Elemental Shaman in the City

This theme is very good and very novel. It's just that the plot and writing are a bit lacking.

If you are interested, you can create some supporting characters, including their names, body shapes, occupations, professional skills they are good at, etc. Good guys and bad guys can do it, even monsters can do it. (Forget it if you are good at invincible Hearthstone, this is too unreliable.)

Come on, author🥺😍

Not to mention the author, he probably didn't even finish high school. He has three attributes and needs to be recommended for a place before he can go to school! ! ! Full three attributes are like the top scorer in the national college entrance examination. You can choose which university to attend. Free tuition and high scholarships are the basic conditions, but the protagonist is recommended. It is really ridiculous. Going to school requires either passing the exam or being invited by the school. Only those who do not score enough in the exam need to be recommended for a quota. Generally, the three quotas are money, power, and connections. The author can ask, let alone the top scorers in the college entrance examination across the country and each province, how many top scorers in each city are recommended.

It was my first time to write a book. I thought it would be a stand-alone book and no one would care about it. However, I didn't expect that my brothers would vote for me all the time, and it would steadily increase to a few favorites every day. Here, thank you in advance for your support. To be honest, when I wrote the first 20,000 words of this book, I felt pretty good about myself and felt that telling a story was not that difficult. Later, in order to make better progress, I began to scan books on the best-seller lists, and analyzed their writing methods and narrative techniques, as well as the setting of plot lines bit by bit. Since then, my mentality has changed a lot. I re-read the story I wrote, and my evaluation was only two words: dull. There are many reasons for the dullness, such as insufficient writing and the inability to convey strong emotions; for example, the plot is scattered, resulting in an unclear main line, unable to bring enough expectations to everyone, etc. It is definitely impossible to reopen a book immediately. Firstly, there are so many brothers supporting me in this book. Secondly, because my talent is not good enough, I cannot achieve a qualitative change in writing level in such a short period of time. In the end, I chose a compromise: delete all the manuscripts after the thirty-fifth chapter of the book, start over, and carefully formulate the outline, so that the protagonist can get more shots, and the story can enter the main line faster, and the plot will be clearer. I hope that when this book is finished, everyone can witness the growth of Chen Fenglei and also the growth of me, a rookie author. Thank you again for reading and voting (especially those students who pointed out typos for me, you are so attentive...)

Author, your writing skills are a bit poor, so don't cover everything. Write from the perspective of the protagonist. Don't write about other things unless they are very important. Otherwise, you will appear to be weak and others will feel uncomfortable looking at them. I am just giving you some suggestions. You can adopt them or not 😅😅

You don't call it a city, you call it a different world.

The setting is good, but the writing is a bit poor, but if you say it's poor, it's a bit rough. Slightly poisonous slipped away

In the recent Blizzard Blue Post, the design gave the Master Enhancement Shaman a 3% gain. In other words, the dark blue profession is not worthy of playing WoW. I vomited!

For Stormhammer

If there has been no update for three or four days, is it due to a eunuch or is there something going on?

The original forty-fourth chapter was uploaded incorrectly, but it has been revised and the missing chapter has been put into the old chapter. Terribly sorry.

The writing style is a flaw, but the subject matter is good. Once the author improves his writing style, his grades should be much better.

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Good writing, keep it up (ง •̀_•́)ง

This book has a single heroine and no ambiguity. The protagonist is addicted to the Hammer Demon. You can read it with confidence.

Is there anyone who is a big player in WoW who can tell me? I remember that the Rule of Three is a talent of a certain profession. But is it a mage or a shaman? Or is it from another profession?