally, let's talk about the problem itself. Steel-type Pokémon are immune to poison. Only the corrosive Flame Queen and Salamander can poison poison and steel-type Pokémon. But! ! ! Poison type attack moves are still useless against steel type! The pursuit effect will not be triggered! Only the poison-type changes, such as poisonous skills, can poison the steel-type. Even if it is reality, we must respect the original setting and blindly modify it to be able to justify it. What's more, there's no explanation yet

If you really can't write an emotional drama, then don't write it. A thirty-year-old man is trying to be "ignorant and youthful", and the only thing that's nondescript is childishness and embarrassment. It gives me goosebumps all over his body. I have endured all the troubles in the past and it is obviously getting better. I felt numb when I saw that awkward and blunt young love scene. I really can't stand it.

I wonder what the purpose of the background arrangement is in the United States? I don't see the difference! On the contrary, it's a bit awkward

The author's last book was about the outrageous and embarrassing talk in the live broadcast room, which made me leave the book directly. Other than that, I hope this one doesn't have a female protagonist and has a somewhat intelligent appearance.

Regardless of the race value, isn't the speed and race value of the Flying Mantis in the game faster than that of the Giant Pincer Mantis? However, the Giant Pincer Mantis in the anime has the title of red flash, so it can be improved by some special training, such as imitating the pirate's shave, but don't train it or it will be boring. You can weaken it.

Let me ask, I saw in the book that the race value of an elf is the maximum attribute value of an elf? Is this really what the author set up?

You're too disgusting, forget it, Fire Spot Cat, forget it, Kati Dog, Gotha Duck can't stand it anymore, bye.

I have a question. In Chapter 22, when Kirby fights against the Bronze Elephant, how did hiccups poison the steel-type Bronze Elephant? Steel type is immune to poison

It's not very attractive in the early stage, and it's a bit confusing.

If there is a quasi-god, I strongly recommend the Blood-Winged Flying Dragon and the Metagross, but please don't write about Biting the Road Shark! It's really badly written!

The first picture of saving people for time travel is a bit poisonous

Book 92: Don't recommend it anymore. Please start with me.

From the current point of view, the early stage preparation is good. The creation of Pokémon and characters is very appetizing, realistic but not cruel. I hope there will not be some low-race Pokémon with explosive output, which is very unrealistic. Don't be too fast. After all, I don't have money to raise it, but I still hope that there will be a biting land shark or Metagross, if there is one! A cliff-hanging big prize!

? ? ? Entering the palace? ? I just haven't watched it for a month.

Big Eater, I'm afraid your name will get you 404

Personally, I feel that this one is better than the previous one, but unfortunately the previous update was unstable and had a big impact.

What's going on? Author, please give me a shout~

The start is a bit abrupt, but the rest is fine