The Beast in My Heart

The initial setting is still very interesting, but the character of the protagonist is very unpleasant. He is basically an idiot emotionally and is constantly being abused. Some readers have reported this problem to the author, and the author has also replied with the reasons in the book. How should I put it? Reading novels is a way to relieve stress. In this style, there is little hope that this book will become a big hit. If the author can fill in all the pitfalls later, it will not be difficult to create a niche masterpiece. Of course, if the author's writing skills are beyond the limit later, pretend I didn't say so.

It's well written and very touching. Good luck to the author!

Oh my God, this book is a little strange at the beginning, but it gets better and better at the end. How should I put it? Some authors write really well, but they are not popular. Some great writers write like shit, which I really don't understand. Come on, author. In addition, the early stage is a bit too depressing, and there is nothing particularly attractive to watch. In this fast-paced era, it is impossible to survive without an attractive beginning. I hope to change it when I have time, so that I can sharpen my sword and keep chopping wood. Come on!

Chapter 121, the author's way of writing at the beginning really surprised me, and then I read it patiently and slowly. The protagonist is also growing slowly. It can be seen from his speech and behavior that he has changed a bit, but! Just some. Of course this is the most normal. The cowardice of more than ten years cannot become fearless and inferior in just a day or two or a month or two. Now let's talk about the mental journey of reading. The beginning is similar to the behavior of a hero saving a beauty. Although the process is quite embarrassing because the protagonist is not very good at talking, I still watch it patiently. After seeing it, she took her bad boyfriend to the hotel. . . . (I suddenly felt like I had been slapped on the spot. I wondered if she was not the heroine? I exited and looked again. Yes, it was the heroine. "Well, she will definitely escape at the critical moment." Then the author once again explained to me what reality is in profound words. I'm sorry, I am too naive and have not experienced the beatings of society.) The first part seems to be about the innocence of the protagonist. He has a cowardly character and is extremely ordinary. When he was rescuing An Ran, his calmness when facing the tiger, I thought he was hiding the pig's feet or something, but it turned out not to be the case. I didn't mention it again later, he was just an ordinary person. The main idea of ​​this part: The beautiful things that have been rescued still fall into the abyss. Even if you are a god, you still cannot let them escape the clutches of the devil. The second part seems to be about the protagonist's cowardice. To be honest, half of ordinary people will basically become like this in this situation. It looks terrible, right? Because after the protagonist saw it, he ran away! More than ten years of married life could not change his inner cowardice. In this case, he did not choose to fight against the enemy and protect his weak wife. Or maybe he thought more than we did. He thought that the money would be used to save his father-in-law. (It's very interesting. In this part, in most of the literary works I have read, when men encounter this kind of situation, their brains don't think at all. They basically go up and kill them. But the protagonist is afraid of the man, which makes sense. Including that when he meets the man again later, he will only stare at him! Angry!...) This part tells us that people without strength can sometimes do nothing but be incompetent and furious. The main idea of ​​this part: Many people live ordinary lives, and many tragedies happen among these people. Families were broken up, wives and children were scattered. If you don't have the ability to protect your family, all you can do is be incompetent and furious. When he later met the third heroine, he was able to control his power. I originally thought that the third female protagonist should be a female supporting character, but as a result of her companionship during the process, I would rather believe that she is the female protagonist. As a result, she met that man, and the third female protagonist had to sacrifice herself for the male protagonist. (This may be to tell us that Superman will also be afraid of the hound that bit him in the past.) The focus of this book is that growth is spiritual growth, not strength. But if hundreds of chapters are used to tell the protagonist's spiritual growth. It's better not to give him such strong strength. So far, he has not killed anyone. Instead, the people he loves have gone into the abyss one by one. Regardless of whether he is strong enough, he can do it, or he is incapable of raging. If such a personality is shaped according to the plot and develops normally, it will be an extremely vindictive social personality. This long text is all about expressing my dissatisfaction, because I feel that I have been cheated. At least the author changed all those to female supporting characters? Pretending to be a heroine is really unpleasant. There is no doubt about it. I thought the writing technique at the beginning was really great. This is the first book like this I've seen on Starting Point. But this plot is so frustrating. This book should be put into reality! And not anywhere else! Now I am still a trainee, because there is no other way. There are only two chapters recently released. If the author were a woman, I might be able to accept the author's imagination. But if the author is a man, I cannot accept this kind of growth. All the male protagonists of the plot actually didn't pay much. On the contrary, the people around him gave a lot for him. The surrounding people keep giving, and the male protagonist keeps losing. The purpose is to wash away the cowardice in his heart in the process. It's too depressing. As expected, I am still too novice, and I only like to read ordinary daily articles. I hope the author can make the protagonist grow up faster. Otherwise, even if he finally grows up, he will still have nothing. The author said. It will allow the protagonist to change in his "second life". But I still haven't seen it, but some people are still paying for him and then leaving. Actually, I already wrote about this one yesterday, which is as long as this one. I only wrote it for half an hour and my phone automatically turned off at 12:00. When I came back to read it, all the writing was gone. This is probably the most impressive book I have ever read, and I will never forget it.

I admit, the writing is good, but there are too many scene descriptions, which is not suitable for online writing. It makes it difficult for most readers to adapt and is not very friendly. There are many so-called heroines who play opposite to the protagonist in the article, but most of them are tragedies, and the highlight of the story is the protagonist being raped.

If this book is not popular, it will not be tolerated by heaven. If this post is not accurate, it is a crime worthy of death.

At the request of the author, I will just say a few words. If I remember correctly, I read this book last year. It seemed that I was reading the new book list when I was bored, and I was attracted by the title. It was not like those titles that suddenly popped up to join the fun. There were about ten or twenty chapters at that time. I didn't expect to read it, and I saw my own shadow in the protagonist many times. How can I put it? This book is not a popular systematic text, nor is it an invincible and refreshing text, but the author's conception is indeed very clever, and the logic is relatively rigorous. When I first read it, I was confused and thought what the author was going to write. But after reading it, everything became clear without realizing it. Maybe it's because I'm older and can calm down and read some articles. It's actually quite good. I'm worried about the author. After all, we are talking about the golden three chapters, but he has been digging holes for many chapters. Sure enough, there are too many holes, which not only traps the readers, but also traps himself. When I saw that he had not signed the contract for more than ten or two hundred thousand words, I also knew that he wanted to give up many times, but I and several friends I didn't know still encouraged him, hoping that he could continue writing. Also, I'm really not a big shot, so you don't need to leave me a message, because I just read this story as my own. I don't want my story to end like this, and I don't want a book that I think is a good book to become a eunuch due to some practical reasons. Although The reward that goes to the author is not too much, but it is still a small contribution. At the same time, it helps the author to promote it and strives to prevent a good book from being buried like this. That's all. The bad things mentioned are real feelings. Don't be surprised by the author's bacteria. In short, creation is not easy, so go for it, author! 😡 Emma, ​​I'm so tired of typing, but it's still more comfortable to read! Get under the covers and wait for updates!

Dear friends, some time ago, this book was signed with everyone's support. I thought the situation would get better, but the result was not much change. I came to test the waters and promoted it. With everyone's help, the increased data was pretty good. I thought I would be promoted, but there was no recommendation for two consecutive weeks, which made me a little confused and lost a lot of motivation. I think I should find a way out for myself. But don't worry, everyone, I will keep writing this book. I have no choice but to keep reading it, but I may only be able to update one chapter every day. I hope you can forgive me. This book will not be considered to be put on the shelves for the time being, because if it is put on the shelves like this, it is better to write it for you to read for free. After all, the most important thing for getting to this point is everyone's support and companionship. Let's think of it as slowly repaying everyone. I apologize to everyone again and hope you understand.

About Diao Brother's reward and update explanation Originally, it was just a joke in the listing description, but I didn't expect Diao Brother to take it seriously 😅. I saw a lot of comments and recommendation votes on Writer's Assistant, and I still can't believe it is true, because I originally thought that there would be at most one or two people who would reward 10,000 points, and adding one or two chapters would be enough. This is not a difficult task for me, who is a bit lazy. So when I was writing the acceptance speech, I felt like filling out my college entrance examination application. I knew that there was no hope of applying for one, two or even three applications. Fortunately, I filled out Tsinghua and Peking University on the application form, because it always looks bad if it is left blank. In short, I am still very, very grateful to Brother Diao, the kind of gratitude that cannot be expressed in words, the kind of gratitude that will never regret it as your clothes get wider and wider. Your surprise is really a bit too big. I don't want to talk too much nonsense. I just communicated with Brother Diao and reached a basic agreement. It was finally decided that tomorrow, the first day of publication, ten chapters will be updated in one day. Of course, this is also my entire archive. Then, for the next ten days, five chapters were updated every day, and I felt like I would vomit blood. For the remaining twenty days, three chapters will be updated every day. For me who updates every day now, think about it, ah! So sour and refreshing. Forget it, that's all. Fortunately, work has not resumed yet, and there is still time. I have to write quickly. I may not be able to reply to everyone's messages in time recently, but I will try my best to spare the time. Please forgive me! Thank you again Brother Diao!

Get ready to add more chapters, I want a hundred chapters. 😏😏😏

This book is now on the test market. I would like to ask everyone to help promote it and vote for recommendation. I would be very grateful. Writing is not easy, and everyone's support is my biggest motivation to move forward. 🌹🌹🌹

It's so cruel that I can't stand reading this book anymore. The subject matter was originally very good, but it was written like this in the suburbs of Beijing. I really can't stand it anymore.

The core element of a happy novel is that it is cool, and all good things happen, and there is no such thing as embarrassment. As for a suspense novel, the core element is to explore the truth or truth. Everything needs to be discovered urgently. Before the truth, there is no so-called misery. A little accumulation can affect the whole body. This book will be a hit. (Please add more details)

Special thanks for being on the first page of the new book list I accidentally glanced at the new book list today (actually I often look at it secretly) and found that this book was on the home page. My heart skipped a beat. I remember that last week it was still in the 20s, so I didn't dare to think anything wrong. Being able to appear on the new book list of many big names makes me, a newbie, tremble. Of course, I must thank the friends who read this book and the friends who like this book. I am grateful beyond words. I can only silently send my most sincere blessings here. I wish you a bright future, everything goes well, all your wishes come true, your lover will eventually get married, and you can win five million every day. Although this book has not yet been signed (I dare not speculate on the editor's thoughts), having friends read it is my biggest motivation. I will work hard not to let you down. Let's talk about two things about this book. First, about the context of the book This book is slightly more brain-burning and suspenseful. The first ten chapters are written in a three-pronged manner and dig a lot of pits, so the reading may be a bit unclear and difficult to understand (some people say this is not friendly to readers, but I believe you are the smartest), but starting from Chapter 11, everything will be fine, and all questions will become clear, but this clarity may still be a trap. In short, I won't be confused anymore. Why not take those questions and find the answers together? Second, about updates. Start with a statement. I am not a lazy coder, and this book has some manuscripts. There are several reasons for the slow update. 1. This book is my second book, and that one is still serialized. Although it has been sold out (only 17 fans), as the first book and the first batch of fans, I should give them an explanation. 2. That novel has already been put on the shelves, and there will be perfect attendance after it is put on the shelves. This is very realistic. If this book is likely to hit the shelves, I will gradually shift most of my energy to it, without giving up on that one, of course. 3. When I last published this book, there were tens of thousands of updates per day, and 220,000 updates were made in 21 days. Before the first trial push was over, it was immediately put on the shelves without accumulating readers or doing any publicity (this book also sent three red envelopes, I believe some friends received them, although they are not big). Of course, the last time the book was put on the shelves, it failed, and it may have something to do with the book. But I heard from my friends that it is best for newcomers not to make too many friends, but to accumulate some book friends first. Because running naked on the shelves is equal to death, I believe it! 4. This book will be brain-burning and upgraded later. In order to make everyone understand it more clearly, some plots need to be reviewed repeatedly, so please don't worry. 5. One thing I can guarantee is that when it becomes stable in the future, more updates will be added, as long as there are people who like to watch it. Insert a word, can you shamelessly ask for an investment, a collection, and a review? Thank you for meeting you. It is a great honor for me. Sending you my best wishes again. Finally, I wish you all a happy new year. Happy New Year, may all your wishes come true!

My application for signing the contract failed, and I felt a little uncomfortable. I'm not sure whether it's because my writing is terrible or the story is terrible. I hope you can give me some suggestions. I know that some friends have been reading this book, which is also the motivation for me to write it. I sincerely thank you all, and I also ask you to leave more comments and send some recommendation votes. If it is convenient, help promote it and let good friends support it. Not signing means there will be no income, but I will be very happy if more people can read it, because I am afraid that I will not be able to persist, thank you! Originally I thought that after signing the contract for this book, I would shift my focus to this book and update it twice a day. Now it seems I can only update it once. Over there, Quan Qin will take it first. Please forgive me. If possible, please leave me a message of encouragement! 😌😌😌

The collection exceeds 1,000, special thanks. 1. Today I saw that the collection exceeded 1,000, and I was very excited. I would like to express my special thanks to the friends who read this book and those who like it. I will definitely write more exciting plots to reward you in the future. 2. The number of investors today has reached hundreds. Thank you for your trust, which has given me the unreasonable idea of ​​hitting the small coffee market. Of course, you are welcome to continue to invest. Although the book has not been signed yet, I will work hard to write it well. My most sincere thanks again. 🌹🌹🌹

The author can tolerate some things and some cannot! The girl who sent the protagonist to Beijing was willing to die in order not to drag the protagonist down. Such a good girl. Are you just going to give it to your enemies? In reality, if someone met such a person, would anyone let him go and give him away? It's too late for me to cherish it! The beast in my heart! Is your book right for the beast in your heart? Beasts—wild beasts that are not trained and cannot move forward. Heart - hidden deep in my heart, ready to explode. Look at the protagonist - a beast on the outside but a sheep on the inside. In order to maintain herself, she gave up one, two, or three, and she was a bear. I don't have a high IQ, and I'm in Beijing. No matter how well I hide it, the clues will be revealed in a few months. But just to hide it for a few months and give it away to the heroine, is this what people do😊? Still trusting an enemy? The protagonist's dream - so many things have happened in reality, but he is still so naive if he doesn't make progress! I wipe. I thought things would change after I escaped from prison, but the result is still like this! I'm sorry to say goodbye, I'm leaving, no need to send you off. Delete books. Ten yuan reward, when I see......... Hey forget it.

Dear friends, this book is finally signed. Thank you for your support, comments and recommendation votes. Without you, I wouldn't have been able to persist for so long. Thank you! 😊😊😊 If you have friends who want to invest, please come.

To be honest, I think I was a little confused by this book. I was confused after reading it, even though I understood it later (beep quietly: I read it twice, it's a small loss, otherwise I might not be able to read it). The book is very interesting, come on! I want to invest (*＾ワ＾*), but it's a pity that I have to wait until next month. Alas, I don't have any literary talent, otherwise I think I can recite a poem at this moment! Also, I don't usually watch urban dramas, I watch fantasy ones. This is the first time I've been fascinated by it.

In 2020, I wish you all a happy new year, may all your wishes come true, may good luck come from heaven, and may lovers finally get married! In the new year, I will try my best to tell this story for everyone. If you don't leave, I will never give up! Get rid of the darkness in front of you, and there will be light ahead. I wish you all the best!

The beginning of Wenwen seems a little confusing, and I feel like it is two stories. I still feel a little confused about the purpose and what the author wants to express, because the author jumps around in writing, and Wenwen's storyline moves from east to west, which makes people feel that the plot is like the male protagonist is constantly traveling through time. Although the story is said to be a dream, it feels very real. It feels like the male protagonist is traveling in two parallel worlds, and it makes people feel like there are two female protagonists, one is Xia Rushi and the other is An Ran. Xia Rushi is real, but she is not worthy of being saved by the male protagonist. I think that saving Xia Rushi is completely unnecessary. To put it bluntly, he is doing useless work at the cost of his life. The male protagonist saved Xia Rushi, but he was harmed and was locked up for research. The key point In the end, Xia Rushi was deceived into the hotel by the scumbag, and whether she had a relationship is unknown. After all, I haven't seen the plot of the author's bacteria yet. This is a bit suspenseful. I also want to know if there is any, but 90% of it is already..., It's a pity. But I have a very fond impression of An Ran. The male protagonist sacrificed his life to save her, and since she didn't want the male protagonist, she still gave her life to him. It's true that a friend in need is a friend indeed. I still like this very much. But to be honest, the author's writing needs to be carefully scrutinized, because when I read it later, I felt that Xia Rushi's appearance was just for the sake of setting the stage for the male protagonist to meet his true love in his dream. And it was precisely because of Xia Rushi's appearance that the male protagonist was tortured by Zhao Chengxiang, and he resisted, and was then captured and conducted research at the Abnormal Human Research Institute, which allowed the male protagonist to complete the plot from meeting An Ran to getting married. Looking at this dream, people feel so warm and romantic, I like it very much, but because of this dream, I feel that this is the beginning of the story, and it will greatly stimulate the interest in reading, making people unconsciously want to know what will happen next, and want to know what the hero's dream is about, and why it is so real. Because of this series of questions, I unconsciously collected Wenwen, and I feel Aunt Bai's words are evocative. After a complete dream, you will start the next one. It seems that there will be a big drama next. But what I still want to know is what the male protagonist will face next, and more importantly, whether An Ran will really become the heroine. In reality, will the relationship between the male protagonist and her be as real as a dream? Will there be scenes that I am looking forward to? All this is in the follow-up. Anyway, the author's The beginning of the article is not very good, but the plot is enough to attract you, and the further you go, the more you will fall in love with the author's article. I am looking forward to it. I hope that the next update will be more, because the current update cannot meet my needs. I read all twenty chapters in one go, and I feel nothing is the same. I hope the author's update will be super powerful, otherwise I will put you in limbo, my dear, come on!

Good reviews, will continue to follow to see the ending! Come on, author, don't live up to our expectations! ! ! Waiting for your update. I also read your other book, which is very good. Recommend

An Ran slowly walked to the flower, squatted down gently, carefully broke the flower, and took it in her hand. An Ran stood up, turned towards everyone, raised the flower to his face, looked at everyone, and said with a smile: "Hey, I succeeded!" Gou Shun looked at An Ran, and for a moment he couldn't tell whether the flower was beautiful or An Ran was beautiful, but a poem appeared in his mind, and the peach blossoms on the human face contrasted with each other.

Quan Zhendong's baggage is good, which is a pleasant surprise. Character names are still too dramatic. Will there be dramatic names like Taolang and Taoxi in life? There is no sense of immersion. Mao Ni is very good at naming and can be used as a reference. Emotional drama and character dialogue are still the author's weaknesses, lacking a sense of substitution. When Anyuan writes this kind of dialogue, he must have a sense of the picture in his mind, and then read it out to try to see if it is awkward. It must be able to express emotions, and it must be natural and harmonious. It must not feel like a drama. Without a sense of substitution, there will be no sense of being able to read in due to the reader's empathy. Keep up the good work, I feel like the editor has signed it up. I must have seen you write the chapters about Gou Shun's escape. It's quite refreshing. The combination of various abilities also has the feeling of a web novel. The plastic surgery is also a bit surprising. The plot setting is not as boring as the web novel, which is an advantage. In terms of emotions, dialogue is a weakness and lacks a sense of empathy. Keep up the good work and keep improving. Squid is getting better and better as he writes, which is why he has such a mature work as Lord of Mysteries. Anyuan, you must also believe that you can keep improving, keep learning, and produce very mature works in the future. We all want to see your growth and progress, come on! This book is getting more and more exciting from now on. You must maintain the quality and quantity, keep updating, keep improving, and don't overdo it. We are always supporting you and supervising you. Don't relax!

As a reader who jumped to read, I just want to say a few words. Some time ago, this book got a lot of attention from passers-by due to the exposure of the first-place alliance. It became lively when there were more people. I just read the book review area and I feel that the current issues are a lot different. For example, I first entered the trap because of the incredible and imaginative plot in the introduction of the author. Now everyone is paying attention to the issue of greenness and cowardice. What can I say? The suspense category is just appropriate for the emotional drama between men and women. The author does not care too much about it. Write according to your ideas. Don't be biased by these, just stick to your original intention. In fact, it's not bad to be a warrior of love (laughing) As for choosing a girl, anyone can do it, just don't affect the main plot of my brother Gouzi, the stars, the sea, and the adventure. Of course, the author, I think you have the potential to write a pain-free and youthful gastric abortion. Screen first, then settle. It is clear that people are in control. I strongly recommend this song - JJ's pity that there is no if. You can listen to it. On the way to take the medicine, you will never come back. Come on, author! ! ! Actually, I'm just here to promote songs😁

It's comfortable, the plot is so exciting, I feel like a Buddha. But luckily, even though I don't have a wife, it's still better than having a harem with two wives. It's not like I didn't read love tragedies and all kinds of sensational magazines when I was in school. It's really refreshing that online articles can write this kind of plot. Although it's unpleasant, it's acceptable. As long as Gou Shun marries his wife and doesn't die in depression, I will order all of them. This will also be my first fully ordered book. After all, I haven't seen any online article that dares to write like this. He is a ruthless person.