Yu Jiutian

This book is so poisonous. The frustrated Lao Wang and the disgusting Assi. Either you are being laughed at or you are being bullied. The protagonist is a weakling who can only talk. Seeing it now, I feel aggrieved. When will the protagonist become stronger? If you don't want to just talk, just do it if you don't accept it.

Mapel should be like this

I am also an old book friend of Skeleton. I also read it from the Mecha Trilogy. It was a very touching time. But when I read this book, the pretentiousness of the opening chapter made people feel that the taste of skeletons suddenly changed. The unsmooth connection of the upper and lower paragraphs, as well as the blunt and poorly written story of beating the young and growing old, all made people feel that they were forcibly learning the pretentious routine of pretending to be a pig and eating a tiger that was popular a few years ago. However, this obviously did not grasp a reasonable degree, and it felt I feel that the protagonist's despicable character is not popular in this kind of invincible novel, or it may be because the writing vocabulary of the skeleton is not gorgeous enough to make people read, and the pretense limits the reader's imagination when it reaches a small climax that can be felt. The description of the female characters, especially the dean, feels cold, and it is not possible to feel that this is a living character. Finally, after reading about 40 chapters, I can no longer watch. Although I will still silently support the skeleton, I still keep it in my heart 🌙

To tell the truth, no character dialogue would be written without the word "tell the truth".

It is said that the era of 5G is coming, an era of reshuffle of the Internet. The security guard at the door of the God of War's house accidentally understood a formula... But was unexpectedly discovered by his adulterous son-in-law. The son-in-law turned into a billionaire and divorced his daughter. The security guard was so angry that he died in depression. Before he died, he told the God of War that he hoped someone would guard his tomb for three years. Three years later, the daughter who was supposed to be married by the God of War was suddenly annulled. The God of War was furious and tens of thousands of retired soldiers from China came. Unexpectedly, the plane crashed and the God of War and nine stewardesses were stranded on Huangdao. Ten years later, 49 people were found. After returning home, God of War's family fell into decline and his daughter was seriously ill. Faced with the high medical expenses, he silently turned on his mobile phone and dialed the number that he had not dialed for ten years... Uncle Da! It's me! Are you still recycling equipment? Right! The kind where ingots arrive instantly

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This is actually a very sad topic. No one can be seventeen forever, but some people will always be seventeen. I recently read a few new books by authors I once liked very much. Although I can't say that I am outnumbered by others, I really can't recapture the original feeling. Talking back to this book, I personally feel that it is a good article with a score of about 70 points. It is quite satisfactory and has the author's unique style imprint, but it seems rough and lacks breakthroughs. If you don't like it, don't spray it. I still like "Mobile Storm" the best among Skull's works. Let's talk about the worldview first. 79 Points. The most outstanding thing about this book is that it incorporates quite a few of the author's marks. The setting of the Eight Tribes reminds me of the original "Kaioh". The Nine Gods seem to be the epitome of the Eastern Dynasty, and the Sanctuary is the Western culture. With the addition of elements such as the Sea Tribe orcs, the world view is richer. Coupled with the background of online games, the starting rhythm is actually not bad. But there is a bug. Which came first, the game or the world? Judging from the later revelations, the game was inspired by Wang Meng's spread to other worlds, so Wang Feng's all-professional buff at the beginning seems a bit forced and far-fetched, but it doesn't hurt. In addition, the details of the battle and the setting of the realm are not described in detail, which is also a little regretful. Character creation. I can only give 50 points. The author who read Skeleton before said that he deliberately set Wang Feng's character to be this kind of image that is a little bit arrogant and arrogant. This is the dilemma I feel many once brilliant authors face now. In an environment where the basic routines of online writing have been exhausted by most writers, many authors will deliberately pursue some new settings to distinguish their previous works. But image control requires a good sense of proportion. Wang Feng gave me such a fragmented feeling. For a character with a somewhat commercial temperament, I cannot believe that he would choose to run away and struggle silently for ten years in order to complete the online game. After completing the feat, what he wanted to do during time travel was to go back and marry his junior sister. With no way to go back, the change in his role as savior seemed too abrupt. Just judging from the shaping of the article, in most cases he does not look like a person who does big things. I'm not saying that the protagonist must have the same personality, but when necessary, there should be more descriptions of the mentality of this key node to sublimate it. As for the descriptions of other characters, they are too superficial and lack detailed carving. Except for Axi, who has a relatively obvious contrast in personality, the others seem a bit too simple and simple. In terms of plot, I think I can give it 59 points. As a cool article, there are actually quite a few cool points about pretending to be cool. The paragraph is interspersed with many reports from Shengguang Daily as narration, which is indeed a clever technique. In line with Wang Feng's external image, there are quite a lot of pretense. However, in terms of the overall plot direction, in addition to the obvious anticlimax, there are still many ill-considered situations. First of all, the bright line of the whole text is actually to collect the Nine (Dragon) Pearls, then unlock them step by step, and finally break the void and return home. Using collection as a clue is already relatively thin, and the rhythm of the first four beads and the last four is quite unbalanced. This is also a sign that many authors finish too hastily or cannot hold back in the later period. In addition, the all-professional buff at the beginning has almost no sense of presence in the later stage, and there are too many hangups. Wang Feng's emotional line is too hasty. The CP in the early stage should still be Da Ge. Even if there are adjustments later, Ji Xiangtian's ranking should be relatively low. There is almost no emotional intersection between the two. Of course, there are still some small bugs: If Antang is one of our own, what is the purpose of Bing Ling's Ice Bee Disaster? If it was just a cover, then in the final confrontation with the Nine Gods, would Ice Spirit have no doubts about the Blade Alliance? Why did Wang Meng want to keep Jiuzhu, but Wang Feng took Jiuzhu back? Of course, the biggest question is, what did Nine Gods do wrong? The final decisive battle turned out to be the destruction of the Nine Gods. Generally speaking, this is just a national war between two forces. In fact, there is not much evil in the description of the Nine Gods in the whole text. I even have a good impression of them because of their strong oriental characteristics. The Nine Gods Emperor was just a strong man eager for a breakthrough, and the final war was just a means to force his opponent. If the war was to be reversed just because the protagonist was reincarnated on the Blade, it would be too far-fetched to use the reason that there were too many casualties. Moreover, the so-called four major provinces set in the ending actually just postponed the war, and fundamentally did not deal with anything. So that this change is just Wang Feng's ladder to the gods, and it really cannot withstand careful scrutiny. To sum up, I think this book can only be regarded as a satisfactory but slightly rough novel. As readers, we are no longer what we used to be. In fact, we really hope that the author can grow with us. I hope that Skeleton and other old authors can make new breakthroughs. 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It was agreed at the beginning that there would be three updates on the shelf. Obviously there are saved manuscripts and they are automatically updated every day. Today, one update was interrupted. I mean, really, bro, why don't we go back and write about battles? Although there are not many words, it is better than this port. At that time, what I was chasing was a mess, and now I feel a headache after reading this book. I came from the earth to write more than a hundred chapters and wanted to go back, and then ran back to refresh a new map. Then I really don't know what to say. The soul world you wrote yourself is soul-traveling. As a result, your body has now gone to the Ice Spirit Empire. Are you forcing yourself to enter the new map? Brother, the original account has been banned, so I can only use a small account to force comments. I also hope that the master can update the three updates as promised before it was released. I will continue to support this book until it is completed

It's finally finished! In fact, there could be one or two more chapters at the end, one chapter each about Rose Jiulong's later life and Lao Wang's end on earth. Generally speaking, the ending is not unexpected. After all, the ending of the Temple is very similar, and the ending is quite hasty. For me, the best part of the whole novel is the beginning, the portrayal of Da Ge and Lao Wang's campus life. It is precisely because of this that I downloaded Qidian to support it. The middle part is pretty good, but the ending is a little rushed, and a lot of the foreshadowing in the novel is actually skipped. There's nothing more to say. I wish book lovers can find more good books, and I wish Skull's next new book will shine.

The invincible little white article is pretending to be invincible. The invincible little white article is pretending to be invincible. . .

1: Don't look at the early stage, look at the mid-term 2; The early stage is basically the beginning, the peak, and all kinds of pull and pull are completed. 3: Everything is empty, just like looking at water literature. 4: If book friends are still looking at water literature in the mid-term, then don't read it and just throw it away. 5: There is a chapter in the early stage where the author said... The protagonist will no longer directly slap in the face or anything, but will waste time. In fact, they are treating the protagonist as a clown. It is not as good as the circus. I am not talking about the circus. But in the early stage, the protagonist is really a clown! ! ! This protagonist was ruined and was destroyed by the elves. What a pity.

When I looked at the opening settings, I couldn't help but sigh... He is indeed a master. This setting and world view are obviously for the purpose of adapting online games. . . After all, Platinum Master's work is the most qualified and likely to be adapted. Of course, the setting must be clever. Nowadays, there are many interesting new books that are not suitable for adaptation. Even a master can understand it😒

Why can't I search for the book "Temple" at the starting point? I miss this book so much. It's still that pure book. It doesn't have many words, but it's all the essence.

After reading the latest chapter, I finally felt relieved. I only recognized the "Wang brothers" in Wudi Liu. Hahahaha, it's okay to make jokes, but don't forget you still have to be strong.

We have a spy in our midst.

Suddenly the combat power level was upgraded to dragon level... Now that I married Ji Xiangtian, I felt like I was giving away a daughter. Su Yue was the first one. Brother Tan probably really regarded him as his elder brother 😅

I still remember the four of you appearing on Hunan Satellite TV. If you don't force yourself, I'm not considered your fans in the first place. Goodbye.

From now on, we will forget each other and never see each other again!

Stop writing fairy tales, really. Neither word applies to you.

Dad, don't be nervous, I don't love you, I love you. 😄😄😄

I registered this account fifteen years ago after reading a novel about "Chasing Skeletons". Now I can't even remember the title of the book. I'm old!

Awesome, it turns out Caritan is not the heroine. Do you really dare to write about Skull? If you don't get scolded to death, I lose.

Excellent. I kept updating it. It's really excellent.

Third Young Master, tomatoes, potatoes, now it's the skeleton's turn

What Kalida wrote here is that something is wrong with me. If the result is like this, why bother writing so much foreshadowing? There were so many scenes for the character of Kalida, but she was snatched away from the heroine position by Ji Xiangtian, who wrote less than ten chapters. I don't think it's a pity that any of Winnie, Snow Princess, school girl, and fish-man princess are not the heroines, but I really can't accept Kalida. Although the Snow Country is being hunted to get rid of suspicion, why is it written so ambiguously? As a result, I went all-in on Da Ge's stock. Even if the skeleton went the old way and collected a harem, I wouldn't feel so uncomfortable. As a result, such a plot made me, an old fan who watched the rise of the skeleton, almost die. I fell in love with the novel Skeleton: The Raptor Crossing the River. I am also a cheap person. I basically read pirated copies of all the books on the bookshelf. This is the only book I plan to order because it is written by Skeleton. I will insist on ordering all of it even though I am disappointed.

I haven't read this book, so I was bored and flipped through the monthly list one by one to see what Yuewen authors had updated today. This is the first book on the top of the list.

Do you think Kalida is disgusting? The male protagonist was squeezed so hard by Kalida but he didn't even have the slightest idea of ​​resisting. He was just lusting after himself. If he didn't resist, forget it. He still wanted to get Kalida. It was very baffling and very depressing to watch.

In such a high building, no one will see me eating shit, right? 😏

It's been revealed, the Holy Master is Wang Feng! ! ! After the master disappeared, he went to the earth, but lost his memory and became Wang Feng. The world of Yujiutian designed by Wang Feng was actually the subconscious mind of the sage master. After completing the ultimate mission, he traveled to the real Yujiutian, so this world is exactly the same as the game Yujiutian!

It feels a bit like The Deer and the Cauldron, too slutty. Skull has always been written in the invincible style, but now this style has been completely changed.