Old Timer

The book is quite good, but the character of the protagonist seems a bit out of touch, which is not suitable for a book with a Cthulhu background! Also, the atmosphere created by this book has no inner flavor, no inner flavor of the Cthulhu world, that feeling of despair and helplessness, especially since there is a God of Light! Of course I know this is a game world, but Cthulhu without the atmosphere of despair looks weird! (And don't post comments like "get out if you don't read it!" This is freedom of speech within the scope of the law. As long as it doesn't break the law, you have the right to speak!)

I advise you not to waste your time, this book is extremely poisonous! After Chapter 130, not to mention Ju Shui, the protagonist's teammates were also rounded up! He also forced a joke and insulted the historical Qin Dynasty. He vomited!

As for the players, after looking at a lot of pictures, I still haven't seen a sheep's head being sold for dog meat? I specifically searched for this topic, and then you told me that there is no such topic 😰😰

The writing is okay, although there are many places where the plot is forced, but overall it is still good. I read the previous part and finished the free chapter. What attracted me in the introduction was Cthulhu and sand sculpture players. I want to see sand sculpture players. When will sand sculpture players come online?

The protagonist is as powerful as the five scum, but he is always involved in the affairs of angels, demigods and evil gods. He can turn you into ashes with just a sneeze, but nothing happens.

The setting is great, I've been looking forward to reading a novel like this. However, the atmosphere of Cthulhu only lasted for a short while before it fell back into the strange circle of online game time travel stories. With all due respect, whether it is the unclear level divisions such as Silver Adventurer and Gold Adventurer, or the level setting based on this, it all gives people a strong feeling of a novel about online games. Since the author is a newcomer, I understand the novel of this level, but I am sorry that I cannot follow it. My personal suggestion is that if you want to get ahead with online game writing, you can follow Qi Peijia's path, but it's best to stop learning from others. Since they have chosen a genre of game novels, readers of course want to see something new. "Secret Cult Simulator" has very good reference significance. The dichotomy between the ritual path and the sublimation path is very clear, and the setting is interesting enough. The Cthulhu worldview and Esotericism could have been well integrated. This book may have been changed later, but I only read the first forty chapters. At best, it's just an online game novel disguised as Cthulhupi, and I'm afraid it doesn't even qualify as a cooking work. Some personal suggestions. If the author has a next book, I will be very interested in reading it.

I haven't read the book yet, but after seeing the author's avatar and name, I instantly fell in love with it. I also got a cute blue kid, and immediately lost my mind and ordered all the books... Love me, Come on!!

Personally, I really like this kind of novel where the NPC leads the players. First of all, I only read the introduction without reading the main text. The introduction is already very attractive to me. Mr. Ke is originally a popular theme now, plus the rebirth of time travel NPC. These two points are already worthy of my visit. Secondly, I am a person who chooses books based on the introduction. I have a lot of pressure in life. I don't want to read those introductions that are very "high-level" but make people confused and understand nothing. I think the introduction should be simple and clear to explain what the novel is about. Forcibly pretending to be cool is too fatal. As an aside, I started reading novels in elementary school. I still remember that the first one was Zhang Sanfeng's Journey to Another World, and later I read Zhuxian, Tomb of the Gods, and Star Transformation. At that time, reading was very pure, because the whole class only had one or two paper books, and the boys would take turns to read them. They were very serious and enjoyed reading. When I grew up, I knew that I could read novels online, but I didn't know how much money it cost. I just clicked on the next chapter without thinking. I still remember the scene where I spent 100 phone bills a day and was beaten by my mother (laughing) (because I read it in a mobile mobile bookstore at the time). Later I got a computer and got to know a lot of novel websites. I don't know why I chose the starting point. Maybe it's because the interface is better. I have been reading novels on and off for 10 years now. I feel that there are fewer and fewer novels that I can read, and the novels written by my favorite authors are becoming more and more difficult. To be honest, it is quite uncomfortable. I know there are many problems in it. But it's still sad to see that the reading website is not comparing whose works are better, but which website's operation is worse. I think that at the beginning, Internet writers were looked down upon by the Writers Association, but now most well-known Internet writers have joined the Writers Association, which makes us readers feel proud. But suddenly I find that the website digs out its own roots for some unfounded reasons, which makes people angry. But what's the use of being angry? When an industry leader dares to dig up its own roots, it means something that its status has not been shaken. It means that this industry is a backwater, no one else is willing to join, and the income is not big. I can only continue to hang out here. I used to hope that the website would get better and better, but now I hope that the author will get better and better. Wish you all a bright future

This chapter is so fucked up that I want to kick the author's butt with Uncle Sam's cowhide boots next door.

The protagonist makes a lot of low-level mistakes. He doesn't have the feeling of an experienced player, especially when he has to worry about formulas and money. He doesn't have the feeling of a foresighted veteran at all, but more like a person who knows some information. He doesn't even have the feeling of a player.

As long as it is updated continuously, this book can be as good as The Super Mechanic

Tongs Liu Ming, come on, Oli! ! !

Emmmm, the relationship line is a bit confusing. In the old world view, there was a harem. The female knight was cold to everyone before. After praising the sun a few times, she came over to her. Are you afraid that you have charm skills? The little witch is also fascinated by it and fell in love with her as soon as she met her? Or brother and sister? And help him cheat his own mother? And the Shura Field that was given by her mother? The same goes for the princess. How many times have you met her and your favorability level has gradually increased? Emmmm It's very strange. Personally, I don't think it matches the old world view, but the other plots are great, come on! 😁😁😁

Players are about to appear. Book friends who want to play a supporting role can leave a message below. The name should be as Western as possible, and the rest can be used as you like.

It feels too watery. In such a dangerous world, if you don't improve your strength and wander around, you still have to learn some tricks. In order to save your life, you have to change countless vests. Also, the protagonist's luck value is so low and he always causes trouble in front of high-level people. If he doesn't die, it only shows that the author is too arrogant.

After reading a few chapters, I would like to express my thoughts: The overall literary quality is not too high, of course, this is normal for a new author. This article can be said to be an alternate-world NPC system article with Cthulhu elements. Just treat the past as the boss. The sense of substitution is not very high and the character of the protagonist is very interesting. It's close to the grain and grass bar. I won't write anything in the back. A lot of the logic in the early stage is still very hard and it would be nice if it could be smoothed out a little bit.

If you keep it, you will die 😭

The writing is very good, but there are always people in the chapter who criticize the characters in Mystery 🌚🌚🌚. Please check it out more and fold it.

Since it is a terrifying and mysterious world, what do you think about shouting the name of the Three Pillar Gods before being killed, attracting attention to the world, and dragging the whole world to be buried with him? 🪖 Is it also a trump card? It's just like the old demon in [Shu Mountain] threatens the righteous masters not to get rid of the demon by threatening their lives with death.

I finished reading the first few chapters in one go. They were okay. There were a little more female characters and they didn't conflict with the Cthulhu style. Some people criticized that dog licking didn't feel like it personally. After all, they all played a role in promoting the development of the plot. But the more I read it, the more I felt that this was a Japanese light novel style work cloaked in Cthulhu... The sense of weirdness and mystery that the Cthulhu series should have is not as good as the beginning, which is a bit disappointing 😓

As good-looking as the Super Mechanic

The writing is okay, I just finished reading the public chapter. Still waiting and watching, the only uncomfortable thing is that there is a hammer in the east and a hammer in the west. I'm a little helpless, I feel like I just got a feel for this thing when I wrote it today. The author took a sharp turn and turned to other aspects 😅 Maybe it's because he doesn't have the pleasure of showing off in front of the players like a super mechanic. The map is too big and the protagonist can't show off in front of NPCs. Gradually I started to think this was a rant 😰

The author can have a harem, but don't give away daughters.

If it is really a world view of Cthulhu, you can consider looking for the gloomy and cold-bone god Mordiggian. After all, in the old days and the Outer Gods, there were too few guys like Lao Mo who were both willing to listen to human beings and were friendly to humans. The cost of seeking Lao Mo's asylum was very small. It was just to save him after his death. Give him the body, and Lao Mo will do his best to protect your life. The premise is that you don't offend Naija, Dogs, and those foreign gods. It's okay if you offend those gods, like Dogs, the god of time, but Pao Bao won't be as knowledgeable as you. If you offend a petty person like Naija, Lao Mo can't save him even if he wants to.

I hope there is no heroine. Author, you are writing about the old days, outer gods, and players, not the harem conference!

Want a sidekick, Gattuso, player