The Technology Empire: A New Origin

It's not that the technology you write about is bad, nor that your writing skills are bad. But the technology is too advanced and the government will not put it in private hands, but it is easy to get a 404 when writing about the government, which makes it uncomfortable to watch. . .

Some suggestions for all book friends: First, this book is suitable for beginners, very beginners. Secondly, since the article is already a no-brainer, there is no need for you to spray it. I couldn't stand it after only reading Chapter 13, and I will tell the author a few poisonous points: First, when you went to salvage the spacecraft, you actually brought an Internet celebrity with you. You were going to get the items you would need to live in the future, and you didn't know the situation of the spacecraft at that time. You think the possibility of exposure is small, right? You can't be too cautious about such an important matter, right? Secondly, the protagonist has had two lives (in the first life, Huang Ying was already married, so the protagonist should have traveled through time after he was almost thirty years old. In the second life, he was an old man who lived for decades, and now in the third life, although it started before the first life), I don't know what the author's character setting of Huang Ying is like. But as far as Chapter 13 is concerned, he is a person who dislikes poverty and loves wealth to climb high. When the protagonist sees that his blind date is the person he had a crush on at first, he immediately stops walking and asks for a date. Even when dogs are mating, they have to smell and test each other. . . 😅

How to say it! Since you said at the beginning that a Level 4 civilization discovered the Earth and had ideas about it, and you risked your life to escape and knew that the Earth was in danger, why did you still waste your time on the Earth? You also found the spaceship. Why not just go to the moon and build a base? Are there few minerals on the moon? He even went to Somalia. Are you playing? Don't you have a robot? Aren't you in a hurry? He also came back to start a company to produce jj mobile phones, games, virtualization and other messy things. By then the fourth level civilization will come. What's the use of what you've done? Are you going to use these to challenge spaceships and battleships? Back on earth, if you take out your high technology and don't give it to the country, that would definitely be contradictory. The country cannot allow you, an uncertain factor, to develop like this. You definitely won't give them spaceships and battleships, or even if you give them, the country won't be able to make them for a while. So the question is, how can you face a fourth-level civilization? Build a base on the moon. Wouldn't it be nice to build an army of robots? Are the moon's minerals not enough for you? I think your spaceship is just for fun. Wouldn't it be nice if the Earth could occasionally take away some technology? Will it cause 404 if you write like this? Write a science and technology novel and insert some poisonous points in the middle. It would be strange if readers would give you votes.

I have to say that the overall design of the plot is good, I like it very much 🙂, but the only flaw is that the details of the plot are not very good. I can understand your situation as a first-time writer. Well, I have also tried to write novels (I have not published them) 😥, but I just write whatever comes to mind, but the plot is not fully presented. Come on, I haven't fully detailed the plot. Maybe you, the author, didn't notice it when I said it now, but you will notice it then 😁. Don't think my words are unpleasant, I just don't want this good plot to be buried here😁 I hope the novel will get better       . . If you are a reborn person. . If it were you, who had lived a long time in the past life and traveled the universe, would you be nervous at a press conference in this life? 😰 If in the past life, your girlfriend became someone else's young woman because you had no money, what would you do in this life 🤔

After a long time coding on my mobile phone, my eyes were dazzled, and I thought about giving up. However, after seeing everyone's recommendations, collections, and investment friends, I told myself not to give up. Finally, thank you for your support. I will work harder and hope to get your encouragement and support! 😄

The author must make a clear distinction: an individual is an individual and a country is a country. There's nothing wrong with being patriotic, but don't do it directly as a gift of technology. After all, technology has value. If you do this kind of thing too much, you will become someone who is taken advantage of. When the higher-ups ask for your spaceship, do you want to give it to them or not? And eggs cannot be put in one basket.

This golden finger is so abnormal that there is no sense of expectation at all. If it had been someone else, it would have unified the world. Your spaceship can shoot through the earth with one shot, so what kind of company are you playing with? Go directly to Mars to build a base, then build millions of combat robots, and then artificial intelligence will directly take over the earth and destroy all nuclear bombs.

Facing the threat of Level 4 civilization, the protagonist is still showing off, and chapter after chapter is full of women.

​ ​​​​​​​​​​​​​​​​​​​​​​​​​​​​​​​​​​​​​​​​​​​​​​​​​​​​​​​​​​​​​​​​​​​​OUT out of the gate, I'm really looking forward to it. But after continuously seeing the cooperation between 360, a foreign gang leader, and Microsoft, I regretfully gave up. It is not necessary to eat pig's feet alone. What is uncomfortable is the way of thinking of pig's feet. You crush them in all aspects. It can be said that the technology has overturned the table as soon as it comes out, and then you find a bunch of reasons to give your competitors a way out and money?            ,,? Don't talk about being discovered by an alien civilization and develop it. With the cultural attributes and historical methods of the West, it will never show mercy if it can push China into the abyss. Even if it is going to perish tomorrow, it must first settle down. Are you still dreaming of a global republic? Sorry for not paying attention to the publication date of this book. I think it should be 18 years later at the earliest. The Western bloc has been attacking China for at least 4-5 years, right? Perhaps because of this, I have become more aggressive recently, so I apologize in advance for any offense I may have caused.          ,,, You don't necessarily have to quarrel with heaven and earth. What you are secretly trying to do is to drive your peers to death. If you can sell it in foreign markets, sell it. In this way, they are actually the ones being blocked. How long can they last? Are you afraid that they will flip the table and restart the earth? With countless technologies at hand, it shouldn't be difficult to deal with pig's feet, right? After all, the tenth-level civilization is the back-up man.

The protagonist will be excited when seeing the sports car⊙∀⊙! They are all people who fly spaceships. Just like modern people who own sports cars and go to ancient times to see luxury carriages, they are as excited as if they were speechless =_=! And the energy of your spaceship is too weak, right? Nuclear fusion is more durable than yours.