Song of Torrent

What kind of bullshit is this written? The old problem of dry and blunt writing has not been changed yet. As a result, new problems arose in this book, which were all kinds of mysterious and obscure philosophical teachings. Hongmao probably thinks his preaching is very high-end, but to me it seems like bullshit. Moreover, everyone in the book preaches like this, and there is no one who speaks normally? The protagonist is not likeable at all. He doesn't look like a time traveler with mature outlook on life, but like an indigenous brat from another world. Then what a bullshit church, under the guise of a noble excuse, what it actually does is to ravage the protagonist who is an ordinary person at will? The protagonist is obviously a victim, but the church keeps an eye on him and refuses to tell him, and even forcibly washes the scriptures off his body (which will cause a lot of harm). As a result, the protagonist has no ill feelings towards the church at all, but actually thinks that the church is quite good. This is all bullshit plot and characters. Can't stand it, one star.

Why do people like to read Hongmao's books? Because the confusions of the little characters in the books are so realistic, and they all want to draw some wisdom from them to make themselves look less stupid and act less stupidly. However, inertia makes people stupid and unreasonable, especially people like me who are dim and hate life. They have no goals and just drift with the flow but feel that they can't keep up with the rhythm.

There are a lot of criticisms, so I want to praise it (please point out any mistakes and avoid personal attacks) Up to now, everyone is unhappy with reading it (I am also unhappy) Probably because the world created by the author is a world with extremely developed productivity but extremely backward production relations. A civilization that was able to play with controllable plasma hundreds of years ago actually still had religious/feudal dictatorships in its production relations, and even capitalism was still in its infancy. Therefore, there is a huge sense of separation from the real world. (This is actually considered a reverse success. This is no longer an approximate replica of our world) This also shows that the decentralized physical rules are extremely conspicuous in the author's world. Twelve industrial countries that have been hidden for hundreds of years without organizing hundreds of millions or even billions of people can find out whether controllable plasma technology is a practical technology of miniaturization. Industrial countries with millions or even tens of millions of people really have no room to compete. Moving to that world under the current system is just a group of army ants emerging from ordinary ants. Their combat effectiveness is slightly stronger but they are still ants. Monks are not invincible, they also have Achilles' heels. But before the emergence of higher productivity and production relations, monks were invincible. The current world of novels is obviously an era of monk dictatorship, and there is no even humanistic thought. Might makes justice even now. Productivity determines production relations, and the gap in productivity between monks and people is already too large to be narrowed by capitalist production relations. And how many years and months will it take for the proletariat to awaken? This seems to be a novel about cultivating immortals, but it is actually a novel about a single person trying to achieve technological productivity. This is so different from our world that my imagination is not enough to continue the deduction. Hope someone can give it a try. That's it, the writing is really crappy.

There is a very novel sense of fragmentation in the worldview. The supernatural power is neither strong enough to crush technology (the fantasy world), nor is it weak enough to be managed and hidden by the government (the supernatural world). It's interesting that the world of ordinary people living modern lives and a legal society coexists with the world of extraordinary people who kill people on the street and have no taboos.

This is the first time I read the author's book, and it's still the fantasy category that interests me the most. But what's strange is, why do I still feel that your narrative and writing style are so awkward after reading almost 10 chapters? It doesn't attract me at all, it's so fucking amazing... I'm so desperate for myself

I still like Red Dawn written by Hongmao the best, although the last part feels a bit nationalistic.

... I have read more than 40 chapters. Is this the author of "Red Dawn"? ? He also wrote Ge Song? 😵😵😵, the author sold his account? There is a strong smell of the Prince's incognito game drama... Are you really a Ma Yuanist? I only feel the decadent atmosphere of the little bourgeoisie...

In the past, the Shang and Zhou dynasties seemed to have been cut off. I couldn't see how history had been reversed. I couldn't see the man who broke the sacrificial monopoly of knowledge and the aristocratic monopoly of rights and was finally counterattacked. With ten thousand feet on his feet, Emperor Xin was gone.

It's finally out, but why isn't it Steel Chaoge?

Some people in the book review area are so disgusting with their hypocrisy, let me briefly talk about some of the core propositions of Tuopai. First of all, Tuo advocated the theory of productivity. Before 1917, he denied the possibility of the song title on the grounds that the Russian economy was not developed enough. In fact, he was helping the Tsar suppress the song title. Secondly, the core of Tuo's theory is the so-called theory of continuous song names. This theory consists of three parts. 1. It is believed that the title of a song from the Discipline to the title of a socialist song can be achieved in one step and denies the staged nature of the song title. This is a typical Qu Bai and Chen Moxiu doctrine policy. 2. Denying the fame of the peasants, opposing the continued formation of a worker-peasant alliance in the social song title and the construction stage, and advocating the exploitation of the peasants. This is because they think the Soviets are not chaotic enough and want to break up the worker-peasant alliance. 3. The first victory against socialism must be achieved in all countries in the world at the same time. Before 1917, this was a revolution that suppressed the Russian song title because other countries had no song title. After 1917, it became a radical left, requiring Russia to give up its own victory to aid other Guo Jia songs, but did not pay attention to consolidating the existing base areas at all. Little did they know that a stable rear base area played a greater role in the song title, a proper replica of Li Lisan's line. Third, there are also serious problems with Trust's economic line. In agriculture, Trotsky advocated a policy of destruction of farmers and relied on exploiting farmers to obtain large amounts of cheap raw materials to obtain funds for so-called super-industrialization. But at the same time, what does his super-industrialization in industry look like? His younger brothers Radek and Krasin demanded surrender to foreign capital, allowing foreign capital to lease steel, oil, coal, electricity, railways and other lifeline industry enterprises, and handing over Soviet heavy industry to foreign capital. Trotskyist himself demanded that out of profit considerations, all large military factories be closed down and the money exploited from farmers be used to buy machines that they cannot produce and should not produce! This is what is called hyper-industrialization! Trust demanded that the Soviet Union maintain its status as an agricultural country, pit industry and agriculture against each other, ridicule farmers, exploit farmers, and rent rather than buy than rent. This is his economic line! Finally, Tozai has always maintained a separatist attitude in organization. He supported the theory of letting celebrities and opportunists deal with various large and small groups in the same office, and advocated pitting veteran cadres against young officials. Instead of seriously discussing issues at the political bureau meetings, they would read French novels! During the meeting, he always nodded in agreement. As a result, after the meeting, he immediately organized an opposition group to resist the collective decision and refused to change it despite repeated admonitions. This is the so-called virtue of Tuopai, a petty bourgeois chicken thief with red fruit! What kind of singer is he? Yudushka, who was a Menshevik until 1917?

From Red Dawn to 1852 to Revolutionary Song Dynasty, the protagonist does less and less and talks more and more. The beginning of Red Dawn was really good. So many people worked hard to survive. Chen Ke could plow the land, dig out manure, and write books. He would occasionally feel uneasy and confused during experiments, but he would feel at ease as soon as he worked. Such a protagonist is the Chen ** that attracts us.

I always want to say something about some recent events. But after thinking about it, in the end it is productivity and production relations. Our people have proven with their own actions that under the system of the dictatorship of the proletariat, we can already slightly resist the "primordial violence" that Mother Nature inflicts on mankind. This is the fruit of productivity that can be achieved by mobilizing billions of people through production relations. The people are proud of it, their own people admire it, and the enemies salivate over it. But people are always dissatisfied, in order to bear more fruits or even bigger fruits. We must further develop productivity, and to maintain or even expand existing productivity we must maintain or even expand existing production relations. Then the existing but incorrect production relations in the old society will be eliminated to make room for new production relations that can adapt to greater productivity. This process is never gentle, it is full of blood and life. The teacher said what should be said forty years ago. I myself only have a few sentiments that have been laid before us for a long time. We always win because we are right, and we never win because we win. There is never gray in the world, there is just black and white mixed together. The wheel of the times will lift an insect from the mud to a height of ten thousand feet, and will also push the insect from a height of ten thousand feet into the mud. And the people are the driving force of the wheel. Only the people are immortal.

I hope Hongmao can write another novel similar to Red Dawn. Red Dawn is so good.

I feel that the story is gradually smoothing out. Judging from the latest chapter, the author should not be engaged in medical-related majors, but he did check a lot of information. Let's talk about the kid with leg trauma first. First of all, the child was considered to have suffered a fall injury, which was like stepping on something in the air and then falling on an angular place, causing multiple scratches on both legs. It was also mentioned that a large blood vessel had ruptured. Considering hemorrhagic shock, there is only one superficial and large artery in the human leg, especially the thigh, which is the femoral artery. If this place is broken, the blood can reach a very high level. Then after the protagonist arrives, he should first apply pressure to stop the bleeding, that is, rinse the wound with normal saline, wrap it with gauze and compress it, add sandbags to apply pressure to stop the bleeding, apply a tourniquet if necessary, that is, ligate the proximal end of the heart, then open the intravenous channel, and infuse normal saline and isotonic sugar saline. One point here is that it is not recommended to infuse normal saline for shock rehydration and volume expansion, because too much sodium chloride can easily cause hyperchloremia. Currently, it is recommended to infuse sodium lactate Ringer's solution or Luca and other crystalloid solutions with complex calcium and potassium ions and low chloride ion content, and infuse colloid liquids such as succinyl gel injection in a ratio of 2:1-3:1. Colloidal liquids stay in the extracellular fluid for a long time, have good volume expansion effects, and are more effective than crystalloids in stabilizing hemodynamics. Of course, the protagonist did not have this condition at the time and could not use colloid to expand the volume. At the same time, considering that the patient had lost too much blood, in order to avoid further dilution of the blood and hypoxia, he chose blood transfusion. For blood transfusion, choose whole blood or blood from two people. It would not be surprising at all if the child develops a transfusion reaction later. In other words, the child may die from anaphylactic shock or even hemolytic reaction after blood transfusion. In addition, if this child is considered to be injured by a high fall, he needs to be checked for pelvic fractures. There are many large blood vessels near the pelvis, which are prone to rupture bleeding and large amounts of bleeding. Because there is ample space in the abdominal and pelvic cavity, bleeding is difficult to stop and difficult to detect, so the child may also die from intra-abdominal bleeding. As for the wound on his leg, secondary suturing should be considered after the bleeding has been stopped. Considering that the patient's basic nutrition was poor, it was possible that he died of infection. The above is a case discussion. Of course, I am not a trauma or emergency doctor, so I am not very good at it. The information in the book is not comprehensive, and a lot of it is guesswork. In the next chapter, the protagonist's teacher expressed his high opinion of the protagonist, saying that the protagonist focuses on the important parts rather than the most eye-catching ones. I think this sentence makes sense. This shows that the protagonist is very attentive when observing the operation, so he understands every step of the operation. This requires a lot of experience, and there are many tricks that you can't understand, so you have to get started and operate them. Therefore, it is gratifying that Feng Mao has finally started surgery. The following points about appendicitis and cholecystectomy are generally correct, but now these two surgeries are basically performed laparoscopically. For appendicitis, you need to look for McFarland's point. If cholecystectomy requires laparotomy, a large incision will be made. It's basically the same as liver resection, because the liver needs to be turned over to find the gallbladder. I guess the anesthesia in the novel mainly relies on laughing gas. Maybe there are already barbiturates as sedatives? It is estimated that procaine and other local anesthetics are still far away from each other, and morphine has not yet appeared as an analgesic. Although the concept of sterility has emerged, it is really difficult to perform surgery at this time.

I have to say that this book is very poorly written. The male protagonist's emotions are the same as those of a 10-year-old child. As an adult time traveler, it is very inconsistent. And there is no such seeker mentality that breaks everything in this book.

The author published a new book in ta du, he quit the Qing Dynasty and returned to his old profession.

It feels awkward to start on Western territory. I hope it is not the strong historical line of the white-skinned people, at least the Dongfang in the background of the story can keep the family business.

It's true that my grades are poor. I can understand if I give up, but don't give up on writing books.

The language is consistently wordy. Persons and names are repeated, connectives are missing or used indiscriminately, the details of the characters' actions are long-winded, there are many theoretical dialogues, and there are very few dialogues except for character descriptions. After reading several books by the author, these problems become more and more serious. In addition, his storytelling ability and theory-telling ability are always good.

Hongmao always uses speculation to illustrate the narrative, and after fixing the narrative from the perspective of the protagonist, no matter whether Le Mans, the Grand Duke or the general, all speak in the same tone, they also especially like to write that these people are strong and speak very "high-level", followed by a large part of the protagonist's inner drama to express the true meaning of these high-level words, and where the advanced words lie. The progression of the story is limited to the description from the perspective of the protagonist, which is a bit confusing. To be honest, it is really thankless to do this without Squid's writing style, especially since the author also wants to describe the historical torrent, trying to see the big from the small, forcing the Grand Duke and others to describe the superstructure, and also relying on Mary and others to describe the low-level civilians, but in the end neither of them is clearly written. I guess the author is describing the development of the protagonist's personality and outlook on his own. The protagonist's current personality and performance are really unpleasant. It's obvious that he wants to imitate Le Mans, the Grand Duke and other strong men, but he can't imitate him. His arrogance is quite high. In many places, his emotional intelligence is so low that he doesn't even have basic courtesy. Of course, I think the protagonist still has many advantages, but the author's narrative style makes the protagonist too unlikable.

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