Turn a Deaf Ear and Suddenly Look Back

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Not bad! There are some things that newcomers don't understand that need to be learned. In fact, that's all. The first three chapters are very important. Whatever story you want to write, you must have a prototype of the story at the beginning.

Although it is temporarily finished, I believe this is also a valuable experience 😁

I hope you can give me more suggestions😁

I'm still in the experience-absorbing period, so I hope you can comment more. I will make changes in the official plot in the future, as well as the previous ones. 🤓

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Poor😄

I don't understand it very well, and each paragraph is very long. It should be concise and don't ask for excessive word count. The plot has no ups and downs, and the whole story feels very bland, so bland that I don't think it's a science fiction novel~ Personal opinion, please use it as a reference with caution!

At first glance, apart from the future world and science fiction, there is nothing attractive about it.

It will be restarted later, now I need to comment 😁

I'm a newbie, I hope you can give me some suggestions, thank you.