Hogwarts Poisoned Egg

After reading the previous part, what should I say? This book is indeed as poisonous as its title. The author is slightly lacking in the outline of the emotional system. The emotions with everyone seem to be in place in one step, and he is already powerful at the age of eight. Of course there is no problem at the moment, but I am afraid that the power system will collapse in the later period. Moreover, although the emotional drama in this book is described in one step, what is interesting is that Shu Zhong's emotional description is quite a lot. This book gave me the feeling that romance is more important than fantasy, which is a very strange book. Looking forward to the later stage.

To commemorate the first fan I could read. I was very happy to see it, but it's a pity that Hermione is poisonous.

To be honest, this novel had the greatest impact on me among the many fanfics I have read. Many of the novels are very heart-warming, so I have ordered them all. I felt anxious in some places at the end. I don't know if there were too many malicious people in the comments that influenced the author, but I have to say that this novel is worth reading. No matter what others say, I think this novel is very interesting. Worth seeing

To be fair, I personally think it's right to choose Hermione as the heroine. Ron is not worthy of it, but Elsa, why don't you post a picture for us to see?

After reading the single chapter posted by the author, I have a lot of emotions. I just want to say: You should update it soon! ! !

Great, I haven't seen such an interesting Harper's novel in a long time. Especially the protagonist has a good character, and she is capable but doesn't pretend to be a bad person. She doesn't criticize anyone. The light warmth when reading the book is very touching. Especially there is no such kind of woman who is called a tsundere in the devil, a woman who is called a bitch in our country, or a woman with perverted thoughts such as a younger sister! Come on, author

When I saw the chapter where Harry "confided" to his parents, I was so stunned that I cried. The tears couldn't stop falling down, so I got angry... And came to reward me. The hot-chicken author tricked me into crying Tell me about your side I cried while writing, and I cried while reading, so we're even This is the only fanfic I've ever read, which gave Harry and James Lily such a great consummation, a pair of people who have always loved each other deeply, but have never met each other. Watching Harry and his parents talking about the little things in life, buying clothes, making friends and playing games, it was very trivial and ordinary, but the tears couldn't stop flowing. This was their first and last encounter. Reading fan fiction rather than original works, isn't it just that you want to see and get in touch with the lives of those people in the story again? This plot allows me to see the most valuable and meaningful point of fan fiction. With this, you have tickets and rewards!

To be honest, I really like the story constructed by the author. The setting of the characters makes people feel a "real" feeling. Logic and other aspects are completely self-consistent, or the author's attitude towards fans is very in line with my taste. I previously complained about a book where a character had his heart broken and was left floating in the water for two days and was criticized. It feels ridiculous to think about it. The combination of reality and fiction should be similar to the author's approach. It can be exaggerated but not nonsense. The author's reasonable development of the original characters makes people feel not only real, but also imaginative. The sense of anticipation makes this book particularly attractive to me. So the author should work hard! I will subscribe automatically when you put it on the shelves.

Very good book, come on author

Can you stop fucking when you write a book? There are so many modal particles that you have to fuck. . . Looks disgusting. I used to read the first chapter of a book where the main character traveled through time. Damn it, I deleted the book as soon as these two words came out. If it weren't for this interesting book, I'd say goodbye.

This update speed will have to be maintained until next year 😵

One chapter a day is a bit stable 😁

I have to say, this book is so beautiful, I absolutely love it! It's an absolutely great book. If it continues like this, I'll become a fool because it's so good! What an explosion!

Make a wish and give the twins a happy ending!

Red envelopes were also given out! Rewards are also given! Recommendation votes are also given! Monthly passes are also given! Although there are not many, wouldn't the author express his feelings?

Well, about Aunt Petunia... When Harry was one year old, his parents were killed by Voldemort when he was an infant, and Voldemort disappeared. Harry was entrusted to his aunt by Dumbledore, and with a letter explaining the facts, he asked his aunt to raise Harry until he reaches school age. The difference between Harry's life and that of a slave: Although Harry's clothes are Dudley's old clothes, they are not dirty or torn; he does not eat cakes and sweets every day, but his three basic meals are the same as those of his aunt's family, and he does not need to beg and steal on the streets; Harry's behavior is well-behaved, his outlook on life is normal, and he knows right from wrong; his body is thin and thin, but he is agile and healthy. Original work: First, "comb your hair!" He growled, which was his way of saying hello in the morning. Almost once a week... Yells at Harry that it's time for him to get a haircut. Harry has had more haircuts than all his classmates combined. " The aunt's family at least kept Harry clean and tidy. The reason why the clothes looked sloppy was because Dudley was bigger. If Dudley was a thin man, Harry's clothes would also fit him well. This only shows that the aunt did not spend more money to buy Harry new clothes. Not giving him new clothes is not abuse or harsh treatment. Raising children is not cheap either. , The biological second child also often wears old clothes. Haircuts are once a week. Haircuts are not cheap in Britain, right? Secondly, "Harry brought plates of fried eggs and salty bacon to the table... Harry could see that Dudley was about to get angry, so he wolfed down his portion of the salty bacon before Dudley overturned the table. " "To be honest, they didn't let Harry starve, but they never let Harry eat freely." He didn't starve, and the whole family ate the same three meals a day. Lao Deng's letter clearly explained everything: the cause of the death of the Potters, Voldemort's disappearance and the possibility of returning. In the eyes of the Muggle aunt who does not understand magic and Lily's ancient protective spell, Voldemort will kill Harry when he returns. Lee is still on Privet Drive, and it is certain that his family and Harry will die together. In this case, the aunt still adopts Harry. Isn't the aunt afraid of death? In terms of life and death, the aunt can do it. Some people say that her aunt took Harry in because she was afraid of Dumbledore. She wrote letters directly to Dumbledore when she was a child. Didn't she know that Dumbledore was more polite? But because of Lily, she had a basic understanding of the wizarding world and knew that good wizards would not use magic to kill people. How could a pervert like Voldemort who killed his sister and brother-in-law write letters politely? Which wizard is more terrifying? When they adopted Harry, they had already considered Harry's future. This was not just a matter of responsibility, but a preparation to bear the responsibility of a child's future. If they were just out of disgust and revenge on Harry, they would not talk to Hagrid like parents. They just didn't believe in magic and were afraid of being jealous of magic. Let Harry take the "right path". Otherwise, let Harry go and Dumbledore's people come to pick him up. Wouldn't it be nice to take this opportunity to get rid of a burden in a reasonable way? Because everyone's general impression of Petunia's family is negative, this article focuses on discussing them from Petunia's perspective. Yes, I also disliked them when I watched it, but many people didn't take it into consideration. Is it okay to be too involved? To be honest, as a Muggle, Harry is just an orphan. How about you being so kind to raise a child from an annoying relative? He also has a "specialty" that you don't like? Would you like to adopt him instead?

I'm looking forward to this book when Snape might even have a child

We must be considerate of the author. It must be hard for the author to never stop updating. We should not rush him. Give him a little more time and a little more gentleness. Don't rush everything away...

Snape was the first to have a child. Yes, he was looking forward to it, but why did he consider a girl first? 😊

I really can't accept the emotional line. Elsa, who is in her 20s, likes the 10-year-old protagonist, and the protagonist, who is mentally in her 30s, likes Hermione, who is about 10 years old. Isn't this a bit of a psychological problem?

I couldn't stand it after reading more than a dozen chapters. No wonder the title of the book has the word poison in it. The setting of Obscurus is quite good, and it conforms to HP's original setting and gives the protagonist a golden finger; the identity of the time traveler is also handled well. Other than that, it's all poison to me: the protagonist has been sick his whole life, and finally he is reborn into the HP world, with a healthy body and powerful magic that normal wizards don't have, but all he thinks about is women? ? ? Would an adult woman with a normal mind and an independent personality express her willingness to fall in love with an eight-year-old child? ? ? The first thing you do after learning how to do it silently and without a stick is to take off someone's underwear? ? ? I heard that there will be a scene in the future where the heroine is treated with a love potion? ? ? Is this all the protagonist has to offer?😥 What poisonous eggs, yellow eggs are just the same. It is recommended that the title of the book be changed to "The Days I Falling in Love in HP", this will save readers like me from innocent mistakes 🙂.

I feel good from the beginning, I just hope the protagonist doesn't become a mutant horse

Complain and despise hp On the one hand, the protagonist group Harry Potter and others in the book have never acknowledged and even rejected the lineage theory. On the other hand, the protagonist group and even the entire world view believe that their children will be equally excellent in whatever aspects their parents are good at, such as Harry's talent for finding balls and Neville's bravery. . . In other words, in fact, the point of view of many works is like this, both at home and abroad. On the one hand, one despises people's blood theory, and on the other hand, they talk about inheritance 😅

Why is this article so popular? People who watch it are disgusting Later, they give Hermione an age-increasing agent and then do it. Isn't it disgusting? Can a magic potion be used to cover up the crimes of dirty gangsters? There are still so many people praising this kind of poisonous article. Let's eat something good.

I'm really convinced. Doesn't everyone think it's right to criticize the teacher after being scolded for being late? ? , Don't ask, he was in the ward all his life in his previous life. I suspect that the author wrote this setting to push all the poison points to this. Other people's children can enjoy life even if they are reborn at most. The protagonist's first thought is to sleep with women who want to support him. Readers are all the same as monsters. I also like funny protagonists, but I am not the kind of person who likes to do excessive things as a funny person. When I meet such a person, I just want to say you are not funny. . .

I feel like I can't stand it after four chapters when I'm reading Xiaobai's online articles from ten years ago.

When I was a child, I thought the Dursleys were very hateful. Now I see that although the Dursleys did not give Harry good conditions, they at least raised him up. Three meals a day can be guaranteed, and although the clothes are old, they can be replaced. Although the room he lives in is not big enough, he at least needs his own private space... During the 11 years that Harry grew up in the Dursley family, all living expenses were paid by the Dursley family. Then compared with Harry's parents, although they left a lot of money to their son, they did not do much favor to the Dursley family. When she was young, Lily had a bad relationship with Mrs. Dursley (jealousy is human nature, Lily is indeed favored by her parents). When she grew up, the Potter family was in the wizarding world, and the two families had almost no contact. James Potter also had a very tense relationship with the Dursleys. But in the end they accepted their nephew who fell from the sky. When he grew up, Harry even had a bedroom of his own in the Dursleys' house. Of course, the Dursleys' blunt insults to young Harry's parents did cause Harry a lot of mental suffering, and Kili often bullied Harry, but this cannot erase the Dursleys' upbringing. Especially Harry's magical rampage also caused trouble for them. Think about whether there are various difficult relatives around you, and think about whether they are willing to adopt a child from a homeless relative. After this child grows up and is separated, he will not be responsible for any support obligations. He may come back occasionally, because there may be a lot of enemies coming to his door (Death Eaters). I believe you can understand a little bit why the Dursleys don't want Harry to come into contact with the wizarding world. The cunning Dumbledore didn't help raise the poor child of the Potter family. After being raised by the Dursleys, he allowed Harry to return to the wizarding world with just a letter, charged into battle for him to defeat Voldemort, and narrowly escaped death several times. It would be best for Harry to be grateful to Dumbledore. As for the Dursleys? Oh, who remembers them?

It has been identified that the protagonist is a pedophile and a stallion, and he is poisonous

Animagus can be learned by chanting a spell? Do you know what you are writing about? Clone Lily is even more poisonous. With the power of Obscurus, the power of any spell will be increased, and then others will be surprised and frightened. Long Aotian is annoyed by the sight of such an old suit B method. If I hadn't come here to recruit Hermione, I wouldn't have been able to watch it. It is true that most people only watch the movie and don't care about the detailed settings of the original work, but can we understand some basic issues not mentioned in the movie before writing about them? For example, Animagus. As the name suggests, the book is poisonous and smelly

This is the first time I have seen this kind of HP fandom that almost unanimously defends the Dursleys in the book review section. Especially since the author did not describe the relevant plot positively at the beginning, I don't know how this terrible trend has formed. Regardless of fan fiction, everyone's impressions of the Dursleys come from movies and original books. There are two facts that are certain. 1. The Dursleys raised Harry Potter, and 2. The Dursleys are not friendly to Harry. The rest are all self-interpretation or malicious misinterpretation by boring people. If you want to quarrel or argue, go to HP's official forum to quarrel with JK Rowling. What are you arguing about in this fanfic? Either the author is deliberately conniving, or someone has ulterior motives and maliciously provokes controversy.