Reborn as a Good Person, Rewarded in Kind

To be honest, I don't know how the author's classmate wrote the outline. I found this book at around 1 o'clock in the morning and spent more than two hours reading it. I got to the last chapter and let me tell you my opinion. If it's wrong, please forgive me... In fact, there is no big problem, it's just awkward... The protagonist wants to do good things, Good deeds, yes, there is nothing wrong with this part. As for the emotional line, it is too awkward... I won't talk about the achievements of this book. The author is very clear. When doing good deeds, don't involve intrigues. Urban writing, intrigues, there are not many popular ones... Also, as for the emotional line, if you are thinking of a harem novel, then just go straight to it. A kidney will be fine. If not, a large size will do. For other things, don't be too ambiguous... The protagonist in the author's article is entangled with too many things, which makes it quite awkward. We are already entangled enough in reality. Don't have so many worries in the world of novels... When Of course, I don't deny that creating conflicts in the text can deepen the reader's impression. However, those novels are either great or popular. Urban novels are especially difficult to gain popularity. Therefore, fellow author, my advice is, if you can listen, just listen. If not, just follow your writing... It's just awkward...

🙂The author's book is very beautiful! It exposed a lot of the squalor in this society! It's just that I'm worried that you will get a 404! Just like the book I'm a Really Big Star from before!

To be honest, the author's book is a breath of fresh air in the Shenhao stream. Love it, love it. I will always subscribe. I hope the author can stick to it. Come on

Dear author, is the content in the past two days too discouraging? Everyone reads novels to feel happy, not to feel aggrieved. The protagonist is kidnapped, and there is nothing she can do about it. She has to rely on a girl to sacrifice her body to the kidnappers and help the protagonist escape. This is the plot. . . It's very confusing I don't quite understand the role of this plot to help the protagonist transform? Last time the protagonist changed and a girl died, will another one die this time? Is the protagonist's change driven by the constant death of those around him? It is clear from the introduction that it is a joyful novel, but it has to develop in the direction of darkness and sadism, emmmmm, it is very inconsistent And I first read this novel when I saw the author's recommendation in a book list, saying that it was very enjoyable. Now that I read it, I feel aggrieved. Maybe the author wanted to have more depth, or maybe he wanted to suppress his desire first, but he is honey and I am arsenic. Anyway, I can't accept it. Personally, I feel aggrieved to have a girl be raped because of the protagonist's escape. Even if I avenge the girl later, I still feel aggrieved Maybe I am not your target reader. I can't stand such a heart-wrenching plot. I am not a party or a member of the same boat, so I resigned first. I hope you will have more readers who can accept this style, and I hope your books will become more and more popular Goodbye.

Come on, good people will be rewarded. Do you believe it?

This book is poisonous, the first reward is 10,000 yuan

Trash cannot be in the trash! I regret it so much!

Do you know why it ended at 540,000 words? You taste it carefully. A good novel must have a sense of immersion. In fact, the setting of Goldfinger in this book is very good, but the storyline is written like a fool. After enduring it for dozens of chapters, I still got the poison in Chapter 41. God-like novels are most taboo against being divorced from reality, such as rewarding anchors with tens of millions or hundreds of millions, or giving cars and houses to people they don't know. The protagonist should slowly develop from an ordinary person in line with reality. This book goes against the grain😭

I think why not change the name to the Strongest Trash Collection System?

I hope that the author will not feel pressured to write how to write, and not to be kidnapped by *** morals. Sometimes people have to be ruthless, and if they are not ruthless, they will not be able to stand firm. Besides, in China, there are too many red eyes and too much capital.