A Name for a Lifetime

{"NickName":"The pen falls into the clouds","UserId":224989968} The author is great, but I have little talent and little knowledge. If you can appreciate it a little, you can read my review. If you feel something about it, it is an honor for you. At the worst, it can be a joke. This is the first time I have written a long review. I am looking forward to this book. Let's put it this way, the novel setting, bold combination and innovation of various ideas are the great attractions of this book. Especially the part where the bank robbery and boxing begins is wonderfully written. But starting from Chapter 30, the plot always felt a bit disappointing to me, because this plot has returned to the same stereotyped urban face-slapping behavior in the past. For me, this kind of plot is far less attractive than an enjoyable battle. I even think instant kills are better than this. Let me briefly talk about a few characters, Zhou Zheng. In fact, Zhou Zheng's character is quite vivid in the bank scene, but more plot is needed later. As for Hua Buyu, I believe that Xiao Buyu's behavior of protecting the master can poke the cuteness of many people, but later on, I personally feel that the character becomes blurred. How can I put it, yes, there are fewer scenes, and I originally thought that her setting is a kind, cute and shy girl, but later... It kind of fell apart. Let's talk about the protagonist. As for the setting of the protagonist, for the time being, I think he is sinister, powerful, cold-blooded, and arrogant. But I think it is a bit too arrogant, a bit like the unsightly male protagonist of a cool novel, and such characters are often not very likable. Other aspects, the comedy aspect is pretty good. Finally, I want to say: Not every character in a good book has to be distinct, but the setting of the main characters must be distinct. And if there is a good book, there will not be only one main character. It took almost an hour to write. I'm tired and have to go to class.

Well... The author doesn't need to be too anxious~ The author's writing style and structure are very good. I believe this is definitely a good work. It may be due to the comparison with the previous work, so there is a gap, but the upper part is a fan work after all, and the audience is larger. Now this original work depends on time and plot. However, the fan base of Poisonous Egg has a much better start than ordinary works, but the two types are different, and it will take time to accumulate readers. Also, as a man, you need to be calm and don't be too anxious! Don't just want to fast forward to the sexual stage, just advance the current stage of the plot step by step. The accumulation of foreplay is also very important!

The author would like to give some advice. It is best to find a way to cure this stuttering, otherwise someone will definitely say that the number of words is too low, and if the stuttering is too much, it will also affect reading.

Hey hey hey, it comes from poisonous eggs

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Brother, you were the first book I invested in, and then you became a eunuch. I read your Harry Potter book, and I think your writing is not bad. Why am I so depressed this time?

Come on, Xiaozhou I have always thought that you are capable You can write a little bit like a master As time goes by, you can see that the writing power is also increasing, and the thoughts are quite deep, but the expression is too obvious I have a sentence in my memory for you: You are an unsheathed knife, with its sharp edge exposed, but a good knife should be hidden in the sheath. Finally, come on!

From Poisonous Egg, I absolutely love this style of writing, come on! All the poisonous eggs have been ordered (the only support a poor high school student can do is to order them all 😂), waiting for you this book (๑ゝω╹๑)

Egg, can you look at this picture?

Dear writer, your new book is very good. I have joined the new book investment group. Please update~

It seems that the writing is okay so far, but I always feel like I am dancing on the tip of 404~ I think the book is quite exciting if the environment is relaxed, and the dialogue between the characters is okay, but I feel that the description of the female characters can be strengthened. Hua Buyu feels like a relatively fresh character, right? I sincerely hope that this character can be written well, please come on I invested 10,000, I'm optimistic about you

Come on (ง •̀_•́)ง Whether you continue to write or open a new pit, I support it.

I'm back to burn incense again. I like this book very much and support the author. I hope the author will come back and finish it. I will give it my all. I hope the book reviews I read elsewhere can inspire the author, and I beg you to be notified of the new book. You bastard, want to give up every day? Give it up, my writing is very good, what are you afraid of, great people all come from the street, at worst, you can gradually gain popularity, at least you can achieve a small fortune, at the worst, you can still have food and clothing, are you afraid of wool? Would you like to be more of a man? When you write a novel, are you afraid that no one will read it? Are you afraid that no one will read your good books? The aroma of wine is not afraid of deep alleys, and good books also need to ferment, so take your time. Keep up the good work, I support you.

To be honest, although the pace of your book is slower than other books, your writing is indeed better than others. But your writing is a bit slow, so you won't attract many people. Others are slow and write more chapters If they are fast, they write fewer chapters As for you, slowly increase the amount of writing you do I can only say that in my own small circle, I recommend books to you and hope it can help you.

Why are there so few people? This book is obviously quite good.

What a potential author, but it's a pity that he doesn't write anymore 🙄