Indescribable Invincibility

Gou Chen has his own ideas when writing books. From the previous book to the present, I knew that the writing style of this book would be different from the previous one. I think the previous book was just Gou Chen trying to get started, but the writing style of this one has changed since the beginning. Although there is the setting of Emperor Domination, I feel that Gou Chen has been innovating, Gou Chen, come on💪 Then let's read it together! Gouchen, add some semen to me and let other book friends see it.

How can I put it this way? The idea of ​​this book is good, but the author is not very good at it or something. The writing is a bit too empty, and many scenes are written piece by piece. What the readers see is different from what the author thought, and it is very uncomfortable. Above, if you don't quite understand what I'm saying, that's probably how I felt when I read this book. Just my personal thoughts, please.

The author did not recommend any previous books, and I was bored and searching for the author in old books before I found out that the author had published a new book.

How should I put it, the description of Night Watch Day is similar to Chen Dong's feeling of covering the sky in a perfect world. Because it has to end early, I enjoyed watching it. The forced harem before was too toxic, like watching a braid drama. If you are not a master, you should write less about daily life and more about these grand scenes.

Every time a big character appears (๑ºั╰╯ºั๑), the reader feels a little awkward and feels that it lacks a flavor compared to the previous book.

Author, update quickly, I support you.

There are several reasons for the unsatisfactory results, 1. The title of the book cannot arouse the reader's interest. I was confused when I read the title for the first time. I found this one after searching for the previous book. The title of the book is not meant to be very domineering, but at least it is concise and easy to read and should be searched 2. There is also a problem with the introduction. Since it is written without When asked by the enemy, I suggest you learn from the introduction of Emperor Ba. Many people like this 3. There is a big problem with the second dimension. It is better to communicate. After all, a book also needs to grow 4. The early stage of the book is really a bit toxic. The writing is acceptable. The plot introduction is not detailed and the sense of substitution is not strong, such as Haoke Inn.

The writing is okay and the ideas are clear and organized. It's just that sometimes some passages are difficult to pronounce and there are typos. I hope the author will continue to work hard. ✊

Hanhanchen has finally released a new book after three months.

Regarding book updates. It's not that the book is not updated, it's just that Bingchen QAQ has something to do, so the update of this book is unstable. It may be updated monthly or annually. Readers, please forgive me.

Gou Chen's new book is good

Poison Point 1: The so-called mutual admiration between the two was not shown at all. From the beginning to the end, we only saw Tu Tu's strength. You could talk about what he has that attracts the protagonist. Are you forcibly giving him a friend status just to induce the old-fashioned pretending incident? Poison point 2: The so-called "restriction that even gods must fall" are you telling me that you are a coward who doesn't even know who is being killed and doesn't even dare to get involved? Why don't you come up with a formation, automatic attack, etc. Whoever kills someone has to notify the boss to go out and investigate for ten and a half months. Poison Point 3: No more, persuaded to retreat

To be honest, it was a little bit poisonous at the beginning, Xiao Sanqing, Xiao Tongtian, does anyone really dare to call them that? And that servant repeatedly questioned the protagonist when his young master was obviously trying to win over the protagonist. The Tu family was obviously a big family within a big family. Is this how the servants were trained? Being young and ignorant is not the reason for one of his servants to act arrogantly. Doing this will only make people think that this family is not good enough and cannot even teach a servant well.

Original text: Yao Ji: "Okay, then I will make a bet. You have to let Jiang Yanyue call you husband sincerely within one day. If you can, let me beat your back and pour tea for you ten times, even a hundred times." ? If you don't know how to write about women, don't write about it. I'm really convinced.

Is this also called having a strong style? Please refer to Lan Ke Qiyuan, okay?

? ? ? . . . Is it too late for you to delete the last part of the ending? . It is difficult to continue writing. . You threw away your outline and everything.

Oh my god, has Gouchen changed his mind and stopped writing a new book? That's it, I spend all my money on this book every day

I stayed up all night to read more than 160 chapters, and suddenly the ending caught me off guard.

Many people say that the author's writing skills have improved? I can't imagine what kind of writing style I used to use in the past.

After reading the first dozen chapters, I felt that the protagonist's pretense was not good enough. He started talking about a lot of things, emmm... My expressive ability is limited and I can't explain clearly. Can anyone tell me what happens next?

Well, I heard that this guy is opening a new book next door. If anyone knows the name, please let me know.

I was reading a novel I wrote, checking for typos, and suddenly a silver box blew up...

Is the author under quarantine and observation? Okay, just asking