
Pirates: the Lazy Vice-Captain
海贼之慵懒的副船长
- Status
- Completed
- Length
- 571k Words
- Genre
- Light Novel
- Audience
- Male
- Subgenre
- Fan Fiction
- Updated
- 6y ago
- Source
- Qidian
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What I wrote before is okay. What is written next is really hard to describe in a word.
I only saw where Aaron came out of the dungeon, and I couldn't stand it anymore. First of all, there is a setting issue. Gold coins are equivalent to buying heroes. Then you choose a 450 Ryze at the start? Also, wouldn't it be nice to spend 450 on a Timeless Man with unlimited resurrection? Isn't it good to start choosing a hero by not talking about infinite stacks, but just talking about saving lives and dealing damage to Ekko? ***You can survive to the finale if you choose Yuumi. There are also runes. If you really follow the rules in the game, then why don't you just go and destroy the world in 10 days by gathering a storm? Okay, okay, we don't talk about the setting, we talk about the protagonist. Judging from the chapters I have read so far, the protagonist is a mage who loves to draw. It's just a mage who also paints. I really don't want to complain. It's just like trying to make up the word count. If you don't talk about me, just say that your impression of the protagonist is that he only likes to draw and then disappears? I have no memory of what the protagonist has drawn, right? The description is just a hard description, there is no process at all, just start, finish, and draw something. Isn't this a running account? Although the description of the painting process is very clumsy and difficult to describe, if you can't describe it well, don't describe it. Just let the protagonist draw something and see what's inside. I won't talk about the supporting characters. Originally, the people in One Piece are just a group of problem children. That's about it. I hope the author will reflect on it and find that the protagonist is actually acceptable. The main reason is that the setting is harmful. The dungeon persuaded me to quit. Also, the author should clarify the initial setting and subsequent settings. Don't just draw skills in the early settings. Choose heroes at the beginning and buy heroes later. As for Ryze's move, I really had nothing to say when I saw the author wanted to buy ez.
Didn't you say you want to play in the world of One Piece and League of Legends? I just saw One Piece, what about the world of League of Legends?
Regarding the heroine issue, there will be only one heroine, Robin, and there won't be too many emotional scenes.
Let's talk about the restraint relationship between the abilities of League of Legends heroes and One Piece and the division of the protagonist's strength. Probably this is the relationship. Real damage is aimed at the elemental type, mage heroes are aimed at the animal type, and the superhuman type is divided into an ability group and a physical group like Luffy. The ability group is targeted by the assassin hero, and the physical group has no obvious flaws. After One Piece reaches the later stage, strength and domineering strength are linked, and correspondingly are the equipment in League of Legends. If we use naval ranks to divide the strength level (the minimum and maximum values within the military rank are all included), three attack equipment is approximately equal to a lieutenant general, four attack equipment is approximately equal to a general, five attack equipment is approximately equal to a marshal or Yonko, and six attack equipment is approximately equal to the commander-in-chief or the pirate king level. All the alliance heroes here are based on in-game data. Otherwise, if the single-round hero background is given data, the Dragon King will come over and be unhappy and the Pirate King will be gone. Even if it is a sub-level god, there is still a pitiful Void Universe that takes the blame for everything. It has the ability to easily rule or even destroy the One Piece world.
The book has been signed. Although the future is unknown, Xiaoba and I will still work hard to bring you a wonderful and interesting story. Everyone can speak freely. Even if there is criticism, Xiaoba will humbly accept it and correct it, and strive to do his best. Similarly, Xiaoba can guarantee one thing to everyone, that is, the book will definitely be completed. Finally, Xiaoba would like to express his gratitude to everyone who has read this book. Thank you for your support. Thank you.
I think the Yonko is half a level higher than the General
I really want to complain. Have you not finished the first three chapters? You see why you are jumping like this. Where did your Ryze skill come from? How did Nami steal your computer? Wow, it looks like it has no beginning or end. I originally liked the themes of pirates and LOL, but you are really trying to persuade me to quit.
What the hell is the author's ending dream about?
You can follow the ship, but don't call Luffy very righteous. He is just a pirate, a lawless pirate.
Shocking, there is such a novel now! ! !
Ask. It's like a boat, right... Is there a female protagonist? How about heroine Robin? During the two years of practicing like that, you can go to the Revolutionary Army with Robin to teach you ideas. There is still time to have a baby with Robin.
There is an up owner called Layman at Station B who specializes in One Piece commentary. You can check out the author.
Water is all water (╯‵□′)╯┻━┻Nothing has changed. There is only one more protagonist and it's fucking useless. It's like a boat, but since the copy has been removed, it has become the same as the original. What are you doing on the top of the battlefield? The third and fourth chapters are about the protagonist's fights and dialogues. Has the plot changed? No! What happens next? Ace still dies? Luffy still collapses? The protagonist Rescue Luffy and escape? The red hair is showing off? You have made no progress at all and have been regressing. I like the plot very much, but you have to change. You have been rushing to the plot since you came down from the empty island. You can take your time but you have been rushing. The dungeon is a good idea. If you have a dungeon, you can slow down. The plot is so fast now, you have to catch up with this eunuch.
There are a bunch of useful heroes but I don't choose them because I'm afraid they'll collapse.
I couldn't stand it for a few chapters. At the beginning, Nami only got on the ship for money. After the incident with the evil dragon, she followed Luffy. Poisonous,
This butterfly is obviously very big. The one who killed was the protagonist, not Luffy, so this blunt matchmaking is useless.
Momonosuke doesn't need to die, isn't he just a little horny? And it was just a joke, so why would anyone take it seriously? 😃😃
Remember to call me when Momonosuke dies.
To be honest, I might as well watch the original work to watch The Boat. . . Of course, this is strictly a matter of my own taste, I hope the author doesn't mind.
Damn it, are you playing games or writing novels, and your skills are still shaky?
Author, you don't know how to write original works at all. You can't let the protagonist create a pirate group on his own, so you can let the protagonist follow Luffy, right? Just follow it, it's not like I haven't seen it before, but you won't create your own character to fight the protagonist, and you have to compete with Luffy? The protagonist you describe is the deputy captain, but he interferes in the captain's affairs, not the captain doing the captain's affairs. Why do you want the protagonist to join Luffy's team? Is it just for the protagonist to deal with bosses whose plots are already known? Because it is known, it is easy to write. What's Luffy doing? Why do you need Luffy? Really disgusting
Momonosuke must die! I got it
Those who read this book, the author who wrote this book, and the readers all have mental problems. If the author does not open a fan base, he will be scolded to the point where he doubts his life and is a gathering place for lunatics. If I don't scold him, I will feel uncomfortable. People must understand who are the people who write about the navy. How could they write such a sick and poisonous book if they are not the same people?
I just saw the part where I have to pay and you told me that there are only 121 chapters to read! ! ! ! ! ! I..........
I've read Chapter 5 and I really can't stand it anymore
General 500~570. Four yellows 550~600. Vice Huang 450~520. Act like this. I forget where I saw that? In this way, the logo is easy to see, and the strength gap is constantly fluctuating.
Then what kind of copy made me get into trouble every minute?
Even if he licks his long nose, who are you talking about?
The fault lies in the copy, which is too awkward to write. I have no desire to read anymore.