Pokemon in American Comics

My only opinion is that I hope the author will not contact Stark soon. Does Danny Rand of The Defenders have no money? Does Norman Osborn have no money? Can the instructor of the Novice Village be replaced? I am tired of seeing Tony's big face.

I couldn't stand it after reading ten chapters. It felt so confusing and long-winded, and the plot was a bit baffling. 😓

Also, I have never played Pokémon, I have only watched the Unprinted anime, and the rest are all familiar to my fellow fans. But I would like to ask the author how to solve the combat environment of water-type Pokémon, such as Pokémon such as Angora and Magikarp, which must be in the water. Also, is the fish that the author started floating directly in the air considered a bug, or did the author have a setting for this? I'm asking this because I don't know much about it. If you guys who have watched and played Pokémon think I'm retarded, please ignore

Thanos, attribute evil/fighting, attribute perseverance "Eevee, use the loud sound!" The effect is outstanding, Thanos fell Iron Man, attribute steel/electricity, attribute floating "Dragon-headed gopher, use earth Shock! "The effect is outstanding, Iron Man fell down Hulk, attribute fighting, multi-scale characteristics "Kapu Diedie, use mental strength!" The effect is outstanding, Hulk withstood it, and his backhand was an iron head, Diedie died.

Didn't understand. Feeling a bit like talking to myself

After seeing the introduction, I just want to say that it is really good to let the God of Creation, who was almost killed by a meteorite, fight 😭

I don't know how the author wrote the outline. Many fanfics have the protagonist disrupting the plot, but isn't there something called world correction in the novel? If the protagonist disrupts the original world line, then the future world line will be modified in the direction of the disruption. Will the protagonist's prophet bujiu lose its effect? I've read several fanfics where the protagonists try their best to maintain the stability of the world line to ensure their own prophetic issues.

Are there mutants? It should be a hell-level comic book world, with crises of annihilation occurring every three days.

Overall, it's pretty good, but it's too verbose, and I'm here to see Pokémon. Can you let the elves interact more? It feels like there are too many useless plots, and it doesn't reflect at all that this is an elf novel. 🥱🥱🥱🥱

It's a bit sadistic, and it's said to be Pokemon, but it doesn't have much of a plot about Pokemon. It's too off-topic, and emmm, forget it.

I like the subject matter very much, I have invested in it, and I hope to continue. I also suggest that the author research more information and write more original works. Although Marvel is a hot word, it is the fastest way to become popular if you can't write well. Nowadays, Marvel fans are overflowing. Seeing that the author said that he is not a novice, the author should pay more attention to control the rhythm and not collapse. Don't care about bad reviews in the early stage, and don't accept readers' opinions casually. First, be firm in your own outline. Without destroying the outline, you can add some suggestions as branch expansions like this

Author, are you going to add new skills or elves to Sword and Shield?

Looking at this data, it's not easy for the author.

I don't know what's going on, but I collected it first because I like reading elf fan fiction. Come on, author💪

Rewritten? I saved it for a long time, but ended up dying.