
My Youth Love Story Is Over
我的青春恋爱物语终结了
- Status
- Completed
- Length
- 185k Words
- Genre
- Light Novel
- Audience
- Male
- Subgenre
- Original Fantasy
- Updated
- 6y ago
- Source
- Qidian
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The first book that made me angry It's been a long time since I've seen a book that made me feel good. But you just sucked the ending. After finishing the book, you couldn't deal with the relationship well at the end, so you just forced the ending. This ending is also like shit. It's really irritating. 🙂🙂🙂
To be honest, I took a quick look at it and caught my eye. As a result, when I saw it later, I felt a pressure in my chest and felt extremely uncomfortable. The pressure is applied from the middle, and there is no chance for release later. It's too difficult. Maybe it's because I didn't understand it or the space is limited, as mentioned in the book review. In short, I hope the author can continue to work hard. Don't be so cruel, okay?
It's nice to read, but the problem is, the author, you wrote so many things before, but you just suddenly jumped to Teacher Jing's line, leaving a lot of holes unfilled.
The trashy beginning ruined my youth
Wow, you are really awesome at the beginning, it's inexplicable. Yukino, she couldn't have noticed you. Yukino noticed that the teacher was only moved by his kindness (sacrifice to save the dog), so he said so many words abnormally to help the teacher change his character.
Update soon! ! ! Investment is going to fail
This book is very interesting to me, but it's a pity that it ended so quickly 😭😭😭😭
This book was just added to the bookshelf a few days ago, and I fell in love with it at first sight. I saw that it was still being updated, so I kept it. Today I suddenly got the urge to watch it. Then it took nearly a day to read it. My psychological journey today is very complicated. Expectation Excited Excited Feeling Depressed Excited Grass Grass Grass Grass Grass Grass Grass Grass Grass Grass Grass (a green belt) I didn't expect it to end suddenly. When I saw who to choose, I didn't want to read any more, because there were only a few chapters and I was afraid I wouldn't be able to slow down. Then I read the book review: It's finished. In the end, I did collapse. I collapsed. I shouldn't read Aomon's fanfics when I see them. Every time I watch it, I am fooled by the style of the show, and then stabbed me several times with the sadistic plot. I deliberately avoid these uncomfortable things, but I encounter them accidentally every time. The so-called Murphy's Law. The author's writing is better and I like it very much. I am also a combination of contradictions. I have always avoided it, but I still like it. I am just such an asshole. I am very confused about whether to write down some of my thoughts. Forget it, I think more authors understand it themselves. "I finally escaped into the darkness. I hope I can live under the light next time." That's what he said, why does it feel a bit...
I couldn't stand it until halfway through. It's really well written. It was very uncomfortable and depressing to read, so forgive me for abandoning the book and running away. It really makes me feel like "my youth love story is over". It's so depressing. But book friends who read this review should not rush to characterize this book. Maybe this is exactly the style you like?
This is probably one of the few books that I really want to read to the end. I hope the author will continue to work hard.
Haha, I am just a BT. How can I continue to watch the torture of the protagonist? Can it be sweeter? Ahhhh, so annoying
Why does it look normal at first but then it looks like a teacher explaining the philosophy of life to you?
On the third day of the author's absence, he wrote down a small notebook
The writing is very good, but the ending chapter is too abrupt, too regretful, too depressing, and the completion of the extra chapter is even more sad. I am really happy to see the loved one and the loved one happy, but even more sad, the strong emotions seem to rush out of my eyes. I really want to see Wang Yi continue to move forward and continue to experience the sadness, regret, and warmth with the girls of Chunwu.
I like it very much. It has the flavor of Harmono's original work. I am a poor student, so I can only give a full subscription to recommend and support it. I hope the author can stick to it, and I also hope that all passers-by will not be dissuaded by the beginning. It will be enough to change after twenty chapters.
Dear author, writing and reading books is a two-way choice. Some people like to read books and some don't. Those who don't like reading this chapter won't stay. People who like to read will keep reading, so don't be influenced by them. Those who can stay are those who like your style. I personally like this book very much, and I hope you will keep writing it.
Did this author read a novel written after being disqualified from the world? I came here to find Shuangwen. How did I find this book? I finished reading it. Now I feel bad.
Well, the pace is still a little faster. Although I can't write novels. However, I still feel that the pace of the story is too fast. One thing follows another. Everything is written in one go. The plot development is reasonable, but it feels like it needs to be fleshed out. The event should be written longer and contain more content.
Conclusion
Alas, it's the end. I'm a little embarrassed not to post a book review. I haven't posted a book review before because I don't want to interrupt the author's train of thought. This book is really well written, but unfortunately it collapsed in the chapter where Aso was killed. This book is obviously derived from anime works. The story has the inherent image of anime characters. Compared with other fan works, the author is stronger than others in shaping his own character image. If the author writes well and the book is successful, read The author will change from the inherent image of the heroine in the anime to the image of the heroine designed by the author himself. It is not the kind of heroine that the author chooses to write as the heroine, but makes the readers think that the heroine written by the author must be the protagonist, rather than being replaceable by the anime character. This is to compare the original character with the anime character. Only when the original character can still win in the hearts of readers can the author's writing style be reflected. I think this is a self-challenge for newcomers, who is very determined and courageous. The previous articles were all very well written. Although the pace is indeed very fast and lacks daily transitions, overall it has great potential, which is just a pity. If the dilemma faced by the author is just the plot direction, I think you can read book reviews or create a book friend group to listen to readers' opinions, which will help inspire inspiration and grasp the plot direction. Finally, I would like to talk about my views on this book. Tsumabuki Oichi is a person with a black tragic color. He is a person who has traveled to another world. He has a sense of loneliness and a suicidal tendency to be world-weary. Therefore, in order to support him alive, he must rely on something around him to support him alive, so he relies on the interpersonal relationships of the original owner to maintain it, until he discovers that this is not what it is. The things that belong to him are almost broken. He is a duckweed in this world. He can only maintain his personality and build relationships bit by bit on his own to give him a place to live in this other world, but he dare not ask for too much. Therefore, every connection he has established is so fragile and will be broken at the slightest turmoil. Such relationships can only be hung like straw on the edge of the cliff to prevent him from falling. At this stage, he No one understands, no one supports, and he is only one step away from the darkness, but his biological instinct still allows him to do his best to support himself from falling. Maybe in the future, when he truly collapses, when the people around him find out that he collapsed, maybe they will become the light in Wang Yi's world, lighting up the world for him, and the connection between him and them will gradually deepen and become the root system for him to settle in this world. Of course, the heroine's Well, I still hope it's Kasai-kun, because they are the two closest people in the dark. Even if the protagonist doesn't know her thoughts, she must know the male protagonist best, so when the male protagonist collapses, only she can save him. Maybe she will change her usual behavior in order to save the male protagonist, and turn to the person in the male protagonist's relationship circle for help. Maybe it's Haruno, who has an insight into people's hearts. But the book is over and we don't know. In addition, it is best not to write about dead people casually in the daily series, as it will destroy the overall world view 😆 Alas, I have said everything I wanted to say, and the book review I have been holding back for so long is finally out. Finally, cheers author, I look forward to your next book.
You are the first author who makes me feel that I have nothing to say in my expectations. Forget it, you are the author after all. You can have any ending you want, as long as you are happy,,,😒
I'm torn. I don't know what kind of attitude I should take after watching the ending. I'm really torn. There's a hammer for the broken system.
What I'm so speechless about is that the author should either not open the cheat code, it would be the same as not using the cheat code, so why would you write a cheat code? Is your golden finger setting too rubbish? You can definitely make the golden finger a person who can cultivate immortality or fulfill wishes, but the golden finger is a failure.
The book is really well written, but when I saw Haruno and Zaoshiki, I was very annoyed, because the plot was really annoying, and I couldn't stand it even after halfway through it. It's not that the writing was bad. . . Anyway, I think my psychology is quite complicated. . . I wrote about the departure of Kasai or something (I can't remember his name) before. What I wanted to read was naturally led by you, the author, to the story of the protagonist and her meeting again, but you, the author, suddenly changed your mind and went to help that ghost Zao Shiki. . Of course I know this is a side story, but the characters of those ghosts are really hard to watch. (I know that the original anime also has a plot where the male protagonist is suppressed by Haruno, but the anime goes by very fast, and the novel is different. It depends on my reading speed and your update speed, the author). I also filled in more than ten chapters (draining does not refer to water, but refers to the parts that I am not interested in). If I skipped, I would not be able to read a few chapters. . . I now regret not reading your book earlier, so maybe my suggestions in advance will make you change that part of the chapter. But now, I really have a headache with that disgusting chapter, and I don't want to abandon the book, but those dozen chapters are stuck there again, which is really uncomfortable. . . In addition, I really hate the feeling of powerlessness of the male protagonist, because the author did not introduce the content of Yasuda. I simply cannot understand the reason why the male protagonist was controlled by Harno and was forced to do such a thing. . . . . I felt like I was being fed several tons of food. . But I really don't want to give up the book, *,,, it makes me so irritable, tmd. . .
It doesn't matter anymore whether it's a blast or not. The author would like you to polish the plot and restore it to its previous level. The recent chapters feel hazy and hazy, giving people the feeling that they were written in a very hasty and chaotic way, because one plot often rushes into the next one without ending well - this is a minefield that reduces points. If it can be restored to its previous level, everyone will definitely read this book even if it is updated weekly. T_T
The writing is very good, I think if it is not a fan, it can be adapted into comics and animations. What a pity, this book will be the most unforgettable one I have read this year.
A big win for Kasai stocks! The author writes really well, come on!
I'm ashamed of this🙂
The biggest lie I have ever believed in my life is that I believe that the author is not a sadistic drama
How can I put it... The plot of this book is very good, and the writing style is also good. I have read all the two-dimensional books and visited many reading websites. This book gave me a refreshing and eye-catching feeling, but I am very regretful that the author failed to finish it. In short, this book is still very good. It is recommended that book friends read it with caution, because after reading this book, you will think that the plots of other books are very emm~ boring?
Go ahead, look stupid, is this the boss? I'm so confused. Fortunately, there is an extra chapter to heal me. I have to say that the writing is really strong. By the way, can you write more extra chapters to heal my young mind?
Youth Pain Literature, written by Lin Daiyu per capita, collapsed into a mess after half a book. The reason is that the author only imitated the appearance of spring things, and failed to write about the warmth of youth, mutual companionship and growth. The protagonist does not have the life of the great teacher, but suffers from the great teacher's disease. From the beginning to the end, it becomes more and more serious. Can you not be depressed? That may sound ugly. But the author please take a good look at Chunwu. He is a light comedy. What do you think?