I Became a Human Black Hole

It's hard not to think of this title as a duet.

There is a lot of foreshadowing in the article, and the early character design of Shi Hui changes slightly as the plot unfolds. The heroine is not so holy in the later stage. The heroine's virginity is a very necessary extension of the story in the early stage, and is a necessary foreshadowing to restrict the rapid expansion and growth of the protagonist. It can be seen that the author has been thinking about the outline for a while. If you can't stand Tang Youyou's early Madonna, just skip it. The author's writing is very good, but the subject matter is a bit niche, and there is no promotion from the starting point, so the results are a bit bleak.

In fact, Wang Chao and Tang Youyou should have gone back to the past and found that they could not prevent the disaster from happening, so they formed Yongye. Tyrant and Gabriel were the two of them 😁

Can the author remove that mandatory control? It's very frustrating to read.

It's so embarrassing to watch! Who is faster, words or bullets? Doesn't she sleep? It's easy to resist. Is it interesting to design the protagonist to be so crazy?

I haven't read much about the male protagonist's madness. I think the author's description is a bit strange in the early stage. Based on the background, the protagonist is a gangster. It's understandable to be crazy. But anyone who can reach this position must be wrapped in reason. The madness in the author's writing makes me feel like a clown, but it is not the complete chaos and loss of reason like a clown. It means a bit crazy for the sake of madness. Personally, I think this kind of madness would be more attractive if it had a rational appearance. A little personal opinion

It's outrageous to save this woman. It's totally out of character.

When the protagonist is controlled by the female protagonist, he should take the opportunity to directly cover his mouth and blow his head off. The initiative lies more in the hands of the male protagonist.

It's so damn well written! ! ! ! 🤓

Author, why do I feel so frustrated watching it? Well, the mandatory control is a bit annoying. Will it be removed in the future?