Summoner in the Wasteland

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How can I put it this way? After reading 60 chapters, I feel that this book should be used by the author to practice writing. It has wrong punctuation (too many endings), clichéd plot, and serious clichés. If you are changing your vest, there is not much to say. If you are a newbie, your writing is okay.

Please don't write heroines, don't write emotional dramas

I asked why no one is watching. The protagonist's IQ is too low. A person who has lived in the wilderness for several years will be shocked when he sees a big tree. The most important thing is that the tree becomes a spirit and eats animals. You actually confuse that with your system. The brain circuit is too strange. I gave up.

I'm in so much pain! I like this subject matter, but the author's quality is too poor. It's both wise and cool, but it's still a fool. My life in the wilderness has been in vain. I suggest you use it as a sling for time travel. It's easier to accept, but it's still a bit unacceptable. Goodbye, everyone. I'll look for other books with the theme of auto chess.

The early stage was pretty good, but I was hooked from the moment I met the team. Especially when I met the girl from the team, it felt like a devil meeting a flower girl in an anti-Japanese drama. It's true that you are seventeen or eighteen years old, but you also said that this is a wasteland, and you yourself have survived the beast wave. Is it so unbearable to see a woman? Especially when writing interest, it is 100 points and 1 point a day. 🙂 Then he said that he lacked energy. With this 140 energy, I will first upgrade myself to level 3, where I can summon 3 animals and gain bonds. Or refresh the store to upgrade Xiao Hui or Iron Claw to level 3, or consider that the refresh is unstable. Prioritize upgrading yourself. Not only has your strength improved, but you can also summon 3 more. After summoning a shadow wolf, or a beast type to come out to refresh your bonds, you can further enhance your strength. I'm taking my 🉐summoned beast out to farm in the wild. If you still care about a little interest per day, this operation is really smart. The most speechless thing is that the next few chapters are watery. Buying clothes, peeking into the bath, boring conversations, all the plots that do not advance the main plot are just watery! For the next few chapters, I will write each chapter in no more than 30 seconds. Finally, finally! If you can't write an emotional scene, don't write it, seriously! Just write singles well. There are many novels that look okay, but the emotional line is immediately dead. There are not many summoning novels nowadays. I hope you will work hard and don't rush. But if you keep writing it like this, I'm probably going to have to pounce. 🙏

To invest, never be a eunuch!

With this setting, normal people basically lock their blood at the beginning. A wolf with 1 point can kill a rabbit without taking any damage. If you save up to 20 points by killing the rabbit, it will be OK for a month. Then level up to 2 and bring 2 Star Wolf and Frost Wolf, and the cow will be sold in seconds. Take the money and buy the rabbit. A lineup of 9 stars and full bonds came out in half a year.

A post-apocalyptic story, with plug-ins that do not quickly increase the strength, most of the whole text is just nonsense. I really don't know what the author is thinking. Is it difficult to gain a few hundred points? It feels like it is deliberately suppressing the protagonist's strength. It seems sincere and unsatisfactory. No wonder the comments are basically negative.

A little interest a day, if you use 100 energy to summon a three-star to go out and kill monsters, not to mention dozens of points a day, you can always earn more than ten points, right? In the early stage, instead of thinking about how to develop quickly, I just thought about how to save one or two points of energy card interest. Really poisonous

This interest rate is really poisonous. A saber-toothed tiger has 50 points. A 10-point eagle and a 2-star wolf with 3 points can chase the saber-toothed tiger. Can't a 100-point magic vine crush the saber-toothed tiger? If you kill a saber-toothed tiger, you can get one and a half months of interest. This book is essentially about fighting monsters and upgrading. You also get free interest. The protagonist wants to earn interest, and the plot forces him to fight monsters every day. This setting is really awesome🐮. The protagonist is set as a lazy guy who wants to have free sex, and the plot is written with a very diligent protagonist. If you are a capable author, you can write that the protagonist will not go out to fight monsters for a year and a half, and he will get free interest without making sacrifices. But can you do it? If you use Nocturne Sabretooth Tiger with 100 points, aren't the buffaloes killed indiscriminately? You can spend thousands of energy points in just one month. How many years of interest can these thousands of points cover for you?

When I saw the chapter on interest, I felt that the protagonist's IQ had dropped again. 100 Points only earned 1 point of interest per day. If I bought a powerful summoned beast for 100 points and hunted for a day, that would be more than just a point of interest!

The interest rate of 100 points for one point is simply poisonous. The author doesn't want to buy the big monster with 100 points. I also specifically wrote in the book that I wanted to defraud him of his energy points, resulting in no interest earned (I only saw three words in this sentence, I want water)

I was really convinced. I thought that this book was written by the author for his own reading. From the first chapter to the present, many players have said that they are stupid, but they have not changed a bit, and there is no feedback. So the author is planning to play stand-alone. I think that those who come here to watch Wasteland Auto Chess must be hamsters, Hamster Island. What I like to watch should not be about accumulating things, and then violently crushing the opponent. As a result, the author gave us a fantasy routine. Since you want to write this kind of routine, breaking through before the battle and crushing the opponent, or purely looking at the face and increasing the chance, I might as well go directly to the fantasy zone and come here to read a thread!

. . . . 100 Energy points only gives 1 point of energy per day, which is too little. Get a 100 energy card, go to the wilderness, and you can't even get 1 point of energy per day? Moreover, there are too many inner activities of the protagonist. The card refresh has already made you lose a lot of words, and there are so many inner activities. Can you see what the plot progress has been in the last 5 chapters?

I haven't read the book yet, but after reading the comment section, I found that most people are giving various opinions to the author, indicating that the author's ideas may be good but the writing is too poor, and they all hope that the author can write well. But looking at it now, I guess the author thinks more that you are trolling him rather than doing it for his own good.

It was fine when I was walking alone before, but when I met that hunting team, I became blood poisonous and turned into a wise man. Do you think there are too many readers?

The subject matter is relatively new, the auto-chess system, but the author probably doesn't play auto-chess very well and is just gaining popularity. The character of the protagonist is an old bird who relies on his brain to survive, but after getting the system, his IQ seems to be restored.

A lot of descriptions seemed okay ten years ago, but now this way of writing seems insulting to IQ.

Forget it, the author is just suppressing the protagonist. It makes me feel frustrated, so I will delete the book.

No, I don't understand where I've just written this, and I'm starting to slap you in the face with the same old suit? What you write is apocalyptic. Why do you all imitate Xiaobai's fantasy writing?