I Am Invincible in the Mortal World

After watching some of it, I can say that it is not suitable for people who like profit flow. The writing is too heroic, and the character is very upright according to today's people, but it is not suitable for the world described by the author. If it were not for the protagonist, I would not survive the 10 chapters. I'm very annoyed by this. I like to do things that are reasonable, rather than doing things that I am not capable of but still like to do. It's normal to bow your head when you see injustice and don't have the ability to do so, instead of sacrificing your life for people you don't know. We are mortals, not all of us are saints and great men. We will not sacrifice our lives for others if we are capable or not. . Maybe I've read too many novels, and I can't stand this kind of plot at all, because it's unrealistic. I like to see reasonable plots and characters rather than relying on a hot-blooded small universe.

Height 185cm, weight 65cm. . . I'm almost as thin as a stick.

This author doesn't talk about martial ethics! ! ! After reading dozens of chapters, a small pistol appeared, and suddenly it turned into the most ridiculous Zhutianliu! ! ! After practicing the system well in the previous system, he suddenly came to the Samsara Palace and instantly transformed into the heavenly flow. How much emotion was wasted for this reader! ! ! I'm so angry

I am invincible with the world. If I don't fight with heaven, who will I fight with?

To be honest, I read Jinyiwei pretty well. I read this book several times and couldn't get past the tenth chapter. It's really embarrassing, so I won't force myself. I'll wait for the next one.

The author advises you that your writing skills are not suitable for digging holes, and you need to practice again. I don't know if you are a novice, but author, when you write a book, you can rewrite the plot in your mind over and over again, but we readers cannot. It takes a lot of skill to dig a hole. You are more like a person digging a hole for the first time. Not only are you half exhausted, but the hole you dug is not very good. Add some flow, especially the Yakuza type, no one likes to watch this kind of thing. The most important thing is that what you wrote is plain to begin with. It would be strange for you, the author, to not break your head and bleed like this.

The title of the book is attractive, and I summarized my views after reading Chapter 40. The article is not on the topic, and the talk of invincibility is pure nonsense. This book is a diary genre, and there is nothing exciting to talk about. Especially when Chan'er was eaten by the tiger demon, I basically didn't want to read it. But for the answer in Chapter 95, I forced myself to see the answer before deciding whether to continue reading.

To be honest, the emotional drama in this book is a failure. It's better not to write it without a female protagonist.

The protagonist should have a physique similar to that of Tiansha Lone Star. Those who helped him were either killed or suppressed. Anyway, there was no happy ending.

Author, you can definitely delete Chapter 95. Originally, the author, you have already said that there are countless monsters and geniuses in this world. Those who like the Yakuza style have this kind of cross-flow feeling. As a result, the author arranged a cesspit for the protagonist at the beginning. So what is the highlight of this book for you, the author? I want to tell everyone that if the protagonist is not arranged, no one can fight, right? Originally, most of the people who like to watch Yakuza-ryu like to watch the Lord, fighting with people, the sky, and the earth, but it turns out that it's better for you, and it's written as Xianxia-ryu.