Selling Jars, Starting with Naruto

How can you sell cans without wearing a can head? Isn't it excusable if you don't say a word and occasionally have an empty space? Will I be able to join Team Canhead once I learn the shadow clone? 😏

Isn't it mute? Whose is Shizuka?

The biggest regret of this book is that the protagonist finally forgot the sentence he always emphasized, "maintain awe of the infinite"

I have been following it since before it was put on the shelves. From the beginning, I waited for updates every day, and now I just read it when it is updated. It doesn't matter if it is not updated, or even if it is updated. I think there is a reason. First of all, I am noncommittal. I have written about so many worlds. The most exciting and beautiful one is undoubtedly the world of Naruto. In addition to the fact that it has the most words and the longest space, the most important factor is that the protagonist, a dispensable person, at least participated in the advancement of part of the plot and introduced most of the can-opening customers. There are many chapters written even for a minor aristocrat opening a jar, and most of the perspectives cycle between the characters. In addition to opening the jar, there are also descriptions when the jar is not being opened. In this type of writing, the more detailed a world is described, the stronger the reader's sense of involvement, the richer the characters, and the more exciting the story. The words "One Piece World" in the back are also okay. "Okay" means not only "at least still watchable", but also "not as exciting as the first one". Because starting from One Piece, I don't know whether intentionally or unintentionally, the author began to speed up the advancement of the plot. Maybe the author feels that the protagonist is no longer an ordinary person who can only deceive and deceive others at the beginning of the story, so from the perspective of "the protagonist has become stronger, he can no longer talk about his family's shortcomings", he directly regards himself as a god. If you are a god, then there will definitely be less interaction with mortals. If there is less interaction, there will be a sense of reality and immersion. There must be less, so I can only fast forward the plot, so I let a few well-known characters open the can and there is nothing to write. Then I can only jump to the world and continue writing. As a result, I started a new movie. I originally wanted to write about the world stage, but after a few chapters, I have nothing to write. I can only continue to jump to the world, and I jumped to the magic ban again. What next? A few protagonists and supporting characters are opened, and then there is nothing to write anymore, so go back to writing for the stage? Otherwise, we can only continue to jump around the world, a vicious cycle, and some readers will inevitably be disappointed and bored within the 200 chapters, and then they will start to fatten up, and they will either die or they will abandon it and never pick it up again. In the final analysis, the plot of opening the can was interesting at first, but it turned out to be very boring after every character repeated it. I think the author has also omitted this step recently, and he may have noticed it. After all, the chapter that opens the can is said to have dozens of lines in this chapter, but now a single digit is considered too much, and sometimes there is not even one. This is already a good explanation of the problem. And omitting the opening of the can, omitting the plot, and omitting the interaction, isn't this a simple account? Isn't it natural for readers to be bored? In the final analysis, the author still hasn't gotten out of the trap of "upgrading to fight monsters". He feels that when the protagonist is a mortal, the supporting characters should also be mortals. When the protagonist is upgraded to the Nascent Soul stage, the mortal supporting characters should no longer appear. All those who appear will be at the Nascent Soul stage or similar levels. The levels of the supporting characters rise along with the protagonist, and this group of supporting characters is not fixed, so how can it not be boring? The protagonist makes money very quickly. It won't be long before he can create the God of Creation. What will happen then? The appearance is full of twists and turns. At most, the main and supporting characters will kneel down, then learn about the jar, then open the jar, then compete against each other, and then change the world to continue? Perhaps the author should look at his own work from the beginning and find the feeling of writing the first chapter. The protagonist himself is a tool, and his level is actually dispensable. The most important thing is to make each world exciting. Although power is indispensable, why does the protagonist have to have "I am invincible, I am a god, I will show up awesomely, and the whole world will kneel down" these poisonous points that make the plot unable to advance? It may not be accurate to say that it is poisonous, but once or twice it was just pretentious, and every time it was poisonous. The protagonist has no enemies and no urgency, so it's just like traveling, going from world to world, and selling cans while walking around? Don't use ability to screen customers, but instead participate in the plot recommendations as a trial costume, and then be introduced by a main/supporting character who has opened cans, and then sell the cans to other people. Wouldn't it be good? Do you have to change the world to pretend to be cool, reduce the interactivity of the protagonist to the bottom, and then leave yourself with nowhere to write? You're tired of writing, but it's also boring for me to read, isn't it? Anyway, this is my personal feeling. Some people may think that the author's writing is particularly good. Don't change it, just keep writing it. However, there are fewer and fewer interactions in this chapter. This is irrefutable. Readers have already voted with their feet. This proves that there is a problem with the writing method and content at this stage, and it has caught the readers. In this case, I hope the author can reflect on it and find a way to break the bottleneck even if he doesn't do what I said. After all, Zhutian City next door has blindly improved the strength of the protagonist of the tool man, resulting in so many worlds in the universe that it is impossible to write. This is at least a lesson. With a theme like "All Heavens and All Realms", wouldn't readers see Guan Gong fighting Qin Qiong? It would be better for Guan Gong to fight Qin Qiong in the Kingdom of Shu, rather than the two meeting in the main god space and then killing each other. The sense of substitution and freshness are two things that readers like. People who balance them well can naturally attract readers. It is not advisable to keep the original work throughout, and it is not advisable to keep the original work fresh. Finally, I wish the author good luck.

The unspoken rule of this book: New female characters must be described with emphasis, while veteran players will briefly mention them. If a male old player competes with a new female player, there is no need to guess that the female player will win (PS: Latest chapter: Erzhu and Riveria actually lost in the battle? WDNMD, Sasuke's fighting consciousness before Boruto was eaten by dogs?). There is always only one timeline throughout the novel, and the entire novel is described in sequence, with only one thing happening at the same time point. While a new story unfolds, the stories of the rest of the Chamber of Commerce are paused. 😰 It was poisoned for the second time, so I took it off the bookshelf first. Wait for a while and try again. 🙂

I've read so many chapters, but I've actually been having trouble with it. People in Naruto have faith. Before, it was understandable that Tsunade Kakashi gambled on resurrecting people, as the protagonist broke their taboo against the dead by talking. There is no shortage of ninjutsu in Naruto to resurrect people. But in order to become stronger, selling one's ninjutsu knowledge, or even memories, is impossible for any jounin to do. Not even ordinary ninjas, let alone someone like Kakashi Zabuza Sandai Tsunade. This is the early stage of Hokage, and everyone's thinking is still the more ninjutsu they know, the more they can rely on. Also, anyone with a little bit of logic should realize that trading one's own strength for a new combat system would be a disadvantage. You have to add additional money and pay several times the amount of money before you can barely surpass before (refer to Shiro, who spent hundreds of millions to become a chuunin). Therefore, in order to become stronger, ninjas can only retain their original strength and exchange for buffs or directly use ninjutsu (the white ones are buffs, I know, I am talking about the third generation of them here). Then there are risks. Tsunade knows that the protagonist travels in various planes. She cannot hide such information, so the third generation also knows. This is the disadvantage of trading your own strength. Like the Third Generation, he gambled most of his ninjutsu experience and even invested more in it later, leaving very little ninjutsu behind. What if you haven't successfully changed your job yet and the protagonist runs away? He didn't promise you that he would keep trading with you. Your side is almost squeezed out anyway, so it doesn't matter if you leave now~ As the head of a village, you can't trust a profit-seeking businessman just because you have kind eyes. Halfway through the exchange, you have handed over most of your ninjutsu, and your new strength has only increased a little. At this time, the protagonist runs away, or simply sits on the ground and raises the price, asking you to exchange all the wealth of the village for a lottery. Are you going to die? I can imagine the above, so the three generations must want it, Kakashi, Tsunade, Jiraiya, and even Sasuke also want it. Therefore, the protagonist should hit a wall. These are not my God's perspective. The characters know the information I mentioned. This is just normal reasoning that goes a little further.

In fact, do you want to say that he is the mastermind behind the scenes? I don't think so. It's more like a farm or a forced novel, but because the author's control of the plot is very good, it is not biased. The characters are interesting, and the protagonist has obtained a system that can buy everything in the world. The early plot is really amazing. As a long-term player of krypton gold mobile games, the sense of substitution is almost immersive. I feel like I am that. This evil old plan uses some methods to stimulate competition among players and the birth of high-level players. So far, no one can find any problems in all the plots. It collects players, initially improves their strength, develops dungeons, group books, naturally divides camps and selects the top player, designs rewards and incentives, and stimulates to maintain a certain level of activity and develop new players. The setting of the protagonist Dream Master is also pleasant. The protagonist never takes the initiative to cause trouble, in order to let players understand the difference between planning and players to arouse players' enthusiasm, actively open activities to improve player strength, and limit the number of purchases to increase player enthusiasm If the popularity of the plot is going downhill, I will cut off a new chapter. This kind of book can usually reach 1000 chapters and everything is very good.

After watching it for so long, I plan to read it all in one go when I come back. It turned out that it was all stuff, and it was wrong starting from fate. When it comes to the Bone King, it's completely chaotic. The author makes his own settings and is inconsistent. Take action forcefully and distort the character's "destiny". The previous characters guided them to discover their own wishes, and then gave them the jar to strengthen their goals. Give them a chance to become better, and the collision with the members of the world is also interesting. In the Bone King chapter, interrupt his transformation into the undead, and then forcefully say that the Bone King does not meet the criteria for becoming a member. He has a strong desire to protect everyone and create Nazarick together, and to be with his companions. And whether it's the human Momonga or the undead king Ainz, everyone in the Great Tomb truly loves them. As a result, after this happened, Albedo was forcibly turned into a 25-year-old. Just like when you ask your mother why you were born a boy or a girl, the order of cause and effect is reversed. Without the prerequisite for a mother to give birth to a child, there is no need to talk about the rest. Gazeff only needs to protect the kingdom, but not the Bone King. I wanted to write about a back-and-forth confrontation with the Bone King after the supporting characters and supporting characters were opened, but there was no exciting showdown in the end. Simply forcibly adding buffs to the dragon set becomes the tool of the disgusting Bone King. If you really can't continue writing, it's better to finish it as soon as possible. Don't end up giving poison to the readers who have been following the article, and finally usher in the end of the novel with everyone cursing.

(Please order for more details) Although I have not read Naruto and One Piece, this does not affect my interest in reading. After all, I have read many books, and any plot is fine, as long as it is well written.

Monthly votes are only useful when competing for the list, so I haven't asked for them since I finished competing for the new book list in the first month. Of course, I'm still very grateful for the vote. The reason for the lack of responses is that "Sword Rune" has a small account and does not have a mobile phone number to bind, so it cannot speak. It is too troublesome to explain the identity with a large account. Finally, I chose Marvel because of the appropriate power level and the highest number of voters. Judging from the ten chapters so far, the response to the Marvel volume is second only to the Naruto One Piece volume, so I am motivated to update more... But I still have to see how long it lasts.