One Hour of Effort Every Day

This is my first time writing after years of reading, thank you all for your support! 😊😊😊 I have quite a few flaws, like being ambitious but lacking in skill. Please feel free to offer your opinions here, and I, this lazy bum, will try my best to correct them!

Hey author, don't just bury yourself in writing and waiting for recommendations on Qidian.com! Recommendations are based on user search keywords, popularity, monthly tickets, recommendation votes, and even user reading habits, like urban fiction and light novels. This isn't very friendly to new authors.

The title and content are completely mismatched. I thought the beginning was quite interesting, but after only a dozen or so chapters, it completely fell into clichés. They even said they'd work hard for an hour every day, but they only wrote a dozen or so chapters like a lazy bum, and then they were working like dogs, frantically producing chapters.

Was this book submitted to the wrong category?

My investment failed, and at 7 PM they were still mocking me as a "loser king" 😭.

The book has a good subject matter and writing style, and I invested in it, but the author's description of the plot feels too abrupt. It's disjointed and lacks a clear beginning and end. There's little introduction to the main characters and some supporting characters. They suddenly appear and are mentioned briefly during their appearance, which feels very abrupt.

Is this a new author, or a secondary account created by a veteran author? 😰

The initial writing was fantastic, but then the lazy, slacker persona, which required an hour of effort later on, was completely gone, and the work somehow turned into Peppa Pig or Boonie Bears? There are so many excellent anime series; why are you awkwardly writing this kind of animation and then praising it? We've all seen those before!

Is this just another self-indulgent piece by a college student?

Author, you're really honest; you're all talk and no action 🤭. Your writing is detached from reality, making it difficult for readers to relate to the story. You want to try your hand at every industry, which inevitably leads to failure because you simply lack the control and pacing.