Disciple of the Sage of Konoha

First of all, let me tell you my thoughts about this book: It's an unhappy story, with some brains, a commoner genius start, no system, a single female protagonist, the writing is light and interesting, but it won't be funny in key plots, and the protagonist also has many pretentious moments. The incompetent author, like everyone else, has been chasing Naruto for many years. Ever since I was in elementary school, I would talk about the cool moves like Raikiri Rasengan with my classmates on the way home from school. Later on, in high school and college, Naruto comics and anime were completed one after another, but I was still unfinished and lingering in them. So in order to express my emotions, I thought about writing a fanfic that could restore the taste of Naruto as much as possible, satisfy some fantasies, and share my words and thoughts with friends who also like Naruto. But I am limited by my writing power and imagination, and I don't have enough time to polish it in detail. Some places are inevitably unsatisfactory and not interesting enough. At this time, I kindly ask everyone to put forward their own suggestions and ideas. I will accept it with an open mind, and I will try my best to correct any logical illogicalities. And if it's not interesting enough, I'm also trying to expand my imagination every day. The life of studying and writing every day is very tiring, but when I see readers generously voting for recommendations, supporting me, and commenting on me when my works have only a few words, I feel fulfilled and satisfied. I have no regrets at all. I am also very grateful to you. So I thought that finishing this book would be my bottom line. Thank you all again.

No wonder his grades are so bad. What a piece of trash. As Naruto's brother, you don't teach Naruto some basic exercises? ? Are you a solitary eater? Naruto has wanted to be a ninja since he was a child, but he hasn't discovered that the protagonist knows ninjutsu in the past three years? Some basic taijutsu, Jiraiya will teach you. So selfish? This is understandable, and it doesn't say anything about you. It's your business if you don't want to teach Naruto in advance? What about enlightening Naruto? What about guiding Naruto? I didn't see it, so you still think you're Naruto's brother? Do you still have a face? You enjoy eating spicy fish and meat, and treat Naruto to ramen when you're in a good mood. The most speechless thing is that Naruto was actually instigated by others to drink and go to nightclubs. Do you think the third generation is dead? Do you think the ANBU around Naruto are a piece of shit? This book gave me the feeling that it was taking advantage of Naruto. I knew what Naruto would do in the future and knew that Naruto would be very awesome in the future, so I wanted to have a good relationship with Naruto, but I couldn't write the line Jiraiya because I got involved with Naruto for no reason. In fact, I look down on Naruto, who makes Naruto the protagonist of the entire Hokage, and he is just the protagonist of this book. When Naruto called Grandpa Sandaime, I thought the protagonist was teaching Naruto, but it was only during the shuriken class on campus that I realized that the protagonist was so selfish. He actually had the nerve to flirt with Ika and say that Naruto wasn't stupid. He was just pretending to attract other people's attention. But the author is right, Naruto is very smart and sensitive, otherwise why didn't he go to the so-called brother in this book when he was feeling uncomfortable? Because Naruto knows that the brother in this book is a hypocritical person. I will never be friends with you in reality. You are too fake.

It's so beautiful. It has been collected. Welcome to visit again!

It looks good, I voted, but does the protagonist drive a Gundam in the end?

Sir, I want to use the setting of your book, a new author, please approve it...

Does the Three-Tailed Jinchuuriki have the move "Coral Palm"?

Thank you to the author for accompanying me through these few months. Only novels can comfort me when I am alone 🌹

The entire Naruto game is just a game for the Rokudo family, and those who have nothing to do with Rokudo are just cannon fodder. The limit of ordinary ninjas, the third generation, and the second generation are just soy sauce in the end. If the fourth generation does not have a nine-tailed trick, it may only be at the level of the second generation. As for the protagonist arranged by the author, can he surpass the third generation without any cheats? Not to mention the second and fourth generations, and even the first generation are just bigger ants...

The so-called frog fairy is the final boss. Think about it, the two brothers of Six Paths were deceived by it into maiming their mother. Just think about it and you'll know

Well written, cheers, author

Alas, both of them have weakened the Immortal mode, so why are you trying to learn it after it has been weakened? Damn it, it's unnecessary. I've read a few books and it's always like this. Hehe, slipped away.

The protagonist has no sense of existence or importance

Come on!

The author can write some extras, such as the married life of the protagonist and Ino, mainly because I want to see it...

Naruto's brother, isn't he from the Uzumaki clan? He also said he had no bloodline

I saw the introduction and I just wanted to say a few words. I haven't read the book yet. Water-based Rasengan. Is it a washing machine? Use your bare hands to create a washing machine. You are awesome.

Does it end like a rabbit tail? What a pity

The ending is too sloppy. Author, have you been busy recently? Can you write a side story?

After studying with Jiraiya for so long, he started playing Rasengan, and then returned to Konoha and started from scratch? Haven't even learned the Three Body Technique yet? As a time traveler, is there no risk at all? Drawing in class and picking up girls after class? After becoming Naruto's big brother, are you going to hold your arms and wait for the prince and Erzhu to save you? I couldn't stand it after reading the beginning. There were too many flaws to mention. How come this kind of book was recommended? I deleted it and never saw it again.

Is Naruto's brother called: Naruto?

Isn't Erwei delicious? Why three tails?